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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1076 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 9/19/2009 9:22:59 PM | Miniture Vacations
December, left on the wall
Thoughts of leaving
The cold outside
Say what you say when it rains
Either way, we should drown them on the road
The little notes we pass through our eyes | |
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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 9/19/2009 9:40:20 PM | "The little notes we pass through our eyes"
Please don't drown them on the road - let them be. Hey this was worth that other guy taking over the last spot on the page. | |
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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 9/19/2009 10:20:28 PM | | ^^^ "I second that emotion" ... loving what you are doing with just a few lines! Have you ever seen any of the Picasso sketches... just 5 or 6 strokes and ... art! | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1079 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 9/20/2009 3:25:24 PM | thanks, gals.
Haven't seen many Picassos at the gallery. I suspect Europe scooped them all.
I actually want to retitle that one, maybe call it, Blue Rain. | |
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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 9/20/2009 6:56:07 PM | just 5 or 6 strokes and ... art!
You know, John Lennon's were like that too....I was always awestruck...it's like he was dipped in talent at birth or something, to be so good at two creative things... | |
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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 9/20/2009 7:51:23 PM |
December, left on the wall
Thoughts of leaving
The cold outside
Say what you say when it rains
Either way, we should drown them on the road
The little notes we pass through our eyes
om tiddley pom...that is effing amazing | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1082 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 9/20/2009 7:56:39 PM | hey, B, Only two? he had more than that darlin'...play, write, sing, draw... lead...
Yeah, I remember seeing some of John's sketches. I wanted to buy one at the time, it was only $150, (too much for me back then) I remember liking them though.
edit, oh cheers pickles...you gals got me all puffed up now. | |
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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 9/22/2009 8:15:37 PM | on the corner
as you are
dancing
puffing
struting
ranting and rosary rattling
freed of his uncerimonious blue tarp
Anpu takes it all in
and i
eat my lunch | |
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Posted: 9/22/2009 8:26:01 PM | ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Hahaha...loved that one too....
fook I'm wondering where the eff has my muse gone? | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1085 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/3/2009 12:06:18 AM | Thoughts From The Park
Here is a white screen
as clear as her face.
Thoughts passing
as quick as
a face on a street.
I imagine my dog
sleeping by my feet,
Rain falling
on a nearby mountain.
Summer's done its job.
September,
sleeping.
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a wee thanks to
bm, and goat
for that one | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1086 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/5/2009 1:06:44 AM | To Get In/Out
This white page
falling on a nearby mountain
September, sleeping
Listen how the old house creaks
Old hunter, with one lame eye
Here you are again
Back under the stairs with your
Milk-door window
One more winter you say?
You should walk the halls
in a building that wears
this white coat! | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1087 | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1088 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/5/2009 10:32:04 AM | ‘The White Ghosts of Cobourg
There are a few that will haunt you.
There is even one that whispers
“come inside”
Every time I
Drive past | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1089 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/5/2009 10:53:18 AM | Intended
December, left on the wall
Thoughts of leaving
The cold outside
Say what you say when it rains
Either way, we should leave them on the floor
The little notes we pass through our eyes | |
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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/5/2009 2:30:37 PM |
The little notes we pass through our eyes
Absolutely love that om tiddley pom....
ringy dingy laters eh  | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1091 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/5/2009 6:21:13 PM | Yeah, I liked that line, too, though I have this haunting feeling I might of subconsciously picked that line up from some place. I'm always afraid of that.
just popping out right now.
say, Thursday, 5: @ Idiot? | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1093 | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1094 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/6/2009 8:32:20 PM | The Name Of a Poem
Sometimes they stand in front of a fountain
hunched over
with their hands out
and say to tourists
‘Si si porco miserabile’ | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1095 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/11/2009 1:27:22 PM | Hands, so full of day.
I should put down my head,
go carve a name in a tree?
That is how it is at fifty one,
the beginning of a slow march.
I should remember to bring a book.
One with poems
and holes
where I can drop my eyes
‘You don’t have to work hard
or suffer to be in paradise’
They were good soldiers.
Do not order them, that is my occupation.
Do not ask of their condition.
Leave them, in the middle of their own march
with their own knife.
It is not a knife of hatred. | |
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Posted: 10/14/2009 5:06:45 PM |
I should remember to bring a book.
One with poems
and holes
where I can drop my eyes
yeah...
don't know if i exactly caught your sentiment but, definitely felt one
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1097 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/19/2009 5:17:28 PM | ^ well, yeah, they do get vague... I could/should work on that.
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Two Cruises Up Shelter Valley Road
It happened that
Each ride took me past
the graveyard
where my father was
smiling
In fact,
all along the hillsides
of Shelter Valley Road,
families of trees were
yellow and gold. | |
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Posted: 10/23/2009 7:04:07 PM | what a lovely image there om.
as for being vague, one of the joys of writing is that it is subject to the interpretation of the audience. i always love to hear it when someone gets a meaning from my words that i didn't anticipate. just revel in the fact that you stir things in your readers.
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1099 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/27/2009 6:55:08 PM | Two Stone Wheels
You were always estrange
like the distance between us
I could only believe that
it was suppose to mean something
So I didn’t stop
to stand over you
like a mourning son
In fact,
when I drove by
I imagined you
standing there
grinning
like you knew
how motionless
and joyful
a distance can be
riding a stone up
Shelter Valley road | |
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