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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/29/2009 4:14:32 PM | hey ya Om really like two stone wheels. Good to see your still around.
Undone
The day had come
I did not see the night
Therefore I noticed not the light
Yet I knew
Change had come
I had come undone
Lost in an invisible space
Try as I may to find my place
I roam til the light became blinding
The truth brutal
The trials unbearable
Then I reached out
Found my place
in this invisible space
Tree2009 | |
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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 10/29/2009 8:14:15 PM | | I love when you write about a place I have acutally been and can see it in my mind as well as feel the words in your poem. Good poem! | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1103 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 11/2/2009 3:22:01 PM | Hi folks
Just a quick howdy, and thanks to, TNT, Tree-cat, and AF. Good to see you all.
It's a great road to bike up, AF! The Fall colours made it even more enjoyable.
Seems like, "reaching out", is always a good 101 lesson for us. Thanks for leaving your hat, there, cat..;) Sounds like you had a nice resolve.
ok, finally a whole week off. Yes!
Let's see if I have a wee ku before I split this city, again.
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when you are 
don't go into a 
and forget the
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oh, let's call that an iconku
later, eh. | |
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| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 11/4/2009 5:21:11 PM | iconku... that's brilliant!
enjoy your time away from the loomimg king
:D | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1105 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 11/8/2009 8:54:25 PM | ^it's not original, just lazy of me.
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A Critiquing Poem
'Saved by a Poem:
The Transformative
Power of Words
an evening of poetry, music and
inspiration with Kim Rosen'
I was in the nose-bleed section of the living room.
The dining chair was uncomfortable!
I left after the first half
Meditation music, and poetry ?
Nah,
last night a DJ saved my life | |
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aka,om
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Joined: 12/6/2008
Msg: 1106 | |
| Leaves, and other noises
Posted: 11/8/2009 9:18:14 PM | A Myopic Blur
From a throbbing sky
A pair of piper cubs
Land on a lake | |
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