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Posted: 7/5/2007 8:31:59 PM | Hey The Super; dude I read your profile and I thought your interesting guy but did a poor job relating yourself with people. You gave up on yourself in the beginning and came back abit with what interests you like; piercing and tattooes. Its not a good idea to say you don't know what kind of girl you want but you want to meet someone to see where things go and that your 'savvy'. The impression I get is that your shallow and you use your charm to get girls in bed. You make yourself look like a player; if thats your goal congratulations you succeed in my mind. I'm glad you explain that the baby in your arms was your nephew because that could of been misunderstood as your kid.
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Posted: 7/5/2007 8:57:53 PM | | Hey Dreamfiller; like you name because kinda goes with your dorky cool guy persona. I bet you think your a nice guy but don't take that as a negative because that is a good compatiable gift when your swimming with alot of losers and dead beats when the ladies want someone sensitive and sensual [wink wink]. I think you over analyse too much because when you started mentioning microbiologist I'm like oh boy this guy is a total dork. Dude being a dork is cool because you have charm so you gotta keep things simple with afew jokes and not over do it. | |
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Posted: 7/5/2007 9:33:46 PM | | Ok did I say something profound and accurate or was I ignorant and dumb in my interruption of your profiles; write me back because you feedback is appreciated; c'mon even if you have to utter two words in response please be generous. | |
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Posted: 7/6/2007 9:33:47 AM | Hello cyclern41 I could use some advice Im new to this whole internet dating could you give me a few tips and juge my pic I will not cry like sissy boy..... thax | |
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Posted: 7/6/2007 11:13:39 AM | | You guys missed my profile out. is it that bad!!!! i need some help please :) | |
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| I'll tell you what is wrong with your profile...
Posted: 7/9/2007 7:08:05 AM | Jonny Flares:
http://www.plentyoffish.com/member4288547.htm
title: interesting title, good
pics: good pic, need a head shot though
narration: fill out all stats (profession – can be general, just to give someone an idea of what you do. When someone leaves this blank I think they are unemployed = bad) other than that I think it is written well, a good profile. It’s not too long and interesting to read.
Faux pas: leaving stats blank
Conclusion: get a head shot in there, fill out profile completely, shows you are serious about finding someone.
Rating: 8 out of 10
Good luck and keep fishing
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Posted: 7/9/2007 7:26:17 AM | Charlette:
http://www.plentyoffish.com/member4442826.htm
“Please review my profile. I never get any replys to my e-mails”
title: good
pics: need one more, shows more of you
narration: “I would like to meet a person with likes that are simular to mine, for a friendly relationship that may or may not turn into something more. I like all kinds of food. Mexican, Indian Cuban, spicy, steak, chicken fish. Iike the ocean and Gulf for boating, fishing, diving and snorkeling. I also like to read, listen to music,movies,dining but hate long walks on beach that everybody puts in their description. A nice glass of wine or a cup of coffee will do.”
Watch your spelling (similar, semi-quiet). When listing likes just put – all kinds of food, ocean, boating, fishing, diving, snorkeling, reading, music, movies, dining, wine, coffee. The specifics are listed under interests. Then you need to list qualities you are looking for in a mate. Be specific, personality, activity level, lifestyle.
First date – don’t write we should bring our own vehicles, I think this should be done anyway. Put simply that meet at a quiet place for coffee or drinks, the rest is usually done anyway.
Faux pas: not enough information to know if you would be compatible.
Conclusion: nice looking lady, however being you are advanced in age, you may have a hard time finding a date online. I get many emails from men up to 70 years old. I think they feel they can get younger women online or something, I don’t know what it is. Perhaps if you were put more into your narration you may get more emails, widen your search, expand your age range. There may be men out there 58 and younger or 70 and older that look your age and are as active as you. That may be your biggest problem is the age range.
Rating: 6 out of 10
Good luck and keep fishing
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| I'll tell you what is wrong with your profile...
Posted: 7/9/2007 7:42:51 AM | SweetlilNative:
http://www.plentyoffish.com/member4416263.htm
Title: tells me you didn’t put much thought into it. Looking for….. don’t ask a question for a title
Pics: from the looks of your pics, it looks like you are a hooker in a few. I’m being honest. If you don’t want someone to think you are a hooker, I’d take out all but the last two, and I don’t think the last two are very good pics either. Your hair is messed up in the last one, and the 2nd to last one you can’t really see your shape. Redo pics.
Narration: misleading – nice girls don’t post pics like that. Okay your age really shows with this. Sorry, but a running car? Shouldn’t that be prerequisite to dating? I don’t know. Your narration is very egotistical, not many if any men are attracted to that. It comes across as high maintenance. Just list things you like to do, what you would like in a mate. It also comes across as very superficial. Write something like – I’m attracted to taller men, thin-ave-muscular build, employed, kind and can be a little crazy at time. It sounds less demanding and superficial.
Anyone who’s interests include sleeping sounds boring! Get it out of there! Who would list that? Wow. Amazes me. What about it interests you? Do you study sleep patterns, dreams, sleep deprivation in lab rats? Just kidding, I would take that out.
Don’t ever write, “i’m cute” show insecurity. Yeah sounds funny doesn’t it? But it does. It is like you are affirming your belief in yourself that you are cute. I’m sure you’ve been told that all your life, but it isn’t something you’d put in a dating profile.
Faux pas: “if a relationship happens, it happens” – shows you don’t really care if someone contacts you or not. Why even have a profile. Wording is everything. How about – I am happy in life, but am hoping for a relationship”
Conclusion: redo this whole profile if you are in fact serious about getting a date out of it and not an escort job.
Rating: 2 out of 10
Good luck and keep fishing
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| I'll tell you what is wrong with your profile...
Posted: 9/24/2007 7:43:44 PM | Hey,
Could I get an appraisal of my profile? I'd like to know what its fair market value would be, and also would like to know if it needs some rehab....new doors, windows, that type of thing....
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