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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/2/2008 9:36:40 AM | Thanks Alyosha...that was a bit of a "mind bender".
Brizo....if you only knew! Hugs!!
Silver...I love reading your writing too. Hope you find someone that sweeps you away!
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Boot-hill Church Bells
“I love you Mal” “I know Mickey, I’ve loved you since the day we met”
Because you kissed my name beneath the pale smudge of a diminished horizon I see an angel posse gathering on the ceiling Outlaw lips daring the bullet to holster the gun Michelangelo’s revolution drawn on the altar wall dark man, I stand with you | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/4/2008 12:02:32 AM | Home - Alone
When tomorrows are yesterdays and the shouldve’s spent a gondola slips across the moon’s idiom the gondolier - polling passengers - dreaming our eyes sail over a barren pock marked crucible. Slaughter drop the s laughter, mislabeled The extinct skin of the violin tolls it’s weeping song - In concert we adore her faces revolving The grave tides turning our remains Paradise heartbroken, battered beneath our carefree feet | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/4/2008 6:33:53 AM |
Thanks Alyosha...that was a bit of a "mind bender".
Variations on a mind-bender
Bend your mind; straight it’s a glycerine super-highway speeding you past the scenery you need in order to live.
Extend your mind to include the minds of one or two others and especially of non-mind.
Lend your mind to those whose minds have grown lazy or fat.
Spend your mind that you may replenish it when it is emptied out. | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/4/2008 7:04:11 AM | Un-bend your mind release the twisted dura mater that holds you in contempt release your mind from the constraints of sympathy in a world full of woe begotten miseries atrocity piled upon atrocity in a convoluted conflict of certainty that you are right.
you guys got me going...my mind is permanently bent though I fear... | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/4/2008 5:53:27 PM | everyone is puking at my house paints a pretty picture, eh? I remembered to lysol everything 'cept my mouse now, I can just imagine the cooties crawlin round yanno?
I could eat shyt that would knock a buzzard off a puke wagon and then wash it down with a quart of mescal distilled with a worm in it but, when it comes down to kid germs getting thrown into the mix I huff lysol and drink some bleach spray that shyt all over the place then go wash my hands and my face and I still feel nasty, anyway know what I mean?
oh.. Hi, darlin thought I'd toss my ramble here once again I should write something prettier forgot I was in the house of Yoko I've about worn out my digressin and my "yanno's" yanno?
here's the poetic part, I guess
ever watched a sunflower keep turning it's face to the sun all day? you glow like that even when it's cloudy started fingerpainting with words quit wearing blush
I guess I should quit trying to turn the ramble into an art form that only works during a really cool storm that, and I've only got one beer left I should write something about the Indian Princess yeah, prolly not, huh I kinda want to, though but, I'm gonna waste this beer on a game of cards adios, amigos
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/4/2008 7:35:37 PM | Alyosha and Ravin....seems to me you both walk a righteous path. Thanks for the poems, always a mind full!
Brawny, puppy...mi casa es su casa! Hope the kids get better soon! Just stay inoculated! | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/9/2008 12:19:58 PM | Geography Be Damned
For you, I would stretch my voice into a moaning dolcin wind lifting waves of prairie wheat to sail you across the great divide
For you, my hands would claw a meadow through the insidious mountains and vulgar clouds that shadow your westward eyes
For you, I would paint the rainforest green of day and the secret black of night on the wings of songbirds woven into the arms of a lullaby For you and I belong | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/9/2008 7:04:12 PM | Untitled
I covered that scar when we met thinking myself flawed, you wrote about a sculpted legacy, marbled travertine, texture and so I drew you near
Arching the lowered brow that dragged your weight across the floor, painting out the tethers that bound a noble mane
We’ll tell them not to look with disgust if your ink stained hands and my blue veined teeth tear each other’s skin it’s merely the final consummation
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/12/2008 9:35:08 PM | She Knew
I’ll admit, I laughed standing graveside - not irreverently more like- sweaty, repellent, tasteless spontaneously grotesque in the silence supersized combo three word trills of affirmation because I still lived
Dodged that sickle un-scythed grass still greening, crowing, growing I covered you knowing, I’d be mown down someday but it wasn’t that day and suddenly I had an uncontrollable need to get laid… but before I did, I prayed your new digs were fantastic. You always loved granite counters and I smiled cause the marker was smooth, cool to the touch, beautiful, like you and I remembered everything we 'd Ouija’d with a candle and a bottle of wine...still, I went home laughing and loved everyone left cause I still lived so did they ~ ~ ~ so do you
(post script…this is about a friend that died 25 years ago…tomorrow. Cheers Chris) | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/13/2008 7:44:01 AM | I somehow wish you had done without that last line because it just doesn't have the concrete reality of so much in this wonderful poem, e.g.
I had an uncontrollable need to get laid…
which I loved, not because I'm a horny old dude, but because it was so honest, and so understandable: Eros rising to fend off Thanatos! | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/13/2008 10:01:13 AM | sophia amazing things you burst with in these pages! hugs !
For you, I would paint the rainforest green of day and the secret black of night on the wings of songbirds woven into the arms of a lullaby For you and I belong
Very lovely my friend!
Telltale signs of midnites shrine Moon is ever painting blind Skies are ever floating waves darkness painting grey blue haze Faint the sounds of birds they call silently while I am hiding Wanting so to dance among lunar visions drill my core language of a celestialstar haunting my sole being while amidst the mist minds fleeing like a monkey with a whip! Damn , somebody find my ship!
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/14/2008 12:39:49 AM | Thanks Alyosha..the poem is exactly how that day went... She was too young and I was glad to be alive and love is the best part of being alive.
The last line was just for Chris. She does still live for those of us who loved her. A small indulgence for a great friend.
mmmmmmmy! You're turning out to be quite a jewel. Thanks for your wonderful poem! | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/15/2008 12:05:26 AM | Lift-off
Gravity pulls I want to flake like spring’s sandpaper skin Molting cicada wings launch a timbal choir the hymn of trees
But the grave cycle spins cocoons erupt to fold again Gravity pulls me down teach me to fly turn my face to the wind | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/15/2008 11:18:28 AM | A Brief Contemplation on a Teeny Weenie (weenie "frankfurter," 1906, with slang sense of "penis" following soon after, from Ger. wienerwurst "Vienna sausage" (see wiener). Meaning "ineffectual person" is 1963; pejorative sense via penis shape, or perhaps from weenie in the sense of "small" (see wee).
I suppose if I had to I could take the time to peel off the sheep guts separate the sawdust from the mouse shit pile on the embellishment it needs grind the leftover gristle in my teeth try to choke it down with relish ack ack ack.
On second thought in a world of prime rib a pork wienerworst just isn’t worth the effort. | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/15/2008 12:19:36 PM | *smiling, cause just yesterday a coworker said, he has shrunk an inch. I told him not to worry, so has my peenie..:/ but that poem cuts right to the chase, sophia. strong piece, methinks. still diggin'em! | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/15/2008 12:31:22 PM | (weenie "frankfurter," 1906, with slang sense of "penis" following soon after, from Ger. wienerwurst "Vienna sausage" (see wiener). Meaning "ineffectual person" is 1963; pejorative sense via penis shape, or perhaps from weenie in the sense of "small" (see wee).
just a little poem for all the ladies!
My mother's penis is hot pink. I found it in her drawer when I was six, underneath her nightgowns, turned it on and watched it hum through the orange shag, leaving a trail like a small aimless torpedo. After a series of after-school afternoons, it would die in a fading whir at my feet, only to be refreshed for play a few days later. My young single mother: How many nights — lonely and wanting — did you go to your penis and find it dead? How many emergency flashlights, how many babydolls' backs did you rip open in the ****ing dark searching for just two goddamn batteries with one orgasm's worth of voltage left? Let me apologize. While roaring jetplanes took off around you all day at work, I was home checking your penis for power. It was my electric sword, my magic pen, my microphone, a neon rocketship, and once, I confess, I even used it to mix chocolate Quik into my milk. On the day it was missing, I stripped your dresser, your closet, the bed, refolded every panty, nightgown and camisole to cover my trail. For a good two months, I'd roll my hand through your underthings. But your penis was gone. Now that I'm grown, tell me. I wonder: Did you take it from me on purpose? Because, you should understand: I know I loved it more than you did.
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/15/2008 12:45:39 PM | Thanks Ommie...from what I've read, you could lose a mile of peenie and still write in monumental style!
Oh mmmmmmmmmy...very naughty LMAO | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/15/2008 6:40:00 PM | | The topic is getting quite racey here in fingerpainting *grin* Mmmmmy that was priceless!! Now you make me wonder if the kids go through my drawers LOL | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/15/2008 9:41:10 PM | okay AF...I'll slow it down a bit LOL! ---------------------------------------------- The Rules of Engagement
I heard the owl’s shadow sweep over temperate crickets sharpening their wings there, by the intermittent stream. His stealth interrupted my sorrow, then it interrupted my sleep.
In the low light of stars, I felt the burrowing eyes fix over his shoulder, my pulse a rarebit on the run, I stood still. Remembering, I’d been waiting for this moment to come. | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/16/2008 4:15:35 AM | This is “naughty,” I think, only in the sense that all of us are naughty, that the truth is often both knotty and naughty! But there are some glorious (and sometimes very funny) line in this, e.g.:
My mother's penis is hot pink. I found it in her drawer when I was six, underneath her nightgowns, turned it on and watched it hum
My young single mother: How many nights — lonely and wanting — did you go to your penis and find it dead? How many emergency flashlights, how many babydolls' backs did you rip open in the ****ing dark searching for just two goddamn batteries with one orgasm's worth of voltage left?
and once, I confess, I even used it to mix chocolate Quik into my milk.
For a good two months, I'd roll my hand through your underthings. But your penis was gone. Now that I'm grown, tell me. I wonder: Did you take it from me on purpose? Because, you should understand: I know I loved it more than you did.
And the following may have “slowed it down” but only in the sense of overt sexual references, not in the least as fine, fine poetry:
The Rules of Engagement
I heard the owl’s shadow sweep over temperate crickets sharpening their wings there, by the intermittent stream. His stealth interrupted my sorrow, then it interrupted my sleep.
In the low light of stars, I felt the burrowing eyes fix over his shoulder, my pulse a rarebit on the run, I stood still. Remembering, I’d been waiting for this moment to come. | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/16/2008 6:42:59 PM |
In the low light of stars, I felt the burrowing eyes fix over his shoulder, my pulse a rarebit on the run, I stood still. Remembering, I’d been waiting for this moment to come.
My Sophia...this really didn't slow anything down... only fixed my imagination...lol  | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/16/2008 8:33:37 PM |
my pulse a rarebit on the run, I stood still. Remembering, I’d been waiting for this moment to come.
Sophia, reminds me of the Vampire Chronicles, those who offered up their throats...
mmmmmy, that poem was really good!
watched it hum through the orange shag, leaving a trail like a small aimless torpedo
wonderful imagery....
My young single mother: How many nights — lonely and wanting — did you go to your penis and find it dead? How many emergency flashlights, how many babydolls' backs did you rip open in the ****ing dark searching for just two goddamn batteries with one orgasm's worth of voltage left?
ironic humor
It was my electric sword, my magic pen, my microphone, a neon rocketship, and once, I confess, I even used it to mix chocolate Quik into my milk.
I like the childish realism of this...
Did you take it from me on purpose? Because, you should understand: I know I loved it more than you did.
truth... | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/16/2008 9:35:07 PM | Hi Alyosha. mmmmy's poem is hot pink. I really loved all the imagery and as a young divorced mother, it even invoked a memory or two...LMAO.
Thanks for the kind words on mine too! -------------------------------------------------------- Mmmmmy (I never get the right number of m's) I think you have a need for speed. Go girl! -------------------------------------------------------- Brizo...I always found that reading about a Vampire's kiss (Anne Rice, Bram Stoker etc) left me feeling a little heady. It is a fairly sensual thing, to offer someone your neck. Remember the movie The Hunger with Bowie and Catherine Deneuve...I still think about that. | |
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/17/2008 2:48:30 PM | just a haiku or however you spell it three lines guess I suck at this
...sigh... lol
toasted garlic and onions sautee in the pan fresh tomatoes in with them doctoring up a cheap can of sauce extra oregano, of course
double battered the chicken parmesean flour, eggs, and then bread crumbs it would have been easier to order a sub but, I ain't dumb It's Helen's mom's birthday fvcking eh... March 17th ...an easy one to remember
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| Fingerpainting Posted: 3/17/2008 6:51:00 PM | Rules of Engagement, Beautiful, Sophia!
well, bout time I left, umm,
'Something'
Paul, Dear Boy
Your Long haired Lady was Here, in the news, Today
How could you let that Blackbird Make a Teddy Boy out of you
I know it must have been A Long and Winding Road But you were a fool to Let It Be
And you thought it was Getting Better?
Maybe I’m amazed at your Silly Love Song But I know, The Lovely Linda would of had a Blue Bird All over that Vanilla sky Knowing that she Listened To What The Man Said | |
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