| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/13/2007 8:30:05 PM | chow...lol slows things down that usually chop the slip off some round utensil that sticks up way out my noodle just had to boodle the ka whole kit n my way around i found content and to my bother you o me shoo o the sense go away after coming back a long o drain sound is fecund with what i find and somehow mad like a hound dog I seek your scent looknforsome1... good n | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/13/2007 8:38:50 PM | chow...LOL what can I say this isn't how i planned to end my day I thought I would read for awhile but that dang poem made me smile can't quite figure it out but give me time line by line or q me in before i loose my mind im usually quite in tune now I'm a raving loon *LOL* | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/13/2007 8:41:03 PM | mad like a hound dog I seek your scent bulge in my trousers like a pup tent if I don't get some soon I'll probably vent they won't say he's coming, they'll say there he went
meanwhile in the sludge up there in the sky the monkey and bear ate apple pie found half a worm and didnt cry the dogs in the sea never knew why
crepiscular hordes of maggotty men kept falling over again and again if they stand up; I'll tell you when so we can push them over again
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/13/2007 9:21:43 PM | so we can push them over again i'm so slow id probably be hit by a train so i'm gonna try this one more time and even keep it in rhyme i tried to delete not to repeat the other one is still there oh well maybe no one will care so on I go trying another all I can say is Oh Brother well least im having fun now im done | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/13/2007 10:22:10 PM | Now I'm done I've had my fun [my voices are much quieter] another pill and then I will try harder to excite her
She just lies there gaudy ribbons in her hair presenting many chances where I can play as I dare
wonderfully lithe shining bright blue eyes all I could desire really lights my fire
OH NO Fancy That She's puntured and went flat .. .
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/14/2007 5:52:02 AM | she's puntured and went flat like an old worn out tire even her brain cells are fat but it's like preaching to the chior
my sepia toned features ,scary if you got something to say buyers be wary dating sales on E-bay
how I long for a ship to relate to Don't let it slip that someone may like (love) you
I treat others as I treat myself self abuse is really great sitting on a shelf how long before the expiration date
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/14/2007 7:55:14 AM | the expiration date the everlasting wait excitement of being late uncertainty of fate
anomalies of time effects of too much wine listen for the chime synchronise in mime
your battles with your weight the balance on the slate phoning for a date numbers you love to hate | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/15/2007 8:00:29 AM | numbers you love to hate numbers that give you a fright one is the lonliest,not great just ask the three dog night
I can handle most numbers alright it's words that get me uptight like hello ,goodbye,and goodnight how ya doin? are ya doin alright?
you smile and nod and say your'e fine but insides like a dried up pod you say your'e okay but your'e lyin | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/15/2007 12:04:59 PM | You say you're okay but you're lying your face tells the truth -- you've been crying
I see, hear and feel the pain in your voice and I want to help but don't have the choice
So I'm walking away and you're not "okay" but nothing I can say would reach you today | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/15/2007 1:30:41 PM |
would reach you today a silky sinew of wing would sing a chrysalis of burgeoning is a devastate belladonna and spring rain the edge of a determined corpse sea sponge and riding storms outside the norms a pupae lives a concussion of other consciousness while listening to all but unable to move through til the hanged man has had his life aquitted
a patience learns a patience of love even after the deva state of morphing and transposed dreams from fertile sacrifices
not apathy or victimhood just a letting go
to the reign a power bigger than me
besides
--i am powerless
an attitude and it feels o k to not know everything my wings want to sing aware
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/15/2007 10:21:20 PM | to sing, aware of life and dance to its beat arms open wide heart embracing dancing inside with hope, alive a tune no-one hears one everyone feels heart song from a child enriched by life a tapestry of tunes discordant harmony becomes your symphony | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 12:20:41 AM | becomes your symphony as a well played tympani softly building to a thunderous roar soon to fade and be heard no more as life we lead in our own quiet way in winds that bend and gently sway forever is now forever is today | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 9:38:07 AM | forever is today no that can't be true not a street going one way forever comes marching through
never is such a terrible word sometimes makes a show possible to be heard falling like the icy snow
in all of life's happenings one thing is for sure never,forever today wait and see what tomorrow brings | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 10:16:34 AM | wait and see what tomorrow brings i have waited tomorrow brought the same as today my good tomorrow s were but a handful of my millions of todays i have given up surprise me | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 10:25:01 AM | surprise me sneak up from behind and say boo! bring me flowers for no reason call me up out of the blue feed me oysters out of season surprise me with a party or just be you whatever you do don't be ordinary we all should be the surpriser,or the surprisee sometime | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 12:20:57 PM | sometime today I'll think of you I love you as myself will you pause and feel it smiling go on live your life but know my love goes with you warm and constant | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 2:41:28 PM | constant is the sound of her voice though she sleeps I still hear the loving lips of phrase that word every sweet sound she makes.
constant is the thought of her love though the times have been back breaking hard as stone making pyramids from our love.
constant is the sound of life. children making games from worlds unseen, yet true and as real as the constant sound inside you. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 6:57:54 PM | sound inside you inside me that chattering of restless ghouls fretfull bleating offers fleeting sustenance to other fools
for broken hearted I once farted in a bed so warm she then left as I bereft waited as the blow flies swarm
will she ever [no; not ever] venture passed this way this I know I don't think so foul miasmas still hold sway
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 7:37:12 PM | foul miasmas still hold sway it blocks the sun and blackens the day.
wretched war cries still ring true the soldiers run under skies of silk blue.
head long and fast we swing our sword swift is the hand from which our blood has poor'd
yet solom and bleek entwines our voice strong our stand for it is not I but they who have made this choice. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 7:49:11 PM | for it is not I but they who have made this choice as I [shivering] listen to the lonely voice as the last of my memories [if memories they were] proclaims the death of innocence and daintily now swerves into foul repugnance with offerings of joy a final dance of one last chance as sacrifices toy
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 8:11:10 PM | as sacrifices toy
..........................the ancient ways have risen
..............no words for the past
.........only thought that leaves me thinking.
as sacrifices toy
..............................I bleed for the love I have lost
.................yet feel the steelly blade of woe
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 10:37:14 PM | .............carving my heart for its dinner it thought it was on a winner until it came to understand [in this misbegotten land] life and death were always mine for I am not one of your kind I live on bile and raw deceit embalming sacrifices reach enrapturing in my dark desire eternally in napalms fire
so you fools who feed off me welcome to black sanctuary grasp your knife; grip your fork fill your mouth so you can't talk linger in my delicious taste never let my liver waste so soon you'll find you will be forever in my sanctuary
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 10:42:58 PM | Forever in my sanctuary lost in your mistaken identity gone is the heart.... wind has taken up life left you broken mind is unspoken memory is simply a lost token I blindly fly in your space no one sees your face elusive in flight you cannot see heart that lives in me! Know that when you do......... remember It will be another December! | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 10:46:54 PM | another December long will I remember that welcome "good morning" uttered without warning offering something forbidding everything yet forever welcoming
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 12/16/2007 10:56:43 PM | yet forever welcoming her arms collapsed around me holding my breath I waited for the sea of kisses to hinder my words and pull me back to the reason I loved her. | |
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