| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 6:41:11 AM | the world feels better when bathed in your brilliance
though the wise will not look direct
aglow with smiles to feed all the while
some use you just to inspect
oh what can they detect
is it a kind of neglect when they look away
or is it out of respect or play
like any day you shine
defining all the lines
the darkness must stay away | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 7:06:32 AM | the darkness must stay away
so I’ll lit the light blue dream candles
lighting the road for destiny’s sight
to find it’s way to my home someday
until then I’ll stay up late
dreaming dreams of blissful days
playing like fool was your game
making me look your murky way
playing is all you can do
misery is your loving way
one day you will cry my way
shaking the hands of right karma
karma will burn your heart deep
that’s when
you’ll feel the pain I feel | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 8:21:10 AM | you'll feel the pain I feel
cause karma keeps it real
the wrong that you have done to me
let's you know what to expect in your destiny
what goes around
comes back around
dont start whining now
I dont even wanna hear a sound
you started this by your wrongs
now you're ready to scream a sad song
whatever length of time you did your wrongs
it will come back on you 7x's long
so you may think you got away with it
one day you will be in deep regret
so dont worry about me seeking revenge
cause karma is on a revenge binge
so I shall move forward
and never worry to go off my destiny's track
hope you can handle what you started
cause one day it will snap back | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 8:54:48 AM | cause one day it will snap back
hitting you so hard like lightening
in the heart that has no love
but game and play and mischievous ways
won't last as long as desires your heart
I'll go my way the way that is holy and right
I’ll leave you till justice has you served
I’ll go away to the faraway land so close
Faraway land so bright and pray for more dreams
I’ll go away from your demons within and pray
I’ll pray for you to grow love and peace within
Play no game for game will play you a tune | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 9:50:21 AM | Play no game for game will play you a tune,
Games corrupted, silenced, deleted *Boom*
Hopeless it seems, when you lift the lid,
"Nobody told us", Ya, well some of us did.
In keeping with, twisted humors art,
Drop me last bomb, then forced to depart...
Oh, say! can you see by FDA's corporate plight
What so proudly we hailed as BAD health Care is leaving
Whose fat stripes and dim stars, through corruption's light
O'er the ramparts we watched were so flatulently streaming?
And the rocket's red glare, the gas fouling the air,
Gave proof through the night that health care's not there:
Oh, say! does that Insurance company yet wave?
O'er the land of Big Pharma and the great FDA ?
On the shore, dimly seen through corruption so deep,
See the sickly Americans in dread silence reposes,
What is that which sells lies of steaming sh*t?
As it happily blows, half conceals, half discloses?
Now it catches the gleam of the rising sweet premium
In full horror reflected now showing on big screen!
'Tis Big Pharma and the FDA, Only the rich will it save
O'er the land of Big Pharma and the great FDA ?
And where are the blind who so vauntingly swore
Insurance is good, and there is NO corruption!
A home and a country ignored its working poor
They came with too less money and were treated like pollution!
No refuge could save the sick or cash strapped poor
From the terror of illness or bankruptcy!
Big Pharma and the FDA in triumph doth wave
O'er the land of Big Pharma and the great FDA
Oh, thus be it ever, when corruption shall stand
Between their loved profit margin, and real health care.
Blest with Blood money, and to Hell with the poor.
Praise the Stupid that believed that capitol hill cared.
Then conquer we must, when our cause it is just,
And this be our motto: "In $$$ is our trust":
Big Pharma and the great FDA in triumph shall wave
O'er the land of Big Pharma and the great FDA!!! | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 11:45:30 AM | O’er the land of big pharma and the great FDA
Big Pharma, bad science, the fig leaf per se
Held ransom by profits that get in the way
Of real life, real people, real every day
Stuff, like fare for the subway. Hey I’m dismayed!
Haven’t got the cash for groceries at Safeway
I lost it in the pharmaceutical fray.
How many souls have been harmed by the FDA?
I can’t really say but I’m sure it’s downplayed. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 12:14:50 PM | I can’t really say but I’m sure it’s downplayed.
Oh say can you see-eeeee
Where’s the meds for me
If I don’t have the cash
I’ll have to endure this rash
Pharma said, “My recovery may be delayed” | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 1:25:56 PM | My recovery may be delayed
for shortening the spray with extraneous slayed ideas
extrapolates unwanted play
then grey tones are added for greater depth of field
so is the yeild all that you sowed into that tapestry
hope for quilted rays
splashed like a Pollock
complete with cigarette butts | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 2:58:19 PM | splashed like a Pollok complete
with cigarette butts
take my hands and jump with me
onto my canvas, into my world
spontaneous liquid of my composition
pour it this way, splash over there
red, green and yellow in your long black hair
whole body involvement
lose all sense of time
we paint, we move, we move what we paint
we are canvas, artist, life | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 6:33:41 PM | We are canvas, artist,life
Their are the smooth sculpted
and years of happy strife
and the rough and corrupted
bright colors leap and cavort
mixing with a splash
an angry retort
an angry toothed gnash
once again out on the street
wondering just wondering
how was it seeming so complete
and gone so terribly wrong
the artist only has his useful medium
and the musician only his song
copyright2007plaidworks | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 7:33:05 PM | copyright2007plaidworks
is something i have never heard'
is that just regular copywriting
dealing with only poetry and words?
I like and love creative writing
indeed this is the truth
whats the purpose of it
what is it's real use?
I want to be a writer
and sell millions worldwide
I know with the skillz I was blessed with
my dreams will all come alive | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/1/2007 9:58:13 PM | my dreams will all come alive
as long as you are there
heaven walking gentle
or metal like nightmare
be careful what you wish for
I've heard it many a time
I sure would be a rich man
if it always gave me a dime
day dreamer slow that pattern down
take more time with the now
change your focus in public friend
if you want to be more than a cow | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/2/2007 6:38:40 AM | if you want to be more than a cow
then moo no more and oink more
If you want to be more than a pig
then oink no more and ooo more
If you want to be more than fish
then ooo no more and Roarrr more
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/2/2007 7:25:49 AM | then ooo no more and Roarrr more
as she tossed back her flowing mane
these people think I am an animal
they must think I am insane
little do they realise
I am playing the biggest game
predator versus alien
a hybrid programmed application
which planet do I herald from?
some will say Uranus
but I much favour the doctor
and Samantha Janus | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/2/2007 7:34:28 AM | the doctor
and Samantha Janus
were looking at Uranus
when a star fell from the sky
oh my
was it just another lie
or that sigh really meant goodbye
to feel the earth move
with out a stumble
no rumble or roar
no slamming door.
Before the rogue strikes the shore
we are just relaxing in the sun
complacent to the fun
as children run
laugh and play
that day could have been any other
with a flash thought of mother
my eyes refocus on the moving horzon
can I surmize this surprising state
before its too late. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/2/2007 10:14:50 AM | before it's too late
I need to get my life straight
time for me to finally regulate
and time to negotiate
I wanna make changes in life
and succeed in my dreams
have been hestitant too long
well at least thats what it seems
I wanna be a published poet
and want all of you to know it
no need to brg about my skills
when I easily I can show it and not blow it
Its time to turn the tides
making all my dreams come alive
watch how I strive
my first book is "THE LAST RIDE" | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/2/2007 10:34:18 AM | my first book is "THE LAST RIDE"
well that sounds like a great title to me
hope you provide pictures
so everyone can see
cos when it comes to marketing
you don't stand a chance next to me
but I don't write for fame or dollars
I provide my writing for free
hoping that my love will read it
hoping he will see
just how much I love him
even more than me | |
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Posted: 9/2/2007 10:42:34 AM | even more than me
soul seductive
meant also to say
your work is productive
but you need to recheck your work
as you have an unecessary I
as I sang it in my head as read
and that I got in the way
so kindly please remove it
just do as I say
or I will get my claws out
I know you like it that way | |
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Posted: 9/2/2007 10:45:19 AM | I know you like it that way
and just also like to mention
it sounds very Kanye West
but would be great
with Marvin Gaye | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/3/2007 12:00:35 AM | with marvin gaye
thou shall sing this tune
I would love for you to claw me
under the full cherry moon
please don't dis me
for I am a kind fellow
lets keep this poetry sweet
nice and indeed a little mellow
you say you like my writes
well please enjoy them without disgust
I am a man who writes all about life
homicide,suicide, romance and lusts
be sweet and dont be mean
cause I almost took it personal
how long did it take for you to make this up
sounds more like a pre-paid rehearsal | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/3/2007 6:58:30 AM | sounds more like a pre-paid rehearsal
with the express going in reverse all
distress can be so terse
not impressed with rides in a hearse
then off to a museum
its only a day trip
take the bus on the A-line
coffee's hot so wait to sip
conductor says "how far dear?"
with a smile that melts your soul
your thinking all the way
but say
"to 5th and Shoal"
Its a good time to cast your eye to the east
the sun can sparkle so fine
a rhythm recurs from under the seat
distraction of shallow mind
bliss can dance around and round
with little to change the sound of frowns
across hallow grounds
pathos resounds
while nothing is really found | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/3/2007 9:13:43 AM | While nothing is really found
if you just mozy around
nothing is made clear
when you look in the bottom of a beer.
I try and keep my head held high
'cause the sun reminds me I'm alive
I look beyond the glimmer in my eye
I find my desires for which to strive. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/3/2007 10:29:50 PM | "I find my desires for which to strive" -
what a bloody waste of ink
garbled garbage spewed online
helps noone pause to think.
It doesnt help amuse us,
it merely makes us strain
at the badly worded sentence
and the non-rhythmic refrain
no wonder noone else has sought
to follow your last line -
you killed the thread quite surely
with your poorly worded rhyme.
lets hope it hasnt maimed all minds
and left all thoughts devoid
for all the wit and wording
cant replace what you destroyed!
So now I call all fellow bards
renew your mental wits
ignore what words were penned before
and give this thread some glitz
give us thoughts and give us dreams
but choose your words with care
for who knows who will read it
and carry it from there! | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/3/2007 10:45:04 PM | and carry it from there!
Ohhh strugglin' bards beware!
If you are not up to par
then Ottawa may find
you lacking
and the sacking
is not nice!
ouch! Think twice!
while I will admit
to it
I did pass by that line
and have waited for a fine
line
all night
I might
have taken it and shaken it around
to find a different sound
had thought of making 2 lines of one
and having fun
with word play
"I find my desires
for a witches to strive....."
but land sakes alive!
I wouldn't have told the poor fellow
I would have been nicer, more mellow
tried to encourage
give courage
to the meek
who seek
to post with the fast minds
of the first last lines
I mean come on, take it easy
He's sure to feel queasy
wondering if we all thought his line
was as lame as a land mine
that nobody set off
but I guess he'll scoff
and write it off
to the bazarness of the internet
and get a chia pet
and grow sprouts
while he pouts
about the injustice of it all.
after all
it's a free site
and he might
just be back
with a counter attack
of muse
to amuse
us all.
Now how on the ball
do I need to be
let me see
what I can find
here to leave behind.
Ummm, let me see, if I may be so bold
You left me standing with no heart to unfold. | |
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