| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/5/2007 4:49:23 PM | my sisters and brothers of prose My thoughts are fleeting and often misleading just like a punch to the nose ribald and dark ,rough-edged and stark
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/5/2007 6:22:28 PM | I still luv ya my brothers and sisters of prose suck up some air through that nose and hold it examine it, play with it, ponder it the excess to success variety and exclusivity each breath a million thoughts how do you filter out? the data filled with noughts the data with a plus got to be a negative too cos on any kind of scale these are the measure of you | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/6/2007 2:50:31 AM | These are the measure of you... These words of wisdom You believe to be true
If the poetry you write Measures who you may be I ask you my friend Can you not see
The measurements of yourself Just don't add up I've seen you pick people apart And they get right back up
Like these little mistakes In the poetry and prose Soul Seductive's extra "I" Come on girl, let it go
For if words make the person And you think this is true Then I see judgemental eyes When I look towards you! | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/6/2007 9:33:29 AM | When I look towards you! my heart aches blue why'd you wear that shoe there is so much more in life to do
I hope your final callin' ain't about ballin' when life gets to stallin' you need to pull up your socks darlin' | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/6/2007 9:53:20 AM | darlin' oh darlin' wont you be mine a critique is judgemental so eat with the swine no matter that you were trying to improve some people don't like it so tell them to move pull up your socks dance all your days make tuna sandwiches with mayonaisse and where exactly have I fallen if life don't include a lot of ballin have to go now words are stallin | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/6/2007 11:13:01 AM | words are stallin my muse has run dry late night freeway was passing me by. Pulling out the irritant saying whats on your mind in a secure environment well that can be just fine. But when your engines stalling and you don't really know the way Looking for a rescue is no time for word play. Sometimes we need a towtruck to get us started here and thats what first and last line does the message is always clear. Come on lets play and understand we all have different needs Times I want honest critique others to write just as I please. Stranded on a highway, I could use a friend If you can't then pass on by, no need to pretend. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/6/2007 10:49:08 PM | If you can't then pass on by, no need to pretend can you spare me a tenner? no friends from whom to lend a tenner you say not a fortune how do you intend to spend? I will buy myself a weekly fix no change for food n drink so do you let them have it? think now think as they indulge in self abuse giving them money is no use they start smelling bad and become a recluse what they really needed was to be of some use to have a purpose a reason to live I am sorry my friend no money to give but I can feed n clothe you give you water to drink if you will work for me what do you think? work for no money you must think me a fool cos in the land of the living money's the rule | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/7/2007 6:56:51 AM | [from broken link at msg. 146]
close enough to hold that money's the rule old and bold yet still so cruel a school of fools within that measure thinking more dough will bring them pleasure when treasure is sitting all around crosslegged on the ground laughing and singing with fire warming hearts the children of games that don't end except to start again and again with a jovial smile knowing that love and compassion make style spreading the word to fill darkness with light communications is free and so am I tonight. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/7/2007 7:33:01 AM | communications is free and so am I tonight so let start some intimacy and lets do this right I wanna seduce your mind as well as your flesh from the moments it all starts you'll feel so blessed
wishing to caress you all over your skin as you groan and stare the fact that someone might walk in on us and neither of us cares it doesnt have to end right now, nor will it be over anytime soon maybe we shall just "rock the boat" from noon to the next full moon | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/7/2007 7:33:27 AM | communications is free and so am I tonight so let start some intimacy and lets do this right I wanna seduce your mind as well as your flesh from the moment it all starts you'll feel so blessed
wishing to caress you all over your skin as you groan and stare the fact that someone might walk in on us and neither of us cares it doesnt have to end right now, nor will it be over anytime soon maybe we shall just "rock the boat" from noon to the next full moon | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/7/2007 5:22:49 PM | maybe we shall just "rock the boat" from noon to the next full moon And see if we can keep this ship afloat and outlast this wicked monsoon. The rains have been pouring for many long days and waters are rising around us, we have been sandbanking in so many ways, but the waters won't cease to surround us. Don't look like an army can come to our aid they're busy recruiting the crude We are left sinking the bed that we've made and we're quick running right out of food. If we survive it will be by our wits and not by our governments trying. It doesn't look pretty, down here in the pits and we all know now just who's been lying. So paddle your own load, we're heading upstream to find a new truth for tomorrow We have a choice to begin a new dream or stay here and drown in our sorrow. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/7/2007 6:28:02 PM | we have a choice to begin a new dream or stay here and drown in our sorrow pie should be an easy decision to make but with too much to drink, we can’t think straight that’s just the beginning of our problems here our thinking is screwed because of the beer our beer is too strong because of the rules our rules are all wrong because of the tools in charge. So listen up, my friends and foes you know how the saying goes, it up to those who know the difference between wrong and right to push all day and all the night for change. so take my hand and I’ll take yours, we’ll dance and sing the song of love, believe the dream. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/7/2007 9:00:52 PM | and sing the song of love, believe the dream Now I lay me down to sleep see it's not at all like it may seem illusion stands, who's left to blame while frequent flyers play the game of scorching deserts where once plough lay across the land bountiful, I pray the lord my soul to keep. Led like sheep to the slaughter Magdalines daughter rises forth with scorn in her eye and passion in her womanhood Damned if she'll stay kind and good Let her do to all others as she would as she should Fleas from a camels back we lack the fortitude to even apologize sometimes I despise the whole human race. A disgrace to our heritage we make. if I should die before I wake they'll be one less consumer for Hell to take. | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/7/2007 10:55:05 PM | there’ll be one less consumer for hell to take along for the fiery ride instead I’ll bathe with you in the blue green yonder wearing nothing but seaweed watch me flip my tail your way as I shimmer towards silver horizons or surf with me through mercury swells to a place beyond landfall, hell or promise | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/8/2007 9:38:46 AM | beyond landfall, hell or promise waiting for the beyond was a landfall it came from hell from Mars to re-ignite a flame a long lost promise no promise was made at least not yet promises you dont forget | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/8/2007 11:41:19 AM | promises you dont forget forever love you promised me promise still we keep separately living flames remembering we | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/8/2007 9:40:49 PM | a perfect harmony duet sung sweet the world is a sucker for twined voices as we sway on the rope of pure music over the waters of sentiment | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/8/2007 11:19:45 PM | as hearts dance with elation my heart pumps sensations givin' myself that york sensation not peppermint patties, but love vibrations | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/9/2007 12:02:59 AM | not peppermint patties, but love vibrations have you tried a Maltese sensation? best way to drink milk my skin feels as soft as silk but my muscles are well defined I am currently in heaven playing on my karoake machine singing along with all the greats that was always for me a dream and now Whitney has joined my evergrowing playlist of songs I would like to sing for real and Stevie Wonder is there too I would love to thank them all for being here for you | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/9/2007 1:27:06 AM | for being here for you is the best that I can do always wanting to do more feeling a little bit unsure knowing my own stupidity how clumsy and wrong I can be I pray I'll never let you down never love you less than I can
and sometimes it seems these days are just dreams and I fear to wake find it's all my mistake how can one person be so lucky as me to spend time with you to be here to love you | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/9/2007 4:37:27 AM | to be here to love you Behind every great man is a great woman you’ve heard said…and the fool believes that it’s the female clown who knows better the male ego needs the joke the female represents Michelangelo’s smile he was the first to document that Moaning lists…pity you had to be 48 to understand scientific fact…am over my hormonal blues regressing into childhood…that’s a fact | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/9/2007 5:44:34 AM | Regressing into childhood…that’s a fact, with all its innocence and wide-eyed wonder in everything we say and how we act, enjoying the experience without fear of blunder, why did we abandon this delightful security for mistaken promises of adult maturity? | |
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| First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/10/2007 8:38:04 AM | mistaken promise of adult maturity linked to age is such a rage yet lost in the reality of time some minds never find the place paced by stress's race of rats fun in frolic or saturated fats we may change the hat upon a head without another word said dead thoughts breach what's hot or not like yea, so you've got a... pending point of conflict feel sick from all this pressure to grow up loving the cup you've always used even when abused it never failed to crench your thirst | |
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