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Posted: 4/2/2009 11:37:14 PM | | Yea pretty good... You should start your own thread instead of wasting your talent on my no man-donkey ringshow of mine :P Thanks for the visit bro keep at it | |
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Posted: 4/11/2009 12:25:12 AM | I called out to you in a whisper I thought you'd hear it... but you didn't
I ran around outside looking for answers trying my best to keep you at a distance... but you couldn't
I gazed at the moon everynight praying for a shadow of a hope you were looking right at the moon doing the same for me... but you wouldn't
I went to a ballgame thinking you was in the bleachers with me cheering up me a little... But you wasn't
I looked around outside just for anyone to talk to... But they wouldn't
I smiled this night and called you a b.itch for breaking me into pieces hoping you would feel the same pain I did for locking you in my heart all these years with a shadow face gazing at me.... But I didn't | |
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Posted: 4/11/2009 1:32:05 AM | | that's beautiful hon..keep writing, i really enjoy your writes. | |
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Posted: 4/11/2009 3:27:36 AM | Thx fellow neighbor ;). Not many mo state people on forums so a midwestern welcome is appreciated :).
Crimson essessences lost in tears
A floodgate of emotions burried under the sands of time busts after so many years
Where once I thought of myself as a sapling fergus
I stand as a man with emparting knowledge
Best to keep withdrawals to a close
Follow the book the answers to life's questions are under your nose
If it doesn't make sense someone else's story may be the key
Combine the answers and seek out your destiny | |
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Posted: 4/11/2009 3:31:52 AM | Lost drifting like a snowflake on a frozen pond
On this earth where do I fit in, where do I belong
Always searching for answers I have become the wisest man on earth
But really I'd be happier playing the villiage idiot with a glass of ale for what it's worth
So many riddles to a life worth living
Where do we come to just relax throw on a log and embrace in what we're given
The firestorm of hate relinqueshed by the promising of true love
Where in the shadows those who care watch from above | |
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Posted: 4/11/2009 3:40:17 AM | Life burns the slowering anger of resitment
You gave it your all but you wanted more
Across a desert you wanted water on a raft boat you wanted shore
But you gave in to delusions more more more
Out of a cascading star the secret I cannot part to you
You're unforgiven for your sins against yourself
You tried to agknowledge knowledge but you sought out more
As the years will pass on a weeping willow you struggle to find yourself
And when you pass there you will be hopeless no one to care just another glass on the shelf | |
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Posted: 4/24/2009 10:25:50 PM | Lost tears float upon a pond of emotions
As the skyarch fades away to a crumbalacent view of mankind's greed and of hatred
Open your eyes and realise you share the earth with your fellow neighbor
So many reasons why I don't wanna see my face
Somebody, bind my hands and make me understand
My arms can't hold back the lonlieness
As my eyes have seen all I wanna see
So much is different
So much has changed
Somebody, bind my hands and make me understand | |
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Posted: 4/24/2009 10:53:18 PM | Somebody get me through this nightmare...who sings that?
Unbind my eyes, let light shine on your view
Realize not all are set on hatred & discontent
Focus on the shine, heroes from seven to twenty
Food pantries, clothes pantries...it's gotta start somewhere
Yes. At home.
Love you, Bran | |
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Posted: 4/24/2009 10:55:28 PM | OP, your writing is poignant, yearning, emotion filled and still well written.
You obviously have a lot to say; but you say it very beautifully.
Keep on writing. | |
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Posted: 4/25/2009 5:14:47 AM | (you first line up there released some of my own deep feelings...hope you don't mind i borrowed....rosie)
Lost tears float upon a flood of emotion
what i thought...wasn't real
we spoke two different languages
not listening to each other's pain
time and time again
i heard rejection
you felt i didn't comfort
my eyes swollen
you hung up the phone
without a goodbye
was that a metaphor
or had you simply had enough? | |
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Posted: 4/25/2009 2:38:11 PM | Woot! I got fans this round! 
Several lingering essenses
The cage of time
We know who we are yet time opens up new horizons
Good? Bad? Only your soul knows the path of destiny you walk
Have you become one of yourself or do you struggle everyday hoping to find a physical subject
Time lingers you come out with a purpose
The gods give you insight if your heart will listen while you cry at the view of yourself
Does happieness float on a dream that's so hard to face in reality
Or are we just following our mentor's guidance
Strike out into the night let your voice be heard
We walk on a path that the gods can't give us
As we simply find out that the only person you can rely on is you | |
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Posted: 4/25/2009 2:50:25 PM |  Hey my friend! hugs and nice write!
As I walk farther in the Light
I find that I do need anothers words
sometimes things are so absurd!
We cannot walk alone
all the time...
though I have tried
I am a believer of my word
Inside so long , I did hide
But open to hearts
along the way
I find they are alot ...the same!
Rely on yourself for you are
your shelter...
but let others in
never shut them out
For to do so is isolating
your Soul shall shrivel
and die
inside
Ignite the fires
life bestows
for of the happiness
you are yet
to know!
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Posted: 4/25/2009 3:30:01 PM | Hugs for sure Jules been awhile. Those that care always leave a door open for new possibilities even if it's just a crack. Let's make a pact! In twenty years we get married if neither one of us finds another! 
As the time sandscades out of view
Who do you find in your arms a rare scarecrow goes achoo
Being picked apart by crows that should be afraid
Instead picking my strawout only to be replaced freshly made
Friends come to help us carry the burden of hardships
Ty Jules for being my farmer that picks up the straw that's been scavenged with ultimate friendship | |
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Posted: 4/25/2009 3:31:38 PM | Hugs for sure Jules been awhile. Those that care always leave a door open for new possibilities even if it's just a crack. Let's make a pact! In twenty years we get married if neither one of us finds another!
As the time sandscades out of view
Who do you find in your arms a rare scarecrow goes achoo
Being picked apart by crows that should be afraid
Instead picking my strawout only to be replaced freshly made
Friends come to help us carry the burden of hardships
Ty Jules for being my farmer that picks up the straw that's been scavenged with ultimate friendship | |
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Posted: 4/25/2009 3:45:04 PM | Hugs for sure Jules been awhile. Those that care always leave a door open for new possibilities even if it's just a crack. Let's make a pact! In twenty years we get married if neither one of us finds another!
As the time sandscades out of view
Who do you find in your arms a rare scarecrow goes achoo
Being picked apart by crows that should be afraid
Instead picking my strawout only to be replaced freshly made
Friends come to help us carry the burden of hardships
Ty Jules for being my farmer that picks up the straw that's been scavenged with ultimate friendship | |
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Posted: 4/25/2009 3:45:13 PM |
Let's make a pact! In twenty years we get married if neither one of us finds another!
LOL...my friend in twenty years
I will have faced
all things I feared
I may be settled
kinda slow
But just as sure
I will know!
I may not be here
like today
But images
of me will stay
within the hearts
of those I loved
Dancing in the skies
Above!
xo
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Posted: 4/30/2009 8:03:28 PM | You know? I've been looking my posts over and people think my words mean more than the professional artists words do! Sometimes I'll be listening to music and the beat is good so I share lyrics of the artist. But it's still shocking that everyone finds my versus with better passion and gusto. So maybe I should use my own words more often eh?
I took a walk outside to clear my head
Voices telling me heartache make me feel already dead
Just a soldier in my mind I wanted to save the world
But where the heart stays fast and yearns for someone special I feel lost in my words
Is she out there thinking the same thing under a velvet moon
It's not often anybody takes the time to know me as I feel swoon
I just want to be happy mature in my youth like a fine glass of wine
But it's all for nothing if I can't find peace in my mind | |
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Posted: 5/16/2009 1:48:33 AM | Show me what it is to believe
If God's watching from above why's the world gone to s.ht
Show me what I'm supposed to be
It's more than I can take
Every decision i talk about comes round and delivers me to your god
But I don't wanna believe
More than I care to enjoy
Are you serious or are you coming around
More than I can take
Are you driving me mad with more than I ever had
Late at night I go to sleep count the stars you're always there
Shedding your life as you come up the stairs
Am I the victom or are you simply walking down the line
Just a vision of a sign show me you're really there
More than I care to enjoy
Are you serious or are you coming around
More than I can take
Are you driving me mad with more than I ever had | |
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Posted: 7/9/2009 2:10:07 PM | Just another lonely night
The cats at play in the city streets
Walking along the homeless I feel welcome in their home
Just to wake up naked and defensless as they drown thier sorrows off with a shot of bourbon
Just no one to witness, know what they care, what they go through
Am I safe on these streets
Am I as guilty as them
Just a shadow placed on a public wall we share the same outcrop of a shadow
Here I sit wallowing naked on a live stage with laughing people not knowing how I feel
Just a blank page to life's riddle
Where do I fit in
Just another drop of life from Gaia's river of sad broken tears
As I am still clothed I feel alone
Journey's guidance carrying me home wherever that may be | |
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Posted: 7/24/2009 7:15:55 PM | Somehow someway we made it to the top
But when does the animalistic hunger stop
All central beings belong to the fold
As we forget all we know cold
A silent girl dreams of floating away on a flying unicorn birstly free
Are we different than animals should we simply be
As a consequence we find out who we are as mortals of flesh and bone
Just to die one day at a time all alone
Just think for a bit as times escalades beyond the sandy banks of rushing water
Like the current, history repeats over and over until we become bolder
A stagnant flame hoistling my manhood but who am I in a world of liars and thieves
So many dead so many suffering it's more to concieve | |
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Posted: 7/30/2009 1:04:54 PM | Do you know me
As I know you
I watched you change
From friend to foe
In the beat of an eye
When both of us did not know
As the world spins
Like the desire for darkness in your heart
Watching the world from your balcony on a gargoyle tower
Watch as they spit your name
And you will not last
Over and over you doubt your good nature
Wanting to be more and more
You lost yourself in the blink of an eye
Wink
Do not doubt
You can still save yourself
And love cannot
Fore you only exist to find that perfect ideal
As your life becomes more than you'd appeal
Your wings broken gather your strengh
As the eyes judge the damned
Did you find what you wanted
Just accept yourself as one individual prosperity
Then she'll come to you | |
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Posted: 7/30/2009 3:29:56 PM | I'm so sorry I can't speak a word
You loved me more than what I was worth
Everyday without you brings fluent emotions of when we were side by side
I remember a thousand voices of a thousand days when you was my bride
Did you have to leave me as the trees glisten in the rain
When's my time for sunshine that I'll see your face again
It's no wonder I played the fool
Wishing for just one piece of happieness often took away in a single emotion you died in my arms just leaving me on the grass as I felt like a tool
Did the gods do this to us I must find out the answer just like we all have a destiny to fulfill
But my heart is dead and void without your touch to be so real
Calling in the heart of hearts you loved me so I can move on
But you're always in my heart even with you gone | |
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Posted: 7/30/2009 6:56:15 PM | Some say if you whisper your love's name throughout the wind an answer will come back to you
Take away the candy a bowl full of unhappieness
A leprichaun comes and offers you a trip on his rainbow or a pot of gold
Which would you pick if you wanted the other so badly
Love begins with a simple hello
Who says it has to end with goodbye
A starched letter upon a gilted manuscript
Open it now or wait for the wind to blow back your answer
In a world full of hurt why play the fake
Are humans so fickle they go for what isn't after them
And ask yourself if this is the reason we journey day by day
To get hurt and masqueraded in a game we don't want to play | |
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Posted: 7/31/2009 3:09:17 PM | | I guess I mostly said give me a gander for a thread and you did. You looked gave me a gander but comments, critique in a way i ain't gonna stab you in the head with a fork is always welcome. But mostly talent from far and wide can post here. :) thx! | |
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Posted: 8/14/2009 6:57:45 PM | Is it in your eyes that love shall fall
Do we seek the truth before we know all
Was it in your will to place your hand on mine
Can't fight this feeling it's deep inside
Haunting me like a ghost upon wolves on lamb
Seek the truth I can't seem to stand
So every night I cross off something I did that's new
Just hoping you're out there giving me a view | |
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