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Posted: 11/15/2007 2:12:32 PM | Jbwoods.
Want do you enjoy doing? What would you do if you found that perfect woman to spend your days with? Talk a little about your interests. What sports do you play?
You write well on yourself and of who you want to find.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 2:16:17 PM | Georax.
You go straight into about her. Talk about you first. Give your profile a little more personality, Talk as you not just listing stuff. Also spelling should be looked at.
What do you enjoy doing? What do you do for fun? Talk a little about these things and it will bring you onto your profile.
Are you able to get any more pics? It would be nice to see a smile and different angles..
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Posted: 11/15/2007 2:20:53 PM | Lilduster.
Well you have done well with the pics... cute.
I like the way you have used humor. I would suggest that you change the bit about finding out if true.. to say just joking (if you are) And then go on to describe you. Talk about you, what you like to do, what your interested in and what kind of gal your after.
You dont have to list these things but a little more info is always good.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 2:25:59 PM | Hetter.
This comment is nagative and could be worked on...
CONTRARY TO POPULAR BELIEF , not all guys on here are just looking for a "good time". Looking to meet some new people. Don't get much of an opportunity with my work schedule. Not looking to be married tomorrow, but not looking for a "good time" either (if you know what i mean
How bout you change it to Im looking to meet new people on here because i dont get much time due to work schedule, but would make time for right gal.
Talk about yourself. Tell us that your not a guy just after one thing, that you want to respect and treat a lady right. Describe your personality. Let us get to know you and then we will msg you.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 2:32:29 PM | Xtangent.
Sorry gal, was doing profile reviews for a few hours... must have missed ya..
I think i have reviewed yours in another tread but will again...
Are you able to group your sentances into paragraphs so it is a little more ordered and maybe group together parts that are the same coz it kind of jumps from one topic to another.
Lose some of the Smilies.. a bit distracting. And what are you going for in to first date section? It looks a bit messy.
Otherwise you have done a great job with your writing and your pictures and im sure you wll do well.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 2:37:35 PM | Gxtro.
Yuo dont need to do anything to make me review, just say thanks....
Your main pic is quite dark are you able to get any more with you smilling?
Take out your list... not that im any of those but it turned me off straight away... you can talk about these later when you are getting to know the person.
Otherwise yor profile is simple and to the point. Are you able to inject a little more personality to it. Expand a little more about yourself and interests, that will give a sence of you.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 2:41:30 PM | Shieh.
Your profile sounds like a resume. Try and write how you would say these things to someone when your getting to know them.
For example.. ' Im 30, im now working at .... and also doing.... . I love doing this and im reall interested in that. I think im this type of person and am looking for that type of person.'
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Posted: 11/15/2007 4:31:52 PM | Rivonia.
You can describe yourself thats a great thing. I do think that you have bit a bit too much on there and guys may not read it all. Or may know all they want to know and not needing to ask. You should try adn tease them with information, give some but not all away... let them come to you.
With your list of things in common, thats the kind of stuff you find out when first talking/dating. Dating is a discovery process and listing all that means you wont have mch to discover about another.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 4:35:14 PM | Seriously.
I like alot of things, play alot of sports, work out alot. Do you? You dont go into much detail with anything on your profile. Not that you have to but a basic outline of what they are and such is good. Talk about yourself. If you dont want to tell anyone your goals dont make a point of it on the profile, just is negative.
Talk about what your interested in, what you enjoy doing.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 4:43:34 PM | 33minokc.
I am a parent and understand this statement
they are more important to me than life itself and they are my first priority. but on a profile it makes women think at there is no room for them. Just a thing i have been told.
You need to talk about yourself more, this is your profile, let us know who you are, what you do in your spare time and what you are interested in.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 4:47:05 PM | Joshinnaples.
You say your a passionate person.. what are you passionate about? i like the rest of your profile and really enjoyed the first date part. i dont think you should ahve much trouble.. it does take time and patience to find on this site so stick with it.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 4:52:49 PM | | Hey, I'd love to have my profile reviewed. I'm not getting a lot of responses, so i figured I take it one step at a time to figure out what the problem is... and i'm completely open to the fact that it's me! :P Just thought I'd see if there's anything I should fix on my profile first. | |
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Posted: 11/15/2007 5:01:56 PM | Johnny.
First change your main pic to one in the suit smilling... looks so much better. Sometimes we just read mail and just look at pic... you gotta make them wanna read your profile.
You need to calm it down a little, its a tad crazy... talk about yourself with your personality influence but dont let it go too much... you need to spark someones interest to get to know you a bit better
What are you sending as your first contact? Read their profile and comment on their picture (like a gentleman would) and ask a question that isn't too indepth or personal about something you have read.
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