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Posted: 11/15/2007 7:40:36 PM | Captn.
Well i feel like i know you already. That can be a problem with profiles... what can i ask you about yourself? I do like the way you have wrote it and what you have said. I just feel like it gives too much away. Has it been working for you?
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Posted: 11/15/2007 7:45:00 PM | Liketopaddle.
So what are you interested in? What do you do for fun? Talk a little on these, it shows who you are by what you enjoy doing.
otherwise i think you have done a pretty good job of your profile for just being new.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 10:14:52 PM | Howard.
So what are you interested in? What do you do for fun? These are things that people are interested in knowing when looking at a profile. Talk a little on these. You talk about yourself very well and about what you are looking for. Your photos are also very good.
Luck
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Posted: 11/15/2007 11:24:49 PM | Justfun.
Im an Aussie! Its all good.
There are so many people that just look... i think it must be a full time job... i get the same.
With your profile i would suggest that you tidy it up a bit. put it into paragraphs instead of all those sentences. Why not write a little general something about who you are looking for on here.
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Posted: 11/16/2007 1:43:39 PM | | Hey you should charge for this service hehe! I seem to send lots of messages out but only occasionally get a reply, there's lots of "read.deleted" in my sent messages folder :( My profile must be kinda sucky or my pics hideous! Please Carly sort me out! | |
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Posted: 11/17/2007 11:54:43 PM | Brinybay.
Your main pic is fuzzy, are you able to get a nice clear one of a happy you?
The start of this sentence is all you need, remove this part....
, I'm not looking for so-called "casual encounters" or "friends with benefits".
Otherwise i think you have done an alright job.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:25:29 AM | Daveq.
Prefer Not To Say, Makes me think what are you hiding?
You say nothing to describe yourself. Who are you? We know what you enjoy and what you are looking for but thats not all that is needed.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:30:39 AM | Free-now.
First the pic of your daughter... dont want to sound harsh or anything but it does seem sexual and not the thing you want for your profile.
You need to talk a little about you and your interests and what you enjoy. You talk a little but its not very structured. Try paragraphs on each topic and less "...." .
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:37:37 AM | Mrjoojoo
Your pics do need some work. Try some that are clear and show you. What is with the toy?
bye all, I hope you liked my profile .. I try and reply to all messages if at all humanly possible but it can be hard .. sometimes I get literally three messages a day!! ha ha. ooo can you rate my pic please (if you like it!) and add me to your faves if you like checking back, thanks x Sounds a bit desperate so change or take off if you want.
Think about your profile. its got to be able to attract all type of women, you also have to sell yourself to them, make them want to msg you and talk more.
What are you sending to gals? Are you able to send me one so i can see what your doing?
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:41:25 AM | Cheechwizard.
Dont want to offend but you look like your a woman in you pic. Is this what you want?
You need to talk about yourself, your interests, what you enjoy and what your looking for on this site so there is no confusion.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:45:25 AM | | Hi Carly, In the past month I have ask 3 different people to review my profile, no one has, is it that bad :D, I`m always getting responses from the pay sites, but never any from POF, something wrong somewhere it seems like. If you could find time to read mine I sure would appreciate it, I know I don`t have a pic, but I don`t have a camera. Again, many thanks.......rick. | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:47:34 AM | Handyman.
Everyone has been hurt, dont advertise it. this may attract users. You need to talk more about what you like to do, what you are interested in. Your last paragraph is negative. You may feel this way but just do it or send a little msg saying that your flattered but you would rather a msg then being added as a fav.
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