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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:52:07 AM | Rickpaul.
Its not that bad. Do you have any friends with a cam, this will be the reason that you may not be getting responses.
Why not try a rewrite your profile. Doesn't mean its bad, just sometimes something new helps. Talk about your self, your interests, what you enjoy and what you are looking for on this site.
What are you sending out as your first contact? send me one so i can see what you are doing.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:00:20 PM | Liontotema.
You need to expand a bit on your interests, you just list them. Talk a little more on them and you never know someone might like the same thing.
having one big paragraph looks a bit untidy. Try paragraphs on the topics... about you, yor interests, what you enjoy and what you want.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:03:31 PM | Jessie.
You do great in talking about who you are looking for, try and do that about yourself.
Instead of just listing your qualities, talk about them like you would if you were speaking them, Tell us what your interested in and what you do for fun. This is your profile and shole be dominated with you.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:07:24 PM | The one4you.
You start your profile like a job ad. If this is humor, maybe another way to go about it.
You also say you have 3 rules but then only list 2.
Your profile should say something about you. So tell everyone who you are, talk about your interests and what you do for fun. Your profile has to attract attention to you, make women want to msg you and get to know you better.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:10:32 PM | Camry.
You need to use some spacing in your profile, make it easier to read. Also a picture of you smilling would be good.
how about you talk about what you enjoy doing, or what you would do if you were with your perfect woman.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:29:01 PM | Restlessgoddess.
Your profile is very hard to read, looks like an essay. Guys prob dont read it. Try putting it into paragraphs and using spacing. Make a paragraph a topic, make it easy to read and then they will. Dont just list interests expand a little on one or two.
Also nothing wrong with making the first move. Email guys first. Read their profile and ask a question on something you have read, make it personal not generic. Then go on with a little about yourself.
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Posted: 11/18/2007 2:37:47 PM | Mummy.
Yay another Aussie!!!
First i would say your kids names.... wierdos out there.
You need to talk about yourself more, let them know who you are, what are you interested in and what you enjoy doing, if you get spare time (i understand 2 kids here). With this site you really need to sell yourself, i know its not great imagery but its the truth. You need to make guys want to get to know more about you.
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