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Posted: 11/18/2007 10:30:59 PM | Daw.
Do you have access to any other pics? A nice one of just you clearly would be great.
You want someone with similar interests but then dont say what your interests are. So what are they what do you enjoy doing?
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Posted: 11/19/2007 2:29:27 AM | Souldoubt.
You dont really say much about you. Tell us who you are, what are you interested it. I see you list things you enjoy but dont talk about them. Why not expand a little on some of them? Show your personality thru your profile.
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Posted: 11/19/2007 2:46:53 AM | Cubanasalsa.
I love the pics in that web site. yours?
I like your profile. You address all that i look for in one. But i would suggest removing the testimonial as it sounds like she is your girlfriend, or your only talking to her. just a suggestion if you want more msgs.
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Posted: 11/19/2007 1:48:11 PM | | thanks for looking over my profile :) i will do some editing and try to get some nicer pics. Ive just found a potential new photography partner on POF so hopefully she might get some more attractive pics of me, I hope she's good with photoshop ;) thankyou x | |
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Posted: 11/19/2007 1:54:12 PM | Hey Carly! Congrats on hitting 300 plus! You go girl! I'll try to catch up with ya tonight over at the same place. I'll bring my new ATeam doll I just picked up at the retro store! It's way cool.
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Posted: 11/19/2007 3:30:43 PM | Sled.
Sorry i missed your post.
You dont believe in love? Your headline implys that thought... something to think about. Try be positive.
You list what your interested in and nothing else. Your profile needs to show you off, if you find this hard then type as you would if you were telling someone about yourself.
For expample... 'Im Carly, i love going to the beach and shopping; though i dont get much time to do so. Im a mother of two and am interested in....' and so on. Just make it natural and show your personality.
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Posted: 11/19/2007 3:35:23 PM | Ace.
Your main pic should be one that shows you, just you. Try getting one that is clear and not too far away.
You say your an outgoing guy and then say your shy... doesn't quite match. What do you enjoy doing? What are you interested in? What are you looking for on this site?
You have to write a little more to spark some interest.
What are you writing in your msgs... send me one so i can see what you are doing and i will try and help.
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Posted: 11/19/2007 3:41:00 PM | Computer.
I did this before and chickened out, but a friend of mine talked me into returning, so here I am again. I'm not insecure, just feels strange looking for someone online. Anyway, here goes. You dont need that in your profile. keep it positive.
Talk about what you like to do, what you are interested in, Who you want to find one this site, doesn't have to be a list nor an essay. Just make your profile show who you are and your personality.
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Posted: 11/19/2007 3:54:03 PM | | Ok I added some more and tried to make it not so point form I hope it is better! I am getting so discouraged with this dating scene! A quick question if I could...when I read profiles and send a letter first what exactely should I say?? I just usually say do you want to chat? Is that enough? HELP!! lol | |
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Posted: 11/19/2007 4:02:09 PM | Jessie.
Much better. i like it
First contact is hard, but just saying wanna chat wont get any response. Read their profile, when maybe comment on their pic (if anything stands out) and ask a question about something you read. Try to make this question something you wouldn't think too personal.. Maybe if they say the like football ask what code and team?
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Posted: 11/19/2007 6:34:50 PM | Computer.
i didn't see the picture of you as a baby in there before... think my comp is playing up. Unless your really into that sort of thing then really not the sort of thing your going for. i know its all prob in humor but just how it comes off.
Instead of listing what you like expand on a few, spark someones interest in you. When you have done that i think you will have a better profile.
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Posted: 11/19/2007 6:51:51 PM | Thanks again Carly,
I removed the picture, and no! it's not a fetish lol. It's my Halloween costume and just wanted to show part of my sense of humor. But now that I think about it, you're right, people may take it the wrong way.
I updated the profile Again, and I hope it's at least close as to what you are suggesting. | |
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