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Posted: 11/20/2007 11:42:18 PM | 27names.
You dont talk about what your interested in and what you enjoy to do? What do you like to do for fun? tell us.
What could you see yourself doing together as a couple? just an idea.
Talk about you to make your profile stand out. It is what its there for.
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Posted: 11/20/2007 11:47:15 PM | Hamlet.
Ok, well this is the second attempt I’ve made writing this. I re-read it the other day and realised how dull I sounded! No wonder I didn’t have that many eager replies! Cut it. Too negative.. your looking to impress. Same with that first paragraph, you could word it better in a more positive light.
Going out and doing stuff? What stuff would you do it you went out?
You have interesting pictures but dont talk about them. Tell a little something about them.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 12:00:33 AM | Ladyclass.
Are you able to get any other pictures? this one doesnt show you in the right light.
Paragraphing and spacing. Im sorry but i couldn't fully read your profile as it was making my eyes hurt. Are you able to neaten it up and i promise to have another look.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 12:12:15 AM | Franklin.
Who feels confident here? Not many.
Are you sending first contact msgs? If so send me one and ill take a look at that too
Your profile could use a little work. Ihave 4 things that i find work well for a profile.
1. Talk about yourself. Describe your personality.
2. Talk about your interests. Dont just list them.
3. Talk about what you like to do.
4. Talk about what you are looking for on this site. A general outline.
There are forums on this site where you can post your rants into the subjects that you can find. A profile is not the place for them.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 12:41:15 AM | Hey Carly, when you are finished with Justin's, can you have a gander at mine. And I plan on putting more pics up soon.
Mad props on your first date idea Justin, not sure how it will go over with the ladies, but I thought is was funny. | |
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Posted: 11/21/2007 5:10:13 AM | Hey there Carly:
I'd love to know how my profile comes across. I'm pretty sure I need to make adjustments about the profile, but am pretty confident in my honesty about myself.
Any suggesstions would be a great help!!!
Thanks for any help,
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Posted: 11/21/2007 5:45:03 AM | Forty.
Absolute pisser mate!!
You sound like a fun guy to hang with.
I see that your after just hang out, this profile will attract like minded people. If you are after anything else then tone it down a bit.
Talk about your interests and what you enjoy doing and what you are looking for.
Carly
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Posted: 11/21/2007 5:51:10 AM | Chasing.
Are you still just doing the forum thing or would you like to meet someone?
Because if your just doing forums then your profile could stand how it is now. Maybe a little more on yourself. Talk about you not just want you do.
I love that first line... thats great making someone ask you something... theres first contact msg dealt with!
If your after someone you are going to have to put more depth into it. More substance about you, your interests, what you enjoy and what you are looking for in a gal.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 5:54:56 AM | Nardo.
So who are you? You say nothing about yourself except a list of the things you like to do. So talk about yourself, tell just who you are.
Expand on a few of your interests too, tell us why you like them or how you enjoy them.
Previously, it said I was 5 foot 3, but I'm 5 foot 10 and 11/16ths! Why is this in here? your height has been changed so there is no need for any talk of it again.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 5:59:23 AM | Austin.
Your content is great but i think that you tend to write too much about what your trying to say. Im not saying that it has to be short, you just tend to write more that is needed if you can see what im trying to say.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 11:31:27 AM | Carly,
you sound like you are on a mission. help this one our ; xxxmissxxx - she's on noone's faves or had any mail - poor girl is a bit down and needs help! i think she's done something to her profile that makes mailing her impossible - or maybe it's just me - probably is lol | |
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Posted: 11/21/2007 1:40:50 PM | grgynvp.
Do you have access to any other pictures? Something that shows you a bit more clearly. A good one would be a face shot with you smilling.
You describe how you look in your profile. You should be describing your personality, doesn't have to be much but a little something that isn't a list. Talk about what you like to do and what you are interested in.
A way to help you in this is to type like you were telling someone this information. Makes it flow easier and sound more natural.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 1:53:10 PM | Richard.
Your Pictures are not fully clear and dont really show you. Are you able to get any more? Make sure they are in good lighting, your smilling and they are clear. You need to first attract to your profile via that picture, so it should be a good one.
When reading your profile i had the feeling that if we were talking, it would be just you talking and me not getting a word in... So looking more closely at your profile i would say you say too much. You need to tease people with the information about yourself. Make them want/need to get to know you and msg you.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 2:10:12 PM | Theroyale.
Use the pic of just you as your main one. The more pics you have of just you the better, the best are happy smilling ones.
You talk well about yourself and about what you enjoy. How about what you are looking for? You could add a little thing about that if you wanted to.
The last sentence is not needd, if they like you they will either add you to favs (if they are shy) or msg you.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 2:17:17 PM | Mark.
Miss's profile is very negative. She should talk about herself in a positive light, what is she good at? What does she enjoy doing? What are her interests?
She puts 'prefer not to say' about if she is single or not, not going to help the situation there.
Woe is me and pity profiles wont get messages, no one wants to talk to someone that will bring them down.
If she just makes a few changes and keeps it positive then she will do better.
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