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Posted: 11/21/2007 2:24:15 PM | Bigteddybear.
Talk about your interests a big more, dont just list them. You need to talk a little more about them, not everything but a little tease a little information about them.
Its great that you talk about what you do with your daughter but having it in caps is not needed. Talk all you want about that, but just like the rest of your profile. Remember your profile is for someone to know about you.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 2:30:04 PM | Catch.
The best thing to show on these profiles is you. To do this write about yourself, I have found that and easy way to do this is to type like you would talk about this to someone.
For example...
Hi, im Carly. Im normally found at the beach, park or shops. I love sport my favs are.....
It makes it a little easier for you.
So talk about yourself, your interests, what you enjoy doing and what your looking for on here, then you have a profile that tells about you.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 2:37:41 PM | Amsin.
You did well with the content of your profile, i like what you have written.
I would suggest the use of paragraphs and spacing to make it easier to read. Some may be turned off your profile because it looks like a lot and it does take some concentration to read.
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Posted: 11/21/2007 2:44:56 PM | Cko22.
You dont say anything about you, You talk about what you like doing and that but nothing about who you are.
Also talk more about your interests and enjoyments then just listing them. I would suggest cutting down talking about smoking weed thing if you want more msgs, up to you. Just may turn some off, although they may have no problem with it.
You need to do a spell check for a few of the errors there. The kids thing i think you could work into about who you are as it is a personality trait. Take out the word petafile... gives such a wrong feeling to your profile.
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Posted: 11/22/2007 1:53:36 AM | Archer.
First off, let me just say that I am not looking for friends with benefits or a one night stand. I am looking for the one relationship that is going to last...based on friendship above all else. Sure, sex is great, but a friend, companion, confidant as well as a lover are more what I am interested in. You dont need the disclaimer. Just show that your a nice guy via what you write in the profile.
You tell a lot about yourself. Sometimes less is more and this is one of those things. You need to talk about yourself and about your interests and enjoyments but dont write an essay about them, nor should you list them. Tease women with your information, make them want to get to know you.
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Posted: 11/22/2007 4:13:49 PM | Stndlag.
I love how you describe yoursself. you have done a good job there.
You list a few interests but dont talk about them.. how bout a little something.
What are you looking for on this site... is there one thing that would blow your mind when it comes to what your looking for in a gal?
You dont have to list anything, but some general tips are good to put in.
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Posted: 11/22/2007 4:21:38 PM | Translucent.
Well i now know all about you.
i would suggest not going into so much detail about everything. You are trying to catch their attention so that they will ask about you and want to know more.
Keep your first date paragraph in the first date part. You can talk about what your looking for in a gal, but too many rules will turn them away.... just warning on that one.
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Posted: 11/22/2007 4:26:32 PM | Driver.
The pic with you in the stripy shirt turning towards the cam would look better as your main pic.
You have an interesting and unique way of setting out your profile. I like it. Dont change the format. I do thing that you sould talk about what you enjoy doing and your interests.
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Posted: 11/22/2007 4:31:06 PM | DeltaDawn.
Your profile is good when describing you and what your looking for.
What what are your interests and what do you like to do?
or at least what time we have left. Sorry but this sounds like your going to die tomorrow. You should keep the profile positive.
Paragraphs and spaceing are important in a profile, it ensures that te profile is easy to read and interesting to look at.
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Posted: 11/22/2007 7:13:31 PM | Ant.
(ok know i spelt the name wrong but your post vanished)
<div class="quote">Ok, so at the urging of some of my female friends I've come to the realization that my previous profile may have come off as a tad flippant. So now I will attempt to provide more content to draw you in to my profile not needed since you have changed it.
I like the way you have approached your profile, maybe take out a few of the facts about you... dont want to give all away.
You have used humor and it has worked.
As for lots of looks, that happens to everyone, dont take it personally, sometimes you just not what they are after. Are you msging women, it does pay to make the first contact, yeah some wont answer but you will get some.
Use your humor when msging, let your personalility shine thru. Comment on their pictures (not their body) ask a question or two about what you read... and never say lets chat.
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Posted: 11/22/2007 7:19:15 PM | Whymista.
I remember reviewing you before, but i will again coz i like ya....
You pics are what are letting you down. Are you able to get a cam and take some nice ones of yourself? Dress up and smile. You need a pic that isn't dark, is clear and doesn't have your sunglasses on. You need to show you a bit more.
I like the changes you make to your profile.
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Posted: 11/22/2007 7:21:55 PM | Rattrocks.
You need to get a new pic... cant see you. The pic should be light, clear and of just you smilling.
Talk about what your interested in and what you enjoy, im sure theres more to you then what you do for work..
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Posted: 11/22/2007 8:54:36 PM | Marz.
You need to tidy up your profile a little, its all over the place, keep the things you want to talk about together. Also instead of just listing your interests and such, expand on a couple.
The smilling pic doesn't do the best for you, how about get someone else to take the pic so you do have the looking up with the eyes (what makes it look a bit weird.). Try some full body, with shirt on or action shots showing what you like to do.
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