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Posted: 11/4/2007 11:09:22 PM | pokey.
If you have any pics of you smilling that are close would be great for your main pic.
I'm a pretty solitary person by nature, but that doesn't mean I abhor people. I AM very careful about people i meet initially, though. I don't like coming off as insulting or inadvertently offending people, so I generally like to take things slowly and scope things out for a while. I dont think that this is nessesary to be put in, leave the last sentence but add something like 'i am a bit shy at the begining but....'
You have addressed what i like to see in your profile but you have made it a bit wordy. if your able to cut it down a bit would be great, it seems to me that you are nervous and babbling.. maybe just me.
Talk about yourself first, then address who you are looking for, whats most important here is YOU! This is your ad, make it stand out.
And make sure there's a lot of talking going on! Nothing is worse than when you go on a date and your date WON'T TALK! when that happens, I tend to start babbling, and that's seriously bad. Just cut this bit not needed in there. You did well with the date part dont ruin it with negativity.
Hope this is of some use.
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Posted: 11/4/2007 11:19:39 PM | Pati.
Great photos! You did well there.
You seem to be on the right track with your profile, i do have a few suggestions. Imo i would remove
I have baggage sure, who doesn't?? (I am, however, down to Delta regulation of one carry on... with wheels.) everyone does have baggage but it doesn't pay to advertise it.
I would move a few things around. Put all the things about you before you talk about a future partner. Your looking for paragraph/s should be the last thing, get the guy interested. Take it out of your first date area, and put it all together. If you think its getting a bit long then crop but leave things that will prompt questions.
Hope this is of any help
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Posted: 11/4/2007 11:23:48 PM | Big.
Well we get your height from the top info. Not needed.
You say nothing about you. Talk about you. This is your ad!
Write about these 4 things to be safe.
1. About yourself
2. About your interests
3. About what you enjoy doing
4. About what your looking for.
Also are you able to get any other pics, passport ones really dont work that well
Can you rewrite your profile and post again, i would love to see what you come up with
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Posted: 11/4/2007 11:31:36 PM | Nbgirl.
I like your photos, good job there.
As for your profile, your on the right track. The amount of Favs you have proves it. I would suggest that you speak more about yourself, make that the first thing he reads. Interest him, tease him with information about yourself, but leave him wanting more. This makes him want to msg you and ask questions.
As for your last paragraph, i would take that out. You can always just ignore msgs if they are any of those things, but if you get millions of emails then ignore me, or change your mail settings, im sure they have things to stop some of them.
I really do hope this helps
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Posted: 11/5/2007 6:02:59 PM | | Thank you Carly. I do get a lot of responses, they are just not from anyone who thrills me. Unfortunately and they just do not have a filter to those things that are most important. What to do...what to do. But I will rearrange/add more about just plain ol me. Thanks for your advice and time. | |
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Posted: 11/5/2007 6:13:53 PM | hi carly why do i get all older men looking to get laid with no attachment help
i m really very shy and answer emails but dont have the nerve to meet anyone
i m a bit lonely basically happy with my life
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Posted: 11/6/2007 4:06:32 PM | natures.
Pleas take this out...not needed[qoute] have decided to expand on my profile a bit and state a few desires I have in finding my fish...
With the second paragraph, you start well talking about what you enjoy, but the last sentence would make a guy think that you wont have time for them. I understand that being mum and working is time consuming but you dont have to state it on your profile.
Please be a responsible, clean disease & drugs free individual, with something to show for your years on earth other than tons of debt & baggage. Don't tell me all about your ex-wife or wives...I don't really care - of course we all can't stand our ex'es it's a given so keep it to yourself. This makes you sound negative, i know there are guys out there that do talk about this sort of stuff, ignore them, or tell them about this stuff when you start talking to them.
You need to change it around a little, start with about you first and work into about what/who you want to find. It doesn't have to be an essay as long as it does the job selling yourself. ( i know that sounds bad, but thats what we have to do).
Hope this is of some help.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 4:12:31 PM | Dixie.
You do a good job describing yourself. The layout needs to be worked on.. try some paragraphs... makes it easier to read. Talk more about what you enjouy doing and your interests.
I can ROAR when I need to Sorry but does sound to me that you can be angry to ppl. So just leave it at purr. i like that.
You dont say much about who you are looking for. Talk a little on that. Love the quote.
Hope this is of some help
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Posted: 11/6/2007 4:17:11 PM | Buffett.
Expand a bit on what you are talking about, your heading in the right direction. Talk also about what your looking for, i know that people do look at that, it does give off something about yourself too.
Also take some of you mail filiters off, sometimes ppl but friends and such, thinking it wont put pressure on someone but what they are looking for is the love of their life. You can always judge people by their first emails.
Hope this is of some help.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 4:29:08 PM | Eileen.
i get older men asking for sex too, there are a few perves out there, just use your judgement and ignore if you have to, they will get the point.
Maybe you should get out and join a mixed group to open yourself up to meeting new people if you think you cant meet via here. Or talk via IM or phone, give mobile rather then home.
As for your profile....
Your main pis isn't that clear, do you have another? Maybe get dressed up and take a few nice pics of yourself, or someone else do it.
You dont really say much about you. Heres 4 things that i find are great to talk about.
1. About you as a person
2. What you enjoy doing
3. What interests you
4. Who/what you are looking for.
You dont have to go into great detail about everything, but spark some interest with the reader, make them want to get to knoe you more.
You say...
am not sure what I am looking for. Let's meet[/qoute] I think this is your problem about the guys... if your unsure they think that they have what you want. also you say lets meet but you feel you cant face that... why not write that you are a shy person, but when get to know someone you open up...
i hope this is of some help
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