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Posted: 11/23/2007 5:53:12 PM | Agent.
i like yours. Its open and honest. I would say that some men are turned off independent women and ones that know what they want. That would be a downside with your profile.
Yes pics will get you more looks and more msgs, people here will ignore a profile without a pic, but you do have some available, which is good.
Try making first contact. With your pcs attached.
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Posted: 11/23/2007 10:14:35 PM | Joram.
Wow... Loved the intro... best one i have seen!
You address everything i look for in a profile, hey if you were living near me i would contact you.
I would suggest that you dont explain everything, tease women with your info make them msg you.
Still i think you have dont well.
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Posted: 11/23/2007 11:40:02 PM | Surfn.
Sorry gal, didn't mean to miss ya!!!!  hugz.
With the first part of your profile, paragraphs and spacing is a must... big chucks of texts make it hard to read and look too much.
Not a fan of the lists of likes and dislikes, but if they are working for you. You could write these as a paragraph though, if u wanted.
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Posted: 11/23/2007 11:46:30 PM | Psychology.
Your profile is to the point, but lacking in personality. Yuo dont talk about yourself, your interests besides swimming or what you enjoy doing.
You do go negative at a few points in the profile and i suggest taking them out. There are filters for drugs and such and the children thing you can look at their profile. Saying stuff like that can turn some women off, even though they are what your looking for.
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Posted: 11/23/2007 11:52:43 PM | Firemeficatl.
Listing where you lived is great, but it gets confusing how you have done it.
Talk about what you like doing instead of listing them.
You have some out there pics but dont say anything about them... i for one would like to know what they are about.
Get your personality into the profile and it goes far.
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Posted: 11/23/2007 11:58:01 PM | Briz.
Whos gunna shot you down? And yes im getting to reply to your msg.. this just keeps me busy as you can see.
Yuor profile sounds like a resume. You need to Talk about you first. Let your personality shine through.
You should metion that the pic is of your daughter or take them off as some women may get wrong idea... some do sorry to say.
Cut it down a little too, you dont have to explain everything, as long as you dont list.
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Posted: 11/24/2007 12:03:21 AM | Calisteve.
Picture is the main thing on this site... wont go on about it but just letting you know.
you need to talk about what you do like if you are going to say what you are not. This is how people get to see if they have something in common.
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Posted: 11/24/2007 12:08:09 AM | Dough.
Thanks. Ill do my best.
You need to use paragraphs and spacing in your profile make it easier to read.
What are you looking fo on this site? Write a little general outline.
Otherwise i like what you have to say and your pics are good.
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Posted: 11/24/2007 6:11:23 AM | | please tell me what is wrong with me? i thought i had a nice pro file. ive sent messages to more women than i care to admit. i can atleast respect the ones who answer politely not interested but over 2/3 of the messages are not answered. do i look that repulsive? thanks for the help.. john | |
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Posted: 11/24/2007 7:07:00 AM | Hello Carlykitten
I think I cover all the bases in my profile.
I must be missing some thing . I really don't get many first contacts or replies.
Give me you harshest constructive criticism.
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Posted: 11/24/2007 3:11:55 PM | I think I have the same problem with my profile. I will write to several men and never even hear back from them so I am not sure if there is some thing in my profile that is a instant turn off or just have not found the right guy. I would appreciate a true opinion of my profile. Thanks in advance. CINDY | |
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