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Posted: 11/26/2007 7:15:44 AM | I would like for you to give me your honest opinion of my profie or as I call it My resume if you will.
I want to be honest as thats number one with me. But I don't want to be put offish either.
Look forward to your review.
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Posted: 11/26/2007 8:55:25 PM | | Hi, I was just wondering if you could help me with my profile. I know I need a new photo as well as more of em, but what else? Thanks | |
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:20:21 PM | Klp28jr.
I know its hard to write about yourself, but i have found that if you type this like you would say it to someone helps.
eg. 'Hi im ...... im normally found at.... i love to ....... because" Try to talk about yourself, about your interests and whta you enjoy and a little thing about what your looking for. Kepp it light and postitive.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:23:59 PM | Rawlk.
Firstly more pics will help a lot. Try some action shots, doing something you like.
You need to talk about what you enjoy doing and what you are interested in. From what you have written at the moment you have shown som humor i find that it works great in profiles. as long as its not overused.
Also what are you looking for on this site? A general outline will help.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:26:37 PM | Smileybarbie.
I think you have done well with your profile. You show yourself. Maybe a little too much information, you have to try and tease them to make them want to know more.
And im sure you know that if you post a pic you will get more looks and msgs, but it is a personal decsion.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:30:16 PM | Areuher.
You thank us for reading your profile twice, comes off a bit desperate.
Your profile is a bit long, you do talk about who you are looking for more then talking about yourself. This is about showing you off, talk about you, your interests and whta you enjoy doing first and more then what you are looking for on this site.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:37:20 PM | Btoms.
Sorry man, ill get on to it now.
Any pics of just you? A nice one of you smilling and happy as your main one. Its great showing your personality via the pics as you do, but it is nice to just have a pic of you first to grab our attention.
Your first comment makes you sound a bit stuck up. sorry.
What are your interests? What do you enjoy doing? You dont talk about any of that stuff.
Group together in a paragraph what you are looking for. Keep it neat and it looks like you took time to get this right and that gives a good impression on gals.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:40:45 PM | Qtip.
Good job talking about what you are into, but you need to talk a little about you. Who are you?
I would love to see a nice pic of you smilling, when its just you.
Also add a little paragraph about what you are looking for.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:45:45 PM | Xtramana.
Yeah i was on top of these but went away for a few days and its gone crazy, so getting to them today!
Smile! Take a few clear, light nice pics of just you smilling. Would do great.
Interests? What do you enjoy doing? what are you interested in? Thats all that you are missing with your profile.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:51:45 PM | Edclw.
What are you writing? You need to ask a question about what you have read in their profile. You need to connect some how. I found that you wont get answers to everyone of your msg, and that can be harsh, but its just coz your not what they are looking for... and some people are rude.
Who are you? You dont talk about yourself. Talk a little about you, then about what ayou like and are interested in then go on to talk about what you are looking for on this site. Tease them with information about you, get them to want to msg you and want to know more.
Also take the pic of you in the bathers... not the image that you want to present to the men here. Get dressed up, and get a friend to take some pics. Make them of your face and some full body. Smile, laugh have fun with it and it will show in your profile.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:55:41 PM | Mikehhhh.
Love the pics, done well.
Talk about you. This is your ad. You need to sell yourself. Who are you? What do you like to do? What are you interested in? Then have a little something about what you are looking for. Dont just list these things but expand on a few of these.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 4:58:58 PM | 60greeneyes.
Your pics show different views of you but most are dark. Have a day that you get dressed up and take some happy snaps.
I like how you have set out your profile, you write all that i would look for.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 5:03:52 PM | Father3
You dont need the updates but i like who you write about those get togethers. Do talk about that at the end of your profile.
For what you are after i do think that this profile is ok, Maybe talk a little more about what you are interested in and what you like to do.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 5:08:00 PM | Vip.
You need to stop listing everything and write like you are talking to someone about all this. That will grab attention of a woman if it sounds like you put some thought into this.
So talk about you, what you are interested in and what you enjoy then about what you are looking for on this site.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 5:15:53 PM | Lisa Marie.
You are showing your assests in the pic but you may find that this attracts the wrong kind of guys after the one thing.
Talk some nice ones of you nicely dressed up, be happy and show the real you and you will go far.
Carly
Instead of just listing a few things, why not write something about you and interests and what you enjoy like you would say it to someone. Keep it light and flowing it would be great. | |
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