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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:00:08 PM | Rcool.
Great profile.
Thats better then most guys getting mail every few days. Have you gone out there and made first contact? That way you can pick and choose who you want, with out kids.
You could change the want kids option to no as that may help. Im not sure how you could do that as you will get bad responses about this no matter how you say it.
I would suggest going to the ask a girl forum and post in there. they will have more answers then i will be able to give.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:05:15 PM | NotBaldEagle.
I do like your profile. But at first glance, it does seem a lot to read. You list a heap of interests but then dont say much about them.
Hey, not many get lots of msgs, your male and some gals dont think about making first contact. Why not get yourself out there, make first contact, comment on their pics (not their body), ask a question or two about something they have written on their profile. Go onto the forums more, getting yourself out there will mean you wont be passed over much.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:09:57 PM | Pebsr.
Ok the dot point doesn't work for me. You need to type as you would say this stuff. Use paragraphs and spacing. Keep it light and positive. You can be honest and positive at the same time. Dont give all your information away... dating is a discovery process and you need to keep some info.
A profile that is long can be passed over because its just too hard or too much effort. Not saying that is always a bad thing, but the way you have set it out doesn't make it all that interesting. You dont show your personality in there.
Type as you would say it, see how that goes.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:12:52 PM | Steve.
Talk about what you like to do and interests a bit more, you dont need the long song lyric on the end. Maybe a short one, but you dont want it to take up all the room. Keep your links to the end.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:16:29 PM | ~.
You need to talk about you first. Who are you? What do you like to do? What are you interested in? Then a little something about what you are looking for on this site.
I would be more than happy to review again after you have rewritten it.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:21:17 PM | Ave Caesar.
Do you have access to a pic that is just of you for your main one? Pics wil other women dont give the right msg even if she is just sister/ friend.
You list a lot in your profile, they dont work so well, cut down a bit on them. With paragraphs they shouls be more then one sentence. At the moment it gives your profile a messy, 'oh i just remembered this' feel. If it is well written it will come across and will be neat.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:24:36 PM | Refreshme.
You dont talk about yourself. This is your profile. Talk about you, about what you are interested in, what you enjoy then talk about who you are looking for.
This is really important, as we look at your profile to get to know a bit about you and see if we think we click. What do you look for in a profile? Think about this when you write yours.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:34:02 PM | Tncowboy.
I wouuld say its because of your very negative profile that says nothing about you. Not trying to be harsh but its the truth.
You need to keep your profile positive. You need to talk about yourself, interests, what you enjoy and then a little something about what your looking for.
Everyone here has been hurt, thats what happens in the game of love and life, but really going on about it wont get you anywhere. So move on. Dont take everything to heart, i know its hard but its something we must do to survive.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:39:55 PM | Justme.
Talk more about what you like to do and what you enjoy.
Keep it light and positive. There are wierdos out there, but addressing them makes your profile have a negative feel. up to you what you do about this.
Paragraphs and spacing make the profile look neater and is easier to read.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 5:58:07 PM | Babykatz.
So what are you interested in? What do you like to do? It would be nice to hear about that stuff. Maybe there is a guy out there that likes the same.
Paragraphs and spacing would make your profile neater and easier to read. Some guys will just look at that and think essay. if you break it up, it doesn't look to hard to read.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 6:03:40 PM | Spikesn.
Your profile is sort of all over the place. Group things in a paragraph on the same topic. This would make it easier to read as well. Make it neat and well thought out and you will do well. I like what you have wrote.
With your pictures, can you smile? Be happy and show that side of you, it would be nice to see.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 6:06:53 PM | J Goose.
You really have changed it. I like that you have put more humor in this one, you should group this all in one paragraph and no so spaced out. Maybe a little about the real you as you dont talk about you.
Also if you want that one as your main pic, get a nice one showing you to put in as well.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 6:32:45 PM | Jack.
You need to talk more about you. What interests you? Dont just list things talk a little about them, expand on a few.
With your pictures are you able to get one that you are smiling in? Would be great as your main one.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 6:38:59 PM | willobs.
What do yuo like to do? What interests you? You should talk about theses things as you may find someone who likes the same.... but if it isn't on there how will you ever find something in common via just your profile.
Nothing wrong with you to go out there and make first contact, women like to get msgs too.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 6:43:02 PM | Alpha.
You talk about liking heaps of things but then dont say one thing! If there are too many dont talk about them all, but some would be good. Also talk more about you. I know that your daughter is important, but this is your profile. So more about you and some about your daughter.
You need to sell yourself on this site, people are going to judge you on your picture and profile. So make sure your profile stands out. Tease them with information about you. Give a little make them want more....
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Posted: 11/29/2007 6:46:21 PM | Bubblyangel.
So what do you enjoy doing? you talk about music but dont expand, would be nice to hear a little about that.
Also you give info about what interests you but nothing about you as a person. Would love to hear a bit about that.
I like what you have to say, just a few little changes and you will have arocking profile.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 6:49:06 PM | Kpm.
Talk more about your interests and what you like to do. A good way to make it flow easy is to think that you are talking to someone, how would you say this kind of information to someone? This way gives your profile personality and a voice.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 6:56:10 PM | A-cent.
Your pics dont really show you. You need a close, clear one that shows you happy with a smile.
Talk more about your interests and what you like to do. Your pics are interesting, why not a little something about them? Try and keep your profile light and positive because no one likes negativity around in a profile.
There is nothing wrong with making the first contact on here. Comment on their pictures, ask some questions on omething you have read in their profiles.
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