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Posted: 11/29/2007 7:01:49 PM | A kid at heart.
Love the pic of you in the hat... pls make that your main one.
You need to talk a little more about you. Who are you?
What you talk about is a bit young and may turn people off. So keep it but add a few more interests of yours, there must be more.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 7:04:40 PM | 13banks22.
Would say anything weird.
Get rid of the cousin bit. Start with talking about you. Then talk about what interests you and what you enjoy doing. Then end with a little something about what your searching for on here.
The first date part is a great way to show your romantic side. Give a little thought to this.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 7:07:18 PM | Ukulele.
Right.... what can i say about your profile....
Is that how you feel coz at the moment it looks like a joke profile.
If your serious about this site. First put a pic up.
Change your interests to real ones. Talk about yourself, what you like to do and interests and then a little something about what you are looking for. Kepp it positive and you will get some mail.
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Posted: 11/29/2007 10:14:28 PM | | Thanks a lot, I do make first contact, yeah I kinda did the strong view thing to put certain people off, I know, im a bit weird but I want to be with someone who shares the same basic principles as me. | |
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Posted: 12/2/2007 12:44:32 PM | Hey Carly, you had reviewed my profile before & told me to add a pic of me smiling , include how I would be with a woman & put spaces to break up the reading. I finally got around to it.
I've had 2 girls respond, one I talked to 3 nights in a row & then never heard back, she seemed cool & very interested!! weird!! Anywho check it out , see if the changes are for the good. Thank you very much for your help. Enjoy your day. | |
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Posted: 12/2/2007 1:01:13 PM | Carly: I deliberately broke the points up into short sentences. When people see a big block of text, it intimidates them (I don't want to wade through such paragraphs, so I cannot expect other to, either.) So, no, I'm not going to create Kantian or Hegelian sentences for a profile, but thank you for the comment. I've already read too many of that style and I don't like them. I want my profile to be easy to read.
Do you think the list of music should be shorter? This is only a small fraction of my music.
I can crop the photos, but don't people want to see you having fun with other people? | |
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Posted: 12/2/2007 5:09:36 PM | | Hey there, I can't seem to get any women to email me or anything and was wondering what I might be doing wrong. Please help me and just be honest if it sucks I need to kno and if it does could you please help me dress it up maybe. TY for your time and I checkedc out ur prfile and want to say you are a very pretty woman. God Bless | |
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Posted: 12/4/2007 5:55:23 PM | 13unny.
Ok, take out the part about your breakup... nothing to do with this profile. There are weirdos out there, dont mention your daughters name.
Your profile is very long and really goes over the same points. You say you will answer all questions then you say you wont answer some. it looks like you just wrote what was filling your mind.
You need to keep it structured. Talk about you, then about what you are interested in, then what you do for fun and end with a little something on what you are looking for.
Your pics are not fully clear and really dont show you. Take some nice ones showing you and not just head shots.
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Posted: 12/4/2007 6:04:49 PM | Dylan206
Im not a fan of the listing. I love to read a profile where i can get a sense of the person from it. Yours sounds like a resume. Type like you would talk to some one, how would you talk about this to another? Would you expand on somethings or just say i like books, reading, movies.? Or would you say i love to read when im alone, at the moment im reading..... i find that this author does..... . Let people in.
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