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Posted: 12/4/2007 6:10:24 PM | Click.
Photos!!! You need more. Take some nice head shots that are clear and show you happy and smilling.
You talk about sharing interests but dont talk about them. I know they are listed above but please talk a little about them, its nice to read about what you like about things. Talk about yourself a little more too.
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Posted: 12/4/2007 6:13:16 PM | Xina.
So what do you enjoy doing? what interests you? Talk a little on these, but dont list them.
Post a few more pics of yourself, more pics always helps.
Take some of your mail restrictions off, there may be the perfect guy out there for you but cant msg.
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Posted: 12/4/2007 6:31:47 PM | Flaun.
Should be in your edit profile page, one of the first things you can change.
Any photos with clothes on? Maybe on of the top off, but then the rest should be with clothes on.
I hate lists. Makes me think you couldn't be bothered really putting effort into this. If you have trouble writting about yourself, then just type the content you have as though you were talking to someone, you wouldn't list it if you were saying, you would add some detail.
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Posted: 12/4/2007 6:43:16 PM | Delilish.
I love what you wrote, it what im looking for.
I would say though, it is a bit long and you dont talk about what you enjoy doing or your interests that much.
What are you sending to women? Send a typical first contact to me and i will see if we can improve it.
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Posted: 12/4/2007 7:27:34 PM | Lonely.
Thanks for that.
Yuo really dont say anything in your profile, You shouls talk about yourself, what you are interested in and what you enjoy doing then finish off wiht a little something about what you are looking for.
I say this to many, but i find it really works.... Type like you are talking to someone about this stuff. You wouldn't list it but would expand on what you are saying.
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Posted: 12/4/2007 7:30:00 PM | Hi Carly,
I would greatly appreciate it if you could review my profile and be brutally honest. I rarely get any e-mails or responses to e-mails I send out. Maybe that is normal, but it doesn't do much for the ego. Anyway, I would appreciate any advice you can provide.
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Posted: 12/4/2007 7:41:26 PM | Snakeyez.
Your main pic should be of just you, show yourself happy and smilling.
I love what you have to say about yourself, really gives a sense of personality to your profile. I would suggest cutting it down a bit, maybe its a bit long and they are not really reading it.
Also you dont talk about your interests and what you enjoy doing. Always worth a metion.
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Posted: 12/6/2007 4:56:02 PM | Lunasdaddy.
Well first do you have any other pics then the one with the two hot chicks? Not the best pic to show you off to a gal.
You dont talk about what you enjoy doing and what you are interested in. Give a little on this. Maybe out there, there is someone that had the same interests as you....
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Posted: 12/6/2007 4:59:01 PM | 2Blovedeternal.
Any pics of just you? Would work better on the main pic. Show yourself clearly and not too far away.
I cant really understand what you are saying in your profile, its kids of all over the place, Paragraphs work easier, dont have to be long ones but not one sentence ones.
Talk about you, your interests and what you enjoy doing, then a little something on what your lookin for.
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Posted: 12/6/2007 5:07:26 PM | BDRT.
You dont talk about you. Who are you? Talking about yourself will give more personality to your profile.
I like what you have wrote and the way it is written. Keep it up just add a little on you. Also maybe a few more pics that are not just the face shots.
Everyone gets way more views then they get emails. always going to happen just be patient and it will happen.
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Posted: 12/6/2007 5:26:55 PM | Beachgirl.
You need to write more in your about you part.
Start off talking about yourself. Tell them who you are... What do you enjoy doing? What are you interested in? Also what are you looking for on this site?
Rewrtie and ill be glad to have another look.
Pics are good!!!
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Posted: 12/6/2007 5:43:02 PM | Schmittie.
If your going to have pic on profile would be better if we can see you... this pic in way to dark.
You need to make use of paragraphs and spacing. make it look neat. Talk more about your interests and who you are... the things we want to hear from you.
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