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Posted: 12/8/2007 2:30:16 AM | | I'm trying something new. Hopefully something that will encourage women to actually respond, since I find it really tough to find a way to captivate somebody I have never met. Let me know what you think. | |
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Posted: 12/8/2007 10:57:41 AM | Hi
I would like you to review my info what`s wrong with it ? I can`t seem to keep a woman's attention . Why does a woman advertise on here and then put on so many mail blocks a priest couldn`t contact her . I`m in my 40`s never married no children own my house ,make to much money no hang up`s ? If i was a woman i`d grab me up in a sec. all i seem to attract are over weight women that can`t see them selves in a merrier or something ???? i suggest tall slim i get short over weight women contacting me i find this very frustrating and ready to pull my add and forget about the whole thing ? | |
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Posted: 12/11/2007 7:38:18 PM | Hey Carly!!! How's everything? I just checkin' in on ya. Missed ya the other day at the Christmas Ball. I wasn't feeling so good and had to miss it. I hear you were gorgous! All that skating has really transformed you. I hear you brought the house down with your improve too! You go girl!!! I can't believe you dogged out what's her name. She needed to be knocked down a level or two...
I'll catch ya at the A&P later. I'm headin' there now to grab a fresh cup of joe before I head out. Their cranberry-spinish muffins are the bomb! You ever try the banana-rose ones? They'll set you free... Maybe I'll see ya over there.
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Posted: 12/12/2007 9:39:00 PM | Fourheatone.
You list your interests as they are stated above your about me section. Why not try to talk a little about them, expand on a few. Your spacing is all over the place try keeping every paragraph spaced by one line, make it neat and easy to read.
Just saying your witty, doesn't mean you are. Try adding a little humor to the content of your profile.
You also have a spelling mistake in your head line.. "Does it look like a drink a ton of beer" It doesn't really make sence... maybe an in joke...
What are your interests and passions? What really gets you excited? Would be nice to hear about these.
Carly
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Posted: 12/12/2007 9:55:59 PM | Way2fastss.
Ok, first i would take out the pic of you sticking your finger up. Not very nice... hehe.
Paragraphs would work well with your profile. Make it look neat and organised. Spell checks are important as you will be judged not only your pic, content but also your grammer and spelling.
What do you enjoy doing? what are your passions or interests? You dont talk about them at all.
Other relationship to me is asking for a "good time" Is that what you are after? As you confuse when you talk about monogamy.
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:01:29 PM | Pat D.
Ok, you talk about you and the girl you would like to meet, but what do you like to do? Besides party at Barrie? What are your interests? Your dreams for the future? What do you do for fun? How about what your studying? You say firefighter... talk a little about why you wanted to do that.
Put some life into your profile, give it substance and you will go far.
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:06:31 PM | Karzak.
You have done a great job with what you have written but nothing about what you are interested in. So what are you interested in? What makes you go 'WOW"? What do you do for fun? Besides the whole gorilla thing... lol
Add a little about them, dont just list.
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:13:55 PM | Meenie2.
I dont know what to suggest... i like it. Maybe you could take some more pics, get dressed up, looking all pretty and get your kids to take a few for you.
I wish you all the luck on your search.
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:26:37 PM | CSIAnaheim.
So you live you life... i like the way that you are thinking, but you dont say anything about you. Who are you? Describe yourself, let us get to know a little about you.
What interests you? What do you do for fun?
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:29:44 PM | Downtoearth.
I like the idea you have, but it is a bit confusing and hard to read. how about explaining what they should do with the blanks at the start? Because i dont know if you want me to fill or you are going to later.
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:40:53 PM | Happyman.
You need to get some more pics, dress up nicely, look happy and get someone to take them for you. Show yourself, happy and smilling. Some full body and some head shots.
Prefer not to say under drugs means that you do... everyone does assume that.
You have a couple of spelling mistakes, just run through a spell checker before saving, always helps. Use paragraphs with each new topic, with a spance inbetween, as this makes the profile neat and easy to read.
So what are your interests? What do you do for fun? Who are you? You dont talk about you. less focus on the height and weight of a gal and more on you, this is afterall your profile.
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:44:58 PM | Ajinboca.
I like what you have written. You have good content but the set up is wrong. First make paragraphs on the differing topics, use a once line spance inbetween these paragraphs. Make it neat and easy to read and they will want to read it.
You pictures are not too clear, are you able to get a good head shot that is clear? then you can keep the rest.
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:48:37 PM | Not c thru.
So what do you enjoy doing? What are your passions and interests? You have done a great job describing yourself and i love it, but a little more content about what you like to do will help show who you are to those who read it.
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