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Posted: 12/14/2007 7:17:20 AM | Hi Carly,
Please give my profile a review. I've been searching for good feedback for a while, but no one wants to give any REAL feedback, just 'it looks good' 
I appreciate you taking the time to do this.
1.) What you don't you like about my profile. What are your biggest turnoffs in a profile. I'm not interested in someone saying it looks good because everything can be improved.
2.) What's missing from the profile that you'd like to see
3.) Photos? Add some, drop some?
4.) What's your overall feeling after reading the profile
Cheers,
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Posted: 12/18/2007 8:17:44 PM | Monchichi008.
I like that you do talk about yourself, and your job and what you are looking for. But im not a fan of listing. Start about you, like you have add more about what you do for fun, what your interests are.
Dont use headlines for every topic. Just start a new paragraph for the new topic. You can use one for what you are looking for. The quotes are not needed, unless you leave a short one at the end.
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Posted: 12/18/2007 8:24:36 PM | Free man.
I like what you have written, really shows off your personality and views. I would suggest maybe a couple more pics that show your face and maybe an action shot. Dont get me wrong i love what you have done with your pics but they dont really show you.
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Posted: 12/18/2007 8:30:41 PM | Dawnfaith.
Good job on your content. You dont give everything away, but make them ask more.
I would suggest a little part on what you are interested in and what you enjoy doing.
Paragraphs and spacing help too, so its not just a heap of text stairing back at them, they wont want to read.
As for your friends profiles, tell them to talk about themselves, what they are interested in, what they enjoy doing and a little something on who they would like to meet. You have to get your personality on this profile, so dont be scared to go out there and try something new. Its only a profile and can be changed.
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Posted: 12/18/2007 8:38:43 PM | Steelersgirltina.
Um I wouldn't say three lines is too much. You need to talk about yourself. What are your interests? What do you enjoy doing? Who do you hope to get from this site?
Change your main pic to the one in the blue top. The teddybear could turn some off.
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Posted: 12/18/2007 9:39:52 PM | Hi, carlykitten .. I could really use some pointers..I think you've probably been inundated with requests for reveiws, but I'm totally open to your feedback..it's constructive and very right on. So let me have it, otherwise..I think I've had it!!
No rush..it's the Holidays!!  
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Posted: 12/18/2007 11:17:08 PM | Hi Carly. You are a champ for doing this.
My main query is about what I should do regarding photo choices. Which one should be my main? Is there anything I'm missing that people look for? Am I saying too much? Not enough? Any advice would be great. | |
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Posted: 12/20/2007 3:38:47 PM | Johhny.
We need to hear more about you as a person, not just what you do... and how you dance..lol.
So who are you? What are your dreams? What inspires you?
Otherwise i like the rest of your profile... keep up good work.
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Posted: 12/20/2007 5:07:44 PM | Carly, need some feedback. Not reaching my age group, only getting respomses from 10-15 years my senior. Can you see why in my profile? Or is is just a fluke.......
Thanx, anything helps........getting discouraged,
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