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Posted: 11/6/2007 4:33:02 PM | One.
First take out that dark pic, cant see your face so no point it being there.
You do talk about you, which is good, how about talking more about your interests. This isn't a resume and you can have fun with it. You talk about your humor, why not make it funny?
Add what you are looking for too, not much but a little something always helps.
Hope this is of some use.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 4:54:58 PM | King.
I suggest that you change your main pic to the head shot. btw love the b&w pic!
You could work on the layout, use paragraphs as it makes it easier to read.
He is my highest priority as a parent i know this is the case, but stating it does give off a wrong msg. Sort of saying, you will never be as important and i wont change to love you. People that get to know you will understand what you are saying later on, but on the profile, people just dont get some of these things.
Any questions I am an open book. So just ask, and I will point to the correct page. If you make your profile interesting with info about you, what you enjoy, interests you will get msgs asking for more info. A lot of people so put this so it doesn't make your profile stand out.
Hope this is of some use.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 5:05:39 PM | Molly
You dont talk much about you, let us know who you are. What interests you? I know you have children but what do you enjoy doing when you have time to yourself? Guys want to know this because that is the time you will firstly be spending with them.
I know you are incorperating your humor into the profile, but it does come off a little harsh, esp in the last paragraph. Maybe back off a bit with intense humor but leave a few things in.
Sometimes your writing does sound negative esp when you are talking about guys that are looking at your profile. Try not to be too negative as that does put off some guys. Talk about what you are looking for, not what not. You can ignore the emails of guys that you just dont like or are in your 'what not' box.
Maybe add a couple more pics as the one in the mirror shows you have a cam, not your face. Maybe your kids could take a few of you.
I hope this is some help to you
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Posted: 11/6/2007 5:10:09 PM | Heita. Chuck
Well you mention sex 3 times in your interests? this that what you are after. What do you mean with activity partner.
If you are just here for some fun/ sex say so in your profile. As you say you are honest, so be so.
You dont really talk much about you, doesn't give much for some one to ask about. So talk more about you, your interests and such. Let them know what they are in for.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 5:27:22 PM | Random.
Are you able to get any pics of just you as they work better as your main pic.
and here is the part where most females will stop reading... ready? okay here goes...i'm on probation, i smoke pot, and i think it's okay to smoke... i enjoy the lifestyle, and i think you can accomplish your lifes goals and still smoke marijuana. i'm technically homeless, i'm living with a friend until i'm out of debt... i just got out of a crazy 5 year relationship a few months ago, my car looks like a piece of spray painted crap, but it's reliable.
Your right gals wll stop reading after this, some because of what it says others how it is so out there and forward. Part of dating is the discovery process. don say that your homeless... you can say your living with a friend without question. We all have baggage, (old relationships) But talking about them on the profile will put girls off.
I would suggest cropping your profile, you talk about yourself, but dont leave anything for someone to want to ask questions. You want to tease with the information, spark an interest to know you better.
Hope this is of some help
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Posted: 11/6/2007 5:30:49 PM | Kenny.
Im sorry to say but your profile is boring.
You dont talk about yourself, you basically say nothing about your interests or what you enjoy doing or what your searching for.
Are you able to write something down, doesn't have to be perfect, just so it shows you. give your profile some personality.
When you have i would love to take another look, if you would like.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 5:52:21 PM | Mystycal.
Are you able to get any pics of just yourself, i find that they work better as main pics.
Take the first sentence about getting the pics, they are here now so dont need it.
Religion to me is not the best thing to talk about on your profile, its for introducing yourself. Also you do come on very strong about it and that can turn gals off.
With internet dating, your profile is your ad. It has to sell you. Point to your good points as well as showing you. So going so strong about religion isnt the best marketing. Thats what the discovery process in emails and msgs if for.
I hope this helps
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Posted: 11/6/2007 5:52:35 PM | | I would really appreciate if you reviewed my profile. Ive been getting pretty frustrated about finding love and I wonder if I'm starting off on the wrong foot. Be honest...it is greatly appreciated. Thank you | |
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Posted: 11/6/2007 6:02:01 PM | Jeff.
Are you able to get more pics, this would help.
Its about you section, talk about yourself. You need to grab attention to who you are, what you enjoy and interests. Tease them with information leave them asking for more. This gives them something to msg you about.
Rewrite and id love to take another look.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 6:07:01 PM | Eric.
its true, writing about yourself will increase the no of msgs. just write what you think describes you, talk about what you enjoy, your interests.. you have a few, talk about them.
Your profile has to sell you. Gals will look at the pics say well he's cute but he doesn't say much... doesn't make me want to know more. its all about first impressions... so try your best, be yourself and you will shine.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 6:11:05 PM | Avno.
Smile!! I would love to see a pic of you smiling!
You need to set your profile out so its easier to read, such as paragraph form. Otherwise i like what you have to say, you could expand it a bit to include more about your interests.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 6:15:14 PM | Thesxchef.
Pic? Are you able to put one up? They really do make a hell of a difference on this site.
You talk about what your looking for thats great but you barely talk about you. This is your profile, sell yourself. Talk about what interests you, describe yourself, tell a joke, but let your personality shine through. Thats what this is all about.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 6:22:57 PM | God.
Love the pics... pitty your all the way over there...
With this site, its best not to get your hopes up, dont look for love, but for new people/ friends, then you can be surprised when love comes your way with no disapointments.
ok on to your profile..
It is a little hard to read, maybe change to paragraphs or something similar. The easier to read then the more it will be read.
If you want expand on yourself and your interests... name your fav movie, tv show or music. give something for a gal to ask questions on. Spark their interest in you.
A few changes will go a long way. I dont see that you should have too much a problem. Lower your expectations of finding love and be surprised on what happens...
I wish you luck.
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Posted: 11/6/2007 6:30:06 PM | Yoz.
I like the pics and the way you talk about them. I would say that it is a bit long for my liking but its up to you what you will do with this advice.
You talk about what your interested in but not about you. We love ti know what you describe yourself as. Also what your looking for on this site. dont go into detail but some general guidelines always is good.
hope this is of some help.
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