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jards
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Msg: 126 | |
| | I'll review your profile, tell the truth and help you out.Page 6 of 37 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37) | | carley would you mind having another look now that I've mae some changes | |
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Posted: 11/11/2007 4:37:46 AM | Lazerrin.
This is a very negative profile. Talk about you, your interests, what you enjoy and who you are looking for on here. Dont talk about your ex on your profile, talk later if someone asks you. Everyone has baggage, check it at the door. Make your profile about you, sell you
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Posted: 11/11/2007 4:48:41 AM | Pip.
Tried to email cant get past your mail blockers so it on here.
Well your profile is ok i guess if you are wanting sexual incounters. Sounds that way to me. If thats not what you want then tallk more about yourself. I would take out the maybe more part and webcam if want to change it at all.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 4:55:10 AM | Guz.
I like it. Whats the secret... i have a very loud and intelligent 3 yr old running around... hehe
One suggestion would be to add a little section on what type of lady you are looking for, not a list or anything but just general points.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 6:13:39 AM | Sunbeam.
Sorry its taken a while, as i explained in another post, i was unable to get the site running on my computer for some reason.
I like your profile, you seem to have gotten help from other threads... its a good profile..
Good luck
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Posted: 11/11/2007 7:46:50 AM | I sincerely knew you had a good reason Carly! You didn't strike me as someone that would just "drop the ball" so to speak!  I did get some help, yes, because you inspired me to do something with my profile....I still think it needs some work so please don't hesitate in adding your 2 cents worth. It's GREAT that you are taking the time to do this for people. There is nothing better that another persons opinion to shed some light on things! Don't wear yourself out though kiddo! Glad your back!   | |
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Posted: 11/11/2007 2:14:35 PM | Sunbeam.
I really didn't think i would get this many responses but am enjoying doing this.
A suggestion i would make with your profile is to talk a little about your interests... yes they are listed above, but sometimes a little more detail is needed to gain his attention.
Otherwise your profile makes you sound like a happy person, who is sure of themself and knows what they want.
Good luck and thanks
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Posted: 11/11/2007 2:20:23 PM | JJ3.
Wow. Love what you have to say. I would suggest putting some space in there just so it doesn't seem like an essay, but that first paragraph got me... Loved it.
Your main pic doesn't really seem to suit what you wrote. It looks like you have had a few too many. Try a nice one with a smile as your main and maybe add a few action shots.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 2:27:26 PM | rodbender.
One of your pics in front of the casino looks like you have horns... just letting you know.
opening paragraph. Change it.
Do you have both the means sounds like you want her to pay. And
Are you drug free, and a non-smoker i know these are important quailities but does make your profile start off negative.
I do like what you say otherwise, it is honest and to the point.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 2:28:19 PM | Jaack.
Ok wont comment on pics but will say the best ones for a main one is clear, of just you and smilling. Also action shots work well too, showing interests off.
For women who have children: I think kids are great. I spent too much time in the wrong relationship. This comment and the following paragraph are not needed and can be said when talking to someone down the track.
You dont talk more about your interests, give a little tease of detail, let them want to know more. And who are you looking for on this site? Give a general outline, eg. loves animals. There is always something that your really after that your perfect gal will have..
Also change your first date thing, let a romantic side out. Talk about the perfect first date that you would have
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Posted: 11/11/2007 4:08:50 PM | getu1.
You dont let anyone know much about you. Talk about what you enjoy doing, how you describe yourself. what do you want out of this life?
Maybe get some more pics of you. Different angles and maybe some action shots.. show yourself doing stuff you enjoy.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 4:22:02 PM | Hard.
Your profile is very negative. Your profile has got to be an ad for you. You have to sell yourself. I dont mean sexually or lies. Like with ads they talk about the product. So talk about you, what you like to do your interests and what you are looking for on here. Lists are never a good idea, nor is a huge essay about it.
Also you talk about wanting a man to be a father for your son. i know this is something that will happen if you find someone and fall inlove but on a profile it will scare guys away.
I hate guys that wont give a girl a chance cause shes not hot enouph for them and not skinny enouph for them, you ever hear it's whats on the inside that counts?
If you don't like what I have written thats your problem and if you don't like the way I look to bad for you your loss and you know what you can do. Please take these out because they are very negative and will turn guys off. If the dont like you or what you write they wont msg... simple as that.
Also there are a few spelling mistakes, maybe a spell check would help.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 4:37:59 PM | Ok mr Jeff.
Your main pic has to grab attention. Yours is a little blurry. Do you have one where it clearly shows you smiling and face on?
Talk about you a bit more. Tell us what you enjoy doing. Something we can msg you and ask questions about. Spark our interest in you.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 4:56:37 PM | Me.
Do you have any lighter pics, these are too dark to really see you
I know you dont want it to be too long, but maybe a little thing on what your looking for on here. About you and your interests.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 5:08:34 PM | | I`ll take all the help I can get ! | |
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Posted: 11/11/2007 5:09:32 PM | Robwarren.
Firstly take the dark pic out, cant see anything so it is useless.
You have made the profile direct and also a bit wordy. Less is sometimes more. Tease with info about yourself. Dating is a discovery process and telling all now means you may not have anything to talk about later.
As to soften it, im not one to change how a person is. that is how you are, and someone is going to have to like you for that person.
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Posted: 11/11/2007 5:15:06 PM | czar.
You dont talk about yourself. let us see you as you see you. If you want to talk to someone, then have something to talk about, give them something to ask about on your profile. Tease them with info about you
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bende
| | Joined: 11/3/2007
Msg: 150 | |
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Posted: 11/11/2007 7:45:00 PM | Hi Carly
Thanks so much for your imput. Though I I am not sure the slight changes will get me any response, it is worth a try. And by the way those are horns in the picture, it was halloween.
Very Best wishes
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