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Posted: 11/13/2007 3:59:36 PM | Hardeep.
You need to change your main pic. I like the one thats the close head shot, when your outside. Shows you.
What are you writing to gals? Is it a general msg that you send? Take some time reading their profile, comment on their pic and ask a question about something they said. There will always be some that dont respond. Dont take it too heart... i send msgs and only get a few responses, sometimes your not just their cup of tea. I find that if you dont have any expectations about this site then you will be surprised when you find something.
I dont think that your profile is that bad. Talk a little mor about you, this is your little spot, use it.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 4:41:33 PM | MrKevin
Your main pic needs to be clear and light. Cant really see you. This pic is the one that your judged on the most, the one thats looked at before the profile is.
Take out the part about your past relationship, everyone has baggage, just check it at the door and get it out if asked.
With the list of requirements, it will turn gals off that even fit into what you want, best use your mail settings and if they get thru then you can use your judgement.
You dont talk about what your interested in, what you enjoy doing. These are the thinks gals are looking for to see if they match.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 5:42:01 PM | Pmb00cs.
Smile!! Photos are better when you smile. Take some of you happy. Show that your a happy guy.
So what are your interests? Besides one day travelling? What do you do for fun? You dont really say much about you. This is your ad.. sell who you are, make women want to know you.
Also take out the part about email for more sort of thing, everyone says this and they will email if they want to know more about you.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 6:44:28 PM | Past.
Ok, im sure that you have heard bout your pics, if your able to clear ones will work better.
So what are your interests? What do you do for fun? Gals like to read about you and your interests so that they can find out about you with no pressure, so tease them with some information.. make them msg you.
I like how you use your humor. The spacing is a bit off... keep it neat and easy to read and you will go a long way.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 6:56:45 PM | Chew.
The main pic is everything on this site, get that right and then your profile gets looked at, then a msg if profile is great. Are you able to get more pics.. Clear light pics of you smilling? Action shots showing what you enjoy doing.
Ok your profile is short but sweet... you talk about some of your interests but who are you? What/ ho are you looking for on this site, besides someone that has a
positive attitude Talk a little more on that.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:02:29 PM | Mrnicevil.
Pictures!!! You need to get some or even one picture that shows you, clearly and smiling! show that pretty face! get some one to take one after you have prettied yourself up, you have to make and impression on this site. Also action shots of doing what you enjoy work well too.
With your profile, who are you? What ae your interests? You talk about what you are looking for and that is good but you need to talk about you first. Thats what we really want to hear. You dont have to give a life story but a little information will go a long way. Get them interested in you and you will get the msgs.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:09:30 PM | Scubagrrrl.
Do you have access to any other pics of your self? Get made up and dress up and get a friend to take a few. The main pic has to grab attention. Do some of your face, smilling and some body shots. Show you off!!
Your profile is very simple and sort of reads like a list. With your interests talk a little about them, not just list it does that for you above. How are you? Describe yourself a bit more then trusting and trustworthy. Also who are you looking for on this site? Give a gerenal note about what you are searching for.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:14:08 PM | umm I dont know if your going in sequence but did you by chance miss me?
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:18:42 PM | Random.
Im a Victorian thats forced to be up here... hehe
First swap those paragraphs around... about you first. You talk about your studies but not about yourself. Who are you What do you enjoy and your interests? You say you spend time on your hobby but dont say wat it is. If you name it, there maybe someone out there that has the same hobby.
Also do you have any other pics? A good one would be of you smilling, show that happy face.
Good luck, nice to see an aussie here.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:19:47 PM | Past
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:21:09 PM | Hey!
I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at mine and give me a few suggestions.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:46:10 PM | Nzerosc.
Smile and the how world will smile back. Are you able to get a pic of you smilling? Will work wonders.
Lots of people just look around... everyone gets it... 10 looks maybe 1 msg if lucky.
As for your msgs, what are you sending? Send one to me so i can see what your doing.
The best way to msg is to read their profile and then comment on their picture, like a gentleman and ask a question about what you read. You may not get any response just read/deleted dont take it to heart, sometimes people are just rude. If their not deleting this could just mean they have read the msg but dont have time to respond.
Your profile is very deep, maybe a bit to deep. It comes on strong at the start. How about try this.... if it doesn't work you can always change it.
1. Start off talking about yourself. Nothing too much, just a light short descriptionof your personality.
2. Talk about your interests. What takes your interest? What would you love to do one day.
3. Talk about what you enjoy doing? What do you do in your free time for fun?
4. A little something about what/ who you are looking for on this site.
I find that these four things are what people are looking for in a profile. Quotes are ok if they are short ones, you can always tell someone that quote at a later stage.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:53:27 PM | Logan.
You main pic should be of you, clear and smilling. It should be able to grab the attention of the ladies.
With your profile, you really need to say something about you. This is where you are either gonna get there attention or lose it. So talk about you; give a brief description about your personality. Talk about your interests; what gets your attention, what do you think about doing?. Talk about what you enjoying doing when you have spare time. What are you looking for on here? Write a brief general outline of the kind of gal your looking for.
Also in your first date section, write about your perfect date. What would you do for a gal to spoil her and show her you are interested?
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Posted: 11/13/2007 7:57:54 PM | | I wonder why you want to do this ? I'm not trying to be offensive here, however your profile doesn't really tell much about you either, therefore I'm wondering why you think you would be able to help others ? I get about 10 - 20 comments a day about my profile. But after being plagarised many times, don't really want to help others. Just curious | |
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Posted: 11/13/2007 8:02:14 PM | Davemc.
Are you able to access any other pics of you? A face on one of you smilling would be great.
You list your interests but dont talk about them, explain or talk a little about them. Tell us about you. Tell us what you do for fun. what are you looking for?
As a parent i understand this and feel the same way but saying it on the profile does come out wrong
will always come first To some women this says dont bother trying to get close, you never will. You can work it into conversation later on, an most women will accept it as a given, but the statement here is too harsh if you understand what im getting at.
if you would like to come and ask me anything else drop me a line. If they are interested they will dont worry.
I also dont understand the second part of the last line.. maybe others dont as well.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 8:05:38 PM | Girlinlust.
Im sure i dont know everything, my profile has been working as im getting around 10 msgs a day. I just like to try and help people and this is a way i can on here.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 8:17:28 PM | Alpha.
You look a tad angry in your main pic. Do you have a happy one?
What do you enjoy doing? what are your interests? what are you looking for on this site? Talk a little more on these things.
I would leave this out as it does sound negative
dont like drama, games, bullsh*t in general. Im a simple guy. I hate complications and negativity on the profile doesnt come off that well.
What would you love to do for a first date? Just write a little bit, gals love to read it
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Posted: 11/13/2007 8:30:31 PM | Blahishness.
Yuo have some interesting pics and an attitude which is great but you dont tallk about yourself. If you want to talk to someone and be friends you have to have some things in common. I know it lists interests above the about me section but expand on them. Tell one of your interesting odd facts. Just them them know its you.
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