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Posted: 11/14/2007 10:21:23 PM | WOLFYEYZ: hey, come outta the box strong! don't wimp out here. the intro pic is great. here's a question. i know you're lookin' to move, but what if you met a girl there that also wanted to move -- rules out the "i'm not looking for a long-term thing," right?
i like the honesty about the first date thing. i'll be honest. i NEVER spend that much on a first date. in today's world, if two people can't be happy with nothing, they'll never be happy. personally, if someone is impressed only by where you take them and how much you're spending, what's going to happen down the road? i'll tell, they'll drop you like a hat. happened to me once too many times. ...and i get hit up for the craziest things once they see the car i drive and where i live; however, that's for my family (mom, dad and son) to enjoy -- not them!
i'm rootin' for you bud! again, the intro pic says a lot. you might wanna script in something about your dog -- maybe a note on a memory with him or her.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 9:29:48 AM | CHAPPY69: you'll get looks, bro! here's the problem -- your HONEST!!! a large percentage of these water are reinventing themselves via this site. that's what urged me to writing the things in my profile that i did. plus i'm odd as #uck, but tell me a writer that isn't.
A couple of pointers: first, let's change your intro to: Double your pleasure... -or- Have your cake and eat it too... -or- Experimental quest: join our team. -or- Get funky tonight! -or- Ever thought of....
this are just ideas, but i put thought into them. i think you guys are the real deal and hats off. soooooo many people toe test with this, but you guys are just "doing it" ...and you're being sheer honest about what you're looking for. hey, if someone doesn't like this, why the hell are they even wasting their time with reading your profile and commenting back.
Last note, throw a full body pic on there -- maybe with both of you smiling with her laying on top, but make it cute, harmless and simple. this will help break the ice of those that can't picture themselves with you guys -- now they can seeing both of you together.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 11/15/2007 9:39:14 AM | BRINBAY: you're the real deal. it's a pleasure to met someone like you! i bet scuba is awesome up there.
okay, the intro pic is a bit fuzzy; i like it, but it needs to be cleared up. if it's a jpeg, throw onto some software and sharpen it up. if not have a friend snap a shot. lossen up too when your taking it. i bet your guy that's never late, can call in the middle of the night and just knows how to live life -- so show that with a beautiful, easy-going smile.
i think your profile is done. as for not getting responces, check out my other treads. i've started about a dozen and just see what's left -- it's just the society we are living in -- shock value sells -- i know -- i sell %#it every day with this in mind, but it's all going to change now with the writer strike -- say good by to TV and the generations to come will be radically different!
best,
chris
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Posted: 11/15/2007 10:11:28 AM | MUSICALCHEF22: AWESOMEEEEE!!!! you're goin' places. if your music turns out HALF as good as this you'll be "song writer of the year," someday -- which for all those amerian idol lovers and hates. a new reality series is coming out called the "the songwriter" -- it's the real deal. no more karaoke'n, folks.
your pic's tell some awesome stories for people to listen to.
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Posted: 11/15/2007 10:24:34 AM | GOLFERBALD: okay, you just gotta scrap this one and start all over. you're a sincere guy -- especially doing what you do for a living -- hats off!!!
now, golferbald -- i guess if i was using golfer, mine would be golfersux -- i gave up. case in point: that's an interest -- put it under that section.
about you: get into some of your life here. tell me what's it like to work with the folks you do everyday? what do you do in your free time? do you cook? -- you look like you watch what you eat some i'm thinking you like to cook -- i'm been known to be wrong, but hey, i make a living offa being a storyteller. what kinda gal you looking for: pinics or take out chinese. would it make you happy if she golfed? would you teach someone to golf? do you read books -- if so, what kind. who would you reccomd, etc.
really put sometime in this because the real fish out there will take the time to read a profile.
last, pic's, pic's, pic's.... these puppies sell us like cupcakes when we're really a fruitcake deep down inside.
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