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Posted: 11/15/2007 11:50:52 PM |
BRINBAY:
okay, the intro pic is a bit fuzzy; i like it, but it needs to be cleared up. if it's a jpeg, throw onto some software and sharpen it up. if not have a friend snap a shot
I've tried having friends take a pic, but they always turn out hideous. I hate to admit that the main one is a scan from my work ID. Probably better to schedule a sitting with a pro. I haven't had that done for quite a while, time to get some recent shots. Thanks for your feedback! | |
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Posted: 11/16/2007 3:25:45 AM | Thank you :) (there is a place for emoticons)
I'm working on the photos. It's difficult when I live in a Shack in the middle of nowhere.. all on me own-io (can you hear those violins?). Actually I'm waiting to save up for unfeasibly large quantities of Botox. Failing that Vaseline... to smear on the lens, ok?
Can I be so bold and make one comment about your's? I've never heard of Pablo Cohelo. Paolo Cuelho, on the other hand, I have read once... (never again!)
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Posted: 11/16/2007 7:33:53 AM | Alright, hit me with your best shot... I'm figuring it may be too heavy, and I'm not talking about my weight!! lol.
I have a couple of pics I put up but took off. One is just a wimpy web cam, blue tinted.. the other has my daughter in it in her prom dress (not into setting myself to be hit up by pervs ;)) and well, I've lost 25.5 lbs since then.. sooo I figured I'd wait until I can get a few newer snaps put up. I can send them to you, see what you think... or re-add them for your critique.
And yeah, I can talk.. or write.. too much sometimes :).
btw, call me blond (sorry no offense ladies, I was born blond before the colours changed) or out to lunch, but what is up with the writers' strike... if you don't mind me inquiring :D | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 6:03:41 PM | GUYS, DOLLS, EVERYONE THAT'S VISITED ME IN THE PAST FOUR DAYS -- I'M SORRY, I WAS OUT OF TOWN! NEXT TIME I'M POST AT LEAST A MESSAGE OR IF SOMEONE COULD SHOOT ME AN EMAIL WITH A NUMBER I'LL PROGRAM YOU IN MY PHONE AND I YOU COULD POST SOMETHING FOR ME. I DON'T THINK I'LL HAPPEN AGAIN, BUT JUST IN CASE.
OKAY, I'M CATCHING UP TONIGHT!!!!!
THANKS FOR YOUR PATIENCE. | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 6:08:23 PM | SIMBERS: yours is great! your pictures tell wonderful stories. i love the copper intro pic! i was this close (i would show you but i'm naked typing this -- it was a really long week!) ...anyhoo, don't change anything on your profile. just be patient my friend.
thank you for reads my forum! hats off! ...opps, cant' for willy will say "hi."
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 6:16:23 PM | ARBOREA: "a hard time for dreamers," don't tell me that! if i didn't have my dreams i woudn't have anything! i think if i met you, you would be exactly like what you put in your profile. i just would expand your interests a bit more. i bet you have true uniqueness, so let it show if i'm right.
here's an intro line: show me how to dream again ....or.... let's learn to dream again .....or..... come into my dreams, i've been waiting.
you'll find someone too. just be patient -- i know you are, but hang in there.
love the water can pic -- it says a lot and i'm being totally serious.
sidenote: a script of mine that's going into production is called, got phobia? middled-aged man is strewn with childhood phobias; he jumps into all different types of unconventional therapy that turns him inside out. SPIDERS is one of them...
By the way if anyone what's to read one of my scripts, feel free to ask and thou shall send PDF.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 6:22:28 PM | CAPTN YARRH: if you and i were at a party together the bet would be interesting with who would be asked to leave first; i love pranks too! especially at parties with people i don't know.
profile: don't start out with things you don't like. it starts the whole rhythm with a negitive beat. just get into something about yourself.
also, the pic's have to be more clear and more of.
spend a bit more time on this and you'll be fine. it just looks like you put this together between some choppy seas with me hangin' over the side chuckin' up Arby's from lunch.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 6:30:04 PM | CARLYKITTEN: ...sorry i missed you doll! i coulda used some drinks! had a rough week. glad the skates fit! the retro batman suit is awesome! thanks for tradin'. i put it on just about everyday and check myself in the floor mirror. i love how when flash around the cape takes a little of time to catch up -- i love that look!
can't wait to see your new tricks! hope your weekend was nice.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 6:37:52 PM | RANDOMINTERNETGUY: ...okay, first, what the HELL are you doing to that bush; there's laws against that kinda stuff you know. a buddy if mine was nailed dating a bushette (said she was an adult, but they all do, right?). Sorry had six too many red stripes tonight. **hint, hint to my audience** if someone ever wants to send a gift (and thanks RED2679 for the meat basket last year) this jamican lager rules!!!! try it! don't mix with any hard drugs though or you'll think you can sing just like a jamaican and make a damn fool outta yourself -- and the shoe polish didn't come right off either.
i like your profile. i bet you're a fun guy to hang with. just be patient and some one will fall outta a tree for ya-- i mean come along. serious, i like your writing an your style i bet reflects you to a tee.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 6:43:23 PM | KISSABLE0325: Dave, you're a class act! love the profile and pictures! love all your activites: ballroom, cycling, and carts!
your intro pic needs to be swapped out with the ballroom though -- or just a nice smiling head shot. the rest of them tell us wonderful stories about you.
you're going to find the right gal. you have a lot to offer and most importantly, you've found yourself with all these fantastic activities -- congrats!!! most people on here haven't yet -- that's why many folks become frustrated i believe with this dating thing. i know i have, but i love myself and that's all that counts in my book.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/18/2007 6:50:02 PM | CHERISHLIFE37: pictures, pictures, picture. ....oh, did i mention: pictures, pictures, pictures. you have a wonderful neat and clean profile. in a script i would discribe you as the crunchy granola, earthy gal which is a compliment! ...but give me some pic's to prove this!
don't change any words on here just slap on some pic's!
best,
chris | |
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