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Posted: 11/19/2007 6:11:39 PM | SUMMERS2HOT: hey, i was in sarasota this past weekend -- loved it! if i wasn't in love with miami so much i would move there.
your profile speaks volumns ...but for someone looking for action i think. it SCREAMS... sex, sex, sex. maybe my mind is in the gutter, but i can see why you're getting a lot of hits.
your pic's are good, but i think they could be better. throw on a smile and let that great personality of yours come through. and if you really want to show case your clevage, throw it out there and give some'tin they won't forget!
you're a beautiful girl and seem to have a lot a fun.
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Posted: 11/19/2007 6:28:57 PM | QUIETCOWBOY: you're a man after my own heart! originally from cleve and love cincin and the entire state of OH.
okay, profile time. more pic's. this isn't the line up for "who wants to be a hitman." the intro pic is okay, but with all your accomplishments you can do better. you're the real deal and i love working with folks like you since you've experienced life to the fullest.
all the things you have under "about me" should be listed under interests. also, tell us a little more about yourself. what do you find yourself doing on a typical weekend? tell us a story. tell us about your what to expect in your life. i know it's hectic now, but that will soon be over.
i like your honestly about the divorce, but what if the gal looking at your interests doens't motorcross? will this offend you. point in case: i love to bike around on my ducati. if someone i met can't stand bikes, well i just can't date her. i love cycles and they're everything to me. think of some activities you really would like to share with someone and it would make your day if they joined in with the activity. leave out, "beating the %$it out of your ex" -- it's just not hip anymore -- KIDDING -- i'm trying to get you too relax so you can focus here.
now, go snap some shots and work on this some more. this is a mere diagram like the ones you work on in your profession, but of YOU. here's a tip too: go to your local library or just pic up a magazine in any checkout line and read something about someone -- that's what you use as a template about yourself. you're a fasinating guy with many stories to tell. you'll attract a lot of people. just becare since you have a lot to offer and be patient!
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Posted: 11/19/2007 6:34:30 PM | NCURLS: don't ever drop your expectations!!! if you do, don't tell us that. it looks like you've given up on your dream here. stick with it!
tell us more about yourself. you have to have more interests. what books have you read? you have a wonderful dancing picture; i take it that was at work. if not, tell us the story.
i like the pictures, but throw on some more!
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Posted: 11/19/2007 7:55:30 PM | TEE: where have you been my whole life???!!!! you're a doll. love your profile, but I LOVE CAMPING. what's wrong with wakin' up to ol' smokie kickin your ass 'cause it's his next meal?
don't change a thing except to move down to miami! i need my hair cut. i haven't cut it since my pics in august -- my mom thinks i'm disgusting -- what does she know, right?
you're too cute for someone not to find you.
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Posted: 11/20/2007 6:07:41 AM | Chris,
Can I possibly show more without getting deleted....cuz I am proud and wouldn't mind lol....and yes, until I find someone worth seeing more than a few times, sex sex sex is all I'm looking for....lol. Hope u have the fun that I am.....
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Posted: 11/20/2007 7:01:01 AM | ARABIANANGEL: you're a doll! however, you need to spend a little more time in the interest section and telling us about you. i bet you're fasinating especially with your roots and living in Sidney -- my cousins live there. i want to visit next summer.
Also, one missed spelled word (coming from the king of misspelling himself): socializing (i think you have a "s" rather than a "z").
i'm not too set on your intro line. how about: let's emerge in great conversation over coffee. ....or.... warm me with your presence. ....or.... let's find out what tomorrow brings. i'm just gettting out some ideas from looking at your pictures.
just be patient!
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Posted: 11/20/2007 7:03:43 AM | VACOWGIRL: you're the real deal. don't change a thing. your writing is percise and to the point. i love how you wrote short sentences, but each one has story laced within it -- great job.
just be patient too. sorry to read about your loss.
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Posted: 11/20/2007 7:07:14 AM | SUMMERS2HOT: just bend over a table with a naughty grin. that seems to attract loads of guys. a full body shot is nice too. show off a nice outfit. if you're attracting a lot of guys then i don't think you need any more help from me.
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Posted: 11/20/2007 7:11:28 AM | SINGLE LOOKIN850: i would lose the first three lines -- they're weak and you don't need that to reflect you in anyway. next, i'm not convinced on the "updated" section at the bottom. after reading that, i wouldn't contact you at all. just get rid of that. what would you do if you read that yourself?
the pictures are great!
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Posted: 11/20/2007 12:47:16 PM | Thanks Chris, oh and by the way we spell it with an "S"  , I guess the main reason why I wanted u to look at my profile is to perhaps figure out why I keep attracting insecure men on POF.. lol im serious!....sometimes its in our delivery ...but once again thank u . | |
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Posted: 11/20/2007 1:14:27 PM | that's a good question about insecure men. i'm full of abundance of life: nice home, nice car, nice career, but sometimes i totally freeze up when it comes to women. i've been used a lot and have experienced fast times; not into that any more so it's tough.
sorry about the "s." stay beautiful!
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Posted: 11/20/2007 2:01:53 PM | ATTENTION FORUM GOERS: I'LL BE OUTTA THE FORUM 'TIL FRIDAY. HAVE A WONDERFUL TURKEY DAY AND CAN'T WAIT TO SEE YA!
BEST,
CHRIS
FREE PARTING NOTE ----- TIP FOR THE DAY:
if you don't what to see someone again tell'em that your cat just blew up and you don't know what went wrong...
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say, "my pickle iches and i don't what the hell is---" then, hang up mid-sentence. don't call 'em back for at least two days. | |
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