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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 11/26/2007 8:37:16 AM | NYCBALLA: fantastic! great pic's. great writing. great interests! extra bonus points on your interests too; i wrote on scrubs and the office in the past seasons -- great shows! need to pay a bit more though.
only advice: get out of wisconson -- cheese will fattin' ya up! kidding... i know, i know, $hit as@ joke. just woke up and catchin' up with the forum.
you might want to change in the intro pic. give a nice head shot flashin' that DR smile of yours.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 11/26/2007 8:40:38 AM | S LOREN: it's nice an sweet. loved the pic's. there's a lot of white space after your writing in the about me section -- can you get rid of it?
love your writing. simple. discriptive. attractive. i bet you'll find what you're looking for. you seem driven.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 11/26/2007 8:47:27 AM | JUST CRAZY ENOUGH: you're a strong writer. i can see a true creative side of you. now, let it show through some pics. get a few in there to show what you like to do. even if there's one of you just chillin' with some phones on listening to music.
like the intro pic. -- keep it.
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chris | |
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Posted: 11/26/2007 8:55:35 AM | ARIES1560: okay, first, lay off the red bull! i bet you're the type of gal that goes to bed with an IV of coffee, wakes up, throws on rollarskates and jetsets off to work with a smile. i envy you if i just summed you up. i can't do red bull or coffee. it interfers with all the other chemicals canoe'in around in my bloodstream -- kidding!
profile time: you have a natural bounce to your overall writing rhythm. like it. i bet it's the true you on paper.
you need more pics. they'll tell a story about you. throw on as many as you got.
fill in the interest section too. this will help you with narrowing down your prey-- i mean the interested. sorry, just feelin' a bit fresky -- it's monday!!!
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Posted: 11/26/2007 9:06:15 AM | SPUD1700: first, get the intro pic off. it looks like the bus is about to hit ya. AND YOU'RE A DOLPHIN TRAINER~~!!!!! there's your shot, pal! throw that pick on and watch the the ol' pond %uckin' drain! you'll be reelin' 'em in left and right! here's an equation stronger than the gravity or frickin' eletricity. guy + dolphin = unlimited ceatures with ovaries!!!!! don't you know that most women would trade their second born just to touch a flipper! pic's. pic's. pic's. ....
your writing is good. keep it. just expand your interests.
one last noting: the tuna. isn't this an oxymore with being a dolphin trainer???
best,
chris
p.s. blow hole side up! one of thoese little suckers just bumped my foot a few weeks back. i think the little guy wanted to play. i see 'em in my bay all the time. but here's another equation: animal with teeth + man in their habitat = painful lession to be learned.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 11/26/2007 9:32:53 AM | IMTOOSHY: first, there's a great guy deep down inside; find him; pull him out and write this stupid profile! don't beat yourself up. you're going into this with "imtooshy" right out of the box. lose this and start over! you can do better.
you're the type of guy everyone can call in the middle of the night when you're car breaks down. show this. ice skating on the first date is not cheesy. it's the best example i've ever read!!! especially for someone in your age bracket.
pony up and email back so i can review this again.
oh, how to shoot a great pic. lines of coke -- kidding!!! watch something funny on funnyordie.com and use your timer to snap one when you're laughing. works every time.
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chris | |
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 11/26/2007 9:35:53 AM | RAWLK: spend a little more time on this. read. write. read. write. same advice i give to new writers in my field. if you see something you like take bits and pieces out of it and use it.
more pic's. more pic's. they really do tell a story about yourself.
you'll be fine. just spend more time on this. and it takes more than one go around -- turst me.
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chris | |
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Posted: 11/26/2007 9:39:21 AM | AREUHER: like it. simple. to the point. straight forward. ...now lose thoses "lol." amaturish. that stuff went out with vcr's and stuff'd dead cats.
also, beef up your interest section. give 'em something to read.
best,
chris
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 11/26/2007 10:16:45 AM | WHITEWOLFXX7: more pics. more time on this. you need to write more interests and more things about yourself. remember, this is an online brochure advertising yourself!
if you slap something together, they'll think you'll just slap together a relationship too.
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chris | |
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 11/26/2007 10:22:57 AM | ETERNALSUNSHINE23: if you an aspiring screenwriter here's your first tip: lose getting offended easily. %uck what others think. your writes are the next best thing. at your first meeting take a circular saw with ya and when they give ya 13 pgs. of notes back, plug in the saw, yank their arm across the desk and ask 'em "if they're sure." next thing you, know your writing will command attention! even praise. true story from joe eszterhaus, basic instinct writer.
your profile is fine. throw up a few more pics. i think you're good to go.
best,
chris | |
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