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Posted: 11/27/2007 2:56:16 PM | MISTER MAN: i your profile. you've put time into it. great writing. throw more pics up. and "a few extra pounds" where? on your ankles??
as for the Jungian tests, i bet they work... but not when you have a bunch of nuts trying to reinvent themselves via this site. i've found more folks on here that don't know who they really are. *footnote: the examples i give in my profile.
subconsciously, we all all love ourselves. you'll lie to put a smile on a family members face when the truth will crush 'em, won't ya? i.e.: how do you like my new hair? am i fat? did i do something stupid. if we love 'em, the truth will be down played and something else will roll outta our mouth just to make it to the next moment and let that one pass. the same goes for this site. we love ourselves, so we list "cooking" when we do it five times a year, etc.
as i told a beautiful girl this summer: the hardest thing you'll ever do in life, is find that "right" person to share it with, because we're all humans making mistakes daily that sometimes amount to larger problems to those we don't even know. It doesn't help we live in a MTV world when we're just local news material... | |
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Posted: 11/27/2007 2:56:29 PM | MISTER MAN: i your profile. you've put time into it. great writing. throw more pics up. and "a few extra pounds" where? on your ankles??
as for the Jungian tests, i bet they work... but not when you have a bunch of nuts trying to reinvent themselves via this site. i've found more folks on here that don't know who they really are. *footnote: the examples i give in my profile.
subconsciously, we all all love ourselves. you'll lie to put a smile on a family members face when the truth will crush 'em, won't ya? i.e.: how do you like my new hair? am i fat? did i do something stupid. if we love 'em, the truth will be down played and something else will roll outta our mouth just to make it to the next moment and let that one pass. the same goes for this site. we love ourselves, so we list "cooking" when we do it five times a year, etc.
as i told a beautiful girl this summer: the hardest thing you'll ever do in life, is find that "right" person to share it with, because we're all humans making mistakes daily that sometimes amount to larger problems to those we don't even know. It doesn't help we live in a MTV world when we're just local news material... | |
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Posted: 11/27/2007 5:44:11 PM | OK, I'll let ya rate me- just this once though .. well, unless I like it, then I'll let ya rate me again! .. oops rate rate not date a mate sheesh .. too much time in the poetry threads I spose.
But come one - have at me my man! The pond is so dry where I live I'm offerin' bait on the side of the road! (The road is not paved, rarely travelled and hasn't been plowed in eons).
A.S.is
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Posted: 11/27/2007 6:52:14 PM | DINAHST: i like it. it's a bit long, but hopefully they'll read it 'cause it describes you to a tee. love the pic's. you might wanna think about other interests you have. favorite TV show. music. what kind of dancing you like, etc.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 7:06:01 PM | AGGIEGUY2010: bravio ...or should i say "signed and sealed!" it's beautiful. only change one thing: the intro pic. throw the fourth one with you flashing that smile -- great shot.
listen, you need to write some short stories or use intense, specific, haunting words describing what you're going to build. you're a writer. i can see it. i've met a few lads in your age group and some even eng'r's like yourself and i didn't feel the potential that i do with you. i'm not saying to stop your eng. studies, but max out your writing with that field. eng'r's are usually as flat as the lines they draw. your not; you're going to go far. i hope i cross your bridge or sit in your statium someday. always remember: believe and you'll achieve!
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Posted: 11/27/2007 7:09:25 PM | ALIENSECRETS: like it. at first it struck me as scattered like a cat put it together, but then after the second read i liked it. original. has a beat. all around unique.
throw up more pic's. these will sell ya! guys are visual mogals at this sport. give 'em what they're askin' for!
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Posted: 11/27/2007 7:13:20 PM | IMCCOY: a thousand appoligies!!! i read it a few days back and forget to log it in ~~~ sorry--!
it's great. you've up time into this i can see. i like the pic's too. you might wanna put a pic up of you doing something. the unicycle stunt you mentioned to me. or... that killer knife throwing thing-a-ma-gig you invented. give 'em something to understand your story.
just be patient! you'll find him.
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Posted: 11/27/2007 7:18:02 PM | REFRESHME: when was that pic taken, '52--!!?? snab that sucker off there and throw up a fresh clear job-a-roo! you gotta put time into this my friend. it's a direct reflection of you. a brochure. an advertisment. not the profile of someone missing from the 50's. no recess for you! get back to work and nail this thing!
i've got faith in ya! report back in 72 hrs! GO!!!
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Posted: 11/27/2007 10:45:55 PM | | alright my fellow thspian let's see what you think of my humdrum profile. any and all criticism will be taken though it may be tossed back like a bad performance on broadway gets the obligatory hook from the outer sides of the curtain | |
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Posted: 11/28/2007 2:15:44 AM |
I read'em and rate'em baby. I'm a word smith -- that's what you need to reel'em in, right? Tell'em who you are. Tell'em what you're about. Be: simple and honest. If you have humor, use it. Most people don't.
Best,
Chris
Alrighty then. Let's see whatcha got, lad.
he first one in gets a year supply of recently found beach combs!!!
Aww hell. I missed the big deal
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Posted: 11/28/2007 6:37:45 AM | CANDLEGURL: sorry!!! i didn't mean to skip you! i remember even reading your profile.
okay, first throw some clear pic's up there. some of the ones you have are blurry. next, fill in the "interest" section.
last, spend more time on this. give us some more info about your self and what you are seeking.
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Posted: 11/28/2007 6:48:29 AM | HERDING CATS: you seemed frustrated with writing this. you're pic's are beautiful that tell us interesting stories, so why no "interests" listed? give me one, pleeeaaasssee...? just one. any one. actually load up this section.
i would like it if you changed your intro pic to the second one where you're sitting on the beach -- that's the motz, hun!
spend a little more time on this. whisper some stories in our ears about who you really are.
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Posted: 11/28/2007 11:52:32 AM | thankyou chris. well at least i have portrayed the real me in my profile. im impressed sir stageright,except i dont need red bull or coffee, im a natural freak hehehehehe.u summed me up perfe ctly ...thanks for ur advice...take care and i will put in more pics....yeeks i was trying not to scare em off lol  | |
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