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Posted: 11/8/2007 9:45:37 PM | :") (embarrassed) Thanks. :-p oooohhhh, the Pepsi had to burn. Ouch.
My CBR is a '96. Just got it this year and rode it right to Texas. I'm dating someone who rides a Monster 750, and I already know the bikes play well together when left alone in the garage.
I never thought of trying to write for a comedian. I spent ages trying to get my personality under raps and hide it, and finally after my divorce I just decided to do my own version of "letting it all hang out." About 50% of the responses to emails I wrote when I first started putting together this profile were suggestions for various medications. I think it weeds out people pretty well.
I also can't imagine trying to ride in Florida. Aren't all the old folks just pretending to be blind as they purposefully swerve to hit motorcyclists? I think they should enact a law that when someone retires to Florida, they will be required to give up their license. | |
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Posted: 11/8/2007 9:50:58 PM | fl sux for riding. i ride to la once a year. mine is a '02 and have 35,000 already clicked in on the dial. i do a lot of riding up to northern florida. i also ride around cali a lot when i'm out there. i'm the real biker. i've riden to mexico city on my old '92 zx 7.
i think divorce brings out the best in us. some how we refrigerate our emotions and our true self when married. plus, i could never me forum'ing at 1 in the morning when married -- such a deal!
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Posted: 11/8/2007 9:56:09 PM | You've never ridden the SoFLA Dragon...just like up north....only a little different. 318 miles and 11 turns.
This is the only state where you can ride a sport bike where the center of your tire wears out first....my othe bike is a 'busa. | |
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Posted: 11/8/2007 10:06:17 PM | Ok I've never done this before. I mean with a guy. I just tried with a girl.
Hope you take it easy. And cause it's easy don't get carried away.
Hey, if I don't like the first one is the second one free? How about both are free?
Thanks,
Me
And man, pretty harsh on the chimp comment. Funny, but harsh. | |
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Posted: 11/8/2007 10:11:19 PM | another "real deal!" like your wit. you might want to shortin' up the verbage a bit, but loved the first date lines! funny. your pic's tell a great story too. 15 lbs! great job! i've probably put them on -- **stard!!!
best of luck, but you'll won't need it.
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Posted: 11/8/2007 10:17:40 PM | IRISH GUY: i'm thinkin' your a loner -- and there's nothing wrong with that, but if you have friends get some shots with you having fun with them or leaning up against that charger -- killer car too! i think you're a bit too rigid; however, it is really you. i just think you need to lighten up a bit. ...and don't think my profile is prefect. i lightened up wayyyyyyy too much. hey, i tell stories for a living.
i think your intro photo needs to be more relaxed too. you've got plenty offer so you meet tons of ladys on here too.
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Posted: 11/8/2007 10:26:15 PM | JAACK: ...oh, before i forget, yeah, the chimp comment i made on the other tread was raw. i'll throw her a banana later...... oops!!!!!
back to reality (can't believe i just typed that -- it's 1:20 and i'm on a forum that i've started!!!!)
your profile is almost there. i see humor buried within your words -- feel them. get to the point. make them sting. and give me another one to lean further back into my chair with snotting out pepsi like the other gal did.
it seems to me you do a lot more stuff then what your listed on your profile. list 'em. it'll build your character more.
i think you're off to a great start. a little more work and you'll set snaggin' digits. also, more pictures. get some natural shots. the bear rug. car wash -- sorry -- was thinking about that other gal -- seriously, natural stuff seems to sell on here.
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Posted: 11/8/2007 10:40:04 PM | SURFNCHICK: we have some issues here. first: becare not to cross the line with your pics. the amsterdam shot is... i believe "fulfilling" is the word of choice. made me remember i was craving milk and earlier today and have to make a note i'm out. when i see a picture like that and read "get to know me first" the train pops off the track a bit and we've got some serious cargo on here we can't dump. also, amsterdam is known for loose drugs and i'm reaching at this one, but i can't see you into that crowd -- not that there's anything wrong with weed, which i think is better than alcohol for your chemical of choice -- okay i'm getting way off track here.
i like the straight forwardness and the word choices you made. maybe just a few more photos that bring out the variety you seem to have. just watch the skin stuff. you have a lot to offer and you don't want to reel in a (b)ass when you're cravin' a perch.
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Posted: 11/8/2007 10:44:29 PM | Thanks,
The pic thing is by design. It's a filter. In that pic I had recently had jaw surgery after a wreck.
I'll tighten up and increase the sizzle in the writing. I get what I pay for. Took forever to get that translated.
Is the line from "As Good as it's Gonna Get"? cause part is from Seinfeld, but I seem to remember Greg Kinnear when I read that.
Thanks again for your time.
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Posted: 11/8/2007 10:54:33 PM | TO MY NEW SOCIETY: I must cash out for the evening. i have get up and ...oh, forgot i'm DOING NOTHING FOR AWHLE ...gotta love strikes.
I'm starting to lose my jazz and can't afford to give refunds since i'm not working right now.
catch me tomorrow.
my very best!!!
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Posted: 11/8/2007 11:07:01 PM | michael -- fantastic, buddy. like your wit. now, the only thing i would change is your profile intro pic. the sunset is beautiful about i don't think it's the best shot of you. glue a nice smile pic in there. otherwise, your profile is set my friend. you're a wordsmith too!
best,
chris
p.s. people seem to love pics so throw a bunch on there. maybe of some of the activities you do. you list a bunch. | |
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