| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 12/4/2007 6:56:56 AM | ANGELFAITH13: great job! nice writing. pic's tell wonderful stories. you're set.
best,
chris
p.s. i usually have 5 or more emails a week with folks noting my profile. suggestions. questions. "i have the next best movie idea." thanks for the offer! | |
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 12/4/2007 8:01:19 AM | CALIHISPANICTX: clever name! like how you put that together. now with that said, put more info in the body of this thing. if you're that clever with coming up with a name like that, i bet you've got loads of interests i.e.: music, movies, activites, art & culture.... put 'em in there!
let us a little more about yourself. remember, women what to really get to know you via your actions and your thoughts via what you say. they're not a visual as us men. i've found the more you have on your profile the more serious responces you'll recieve.
last, too many head shots. you're in shape so show it off. i prefer the second pic rather than the one you currently have.
best,
chris
p.s. just be patient on here!!! you'll find her. | |
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| Review mine please!!! intouch10
Posted: 12/4/2007 8:08:18 AM | INTOUCH10: expand your interests. being in IT i'm sure you have a few. also, stay away from too many head shots. you're a fit lad, so throw a body shot up.
your writing is fine. short and sweet.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 12/4/2007 9:28:35 AM |
Half off for the next six that sign up. I'm quick. I'm too the point.
Hmmm....I wonder if he caught the to/too error. Nah. He was "dead frickin' tried." Too 'tried' to be 'tired.' Poor guy. But wait...he has a reason, an excuse! The writers are on strike!
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 12/4/2007 12:02:59 PM | AK TRANSPLANT: well, you were the "one" -- that outed my greatest weekness: proof reading! i'll be the first to admit it -- that's why i have a wonderful editor to catch all my spealing errors -- did ya catch the last one? good. here's a cookie.
**AND I'M ONLY LOOKING AT CONTENT... GET YOU'RE OWN EDITOR!
love the profile. one too many head shots though. the body of writing is pretty good but it's soaked with "must have companion." lighten up on that. you're in gov't. you should be used to layers and layers of what would seem to be a simple process by now. stready boy. ...easy... ...easy.... okay, here's another cookie for that patience you just displayed.
tighten up your wording an don't mention that you can fall in love so quick. quick's for: typo's, skakeboarding tricks gone bad and flu shots. i can see you've taken time with crafting out this little puppy, but now it's time for the rewrite.
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chris | |
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 12/4/2007 12:08:33 PM | TAZDRU: the pic's aren't doing you justice. you need to look happy. you're not even cracking a grin. light up. you know what you're looking for so put it out there. your writing needs to be energized more. it is helps. rewrite this first thing in the morning ...or when you've had six too many. i find when your write something in a good mind state, the writing shows.
you can tell on here when i was exhausted scribing out my feedback to folks.
give this another shot (include more pic's) and resubmit it back to me.
have a great week!
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 12/4/2007 3:10:17 PM | SWEETSASSYSINGER: i like your writing, but put some pic's up with you singing or the other activites you hold an interest. also, expand your interest section. i'm sure you have many things that grab you, so mention 'em.
Overall, expand both sections; give us more, more and more! plus, we're guys and pic's -- especially this time of year putting together crap that someone just "had to have." *sidenote, i did find out screwdrivers are not friends with glass tables!!!
be patient with this!
best,
chris
p.s. believe it or not, i love attending my church too and many of my ideas for writing come to me in the pews! matter of fact the one script i was writing before the strike was called, "i quit!" the devil, lou, becomes feed up and quits. it's a high-concept comedy told from the devil's point of view -- again, it came to me in the middle of mass. | |
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| Platypus and Screwdrivers
Posted: 12/4/2007 3:28:08 PM | So sorry to hear about your table mishap! I can be a bit of a clutz at times myself.
Thanks for the advice. I think it's great that you love attending church. What a place to get inspired! How much more work do you have to do on your script? It sounds funny; I can't wait to hear more.
Thanks again,
Theresa
Oh! Do you really have a platypus? I just quickly glanced over your profile and saw the picture. It's so cute! | |
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| Read yours and howled....have a swing at mine please
Posted: 12/4/2007 4:39:48 PM | THANKS Stageright,
Glad you enjoyed the profile, but I must confess, read about 10 pages of your postings to others, then re-wrote my profile with your advice -- before you gave it!!
Your the bomb, you need to write a book on profile building!
Where do I send the check?
Brian | |
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| Rate Me
Posted: 12/4/2007 5:09:12 PM | | I know mine is prolly terrible but give me your best shot | |
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| Platypus and Screwdrivers
Posted: 12/4/2007 6:46:46 PM | SWEETSASSYSINGER: no, i don't have one. they're my favorite animal though. even if i could own one, i wouldn't. wild animals are just that -- wild. i would totally freak if i was thrown into a stranger's home and force feed. i already experienced that with my ex!!!
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chris | |
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| Platypus and Screwdrivers
Posted: 12/4/2007 7:11:08 PM | | Hey hows it all going? Im catching up with my work then off for a few drinks wanna join? | |
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taking a bit of a gamble with the pics tho, as like most people I hate having my pic done.
