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Posted: 12/6/2007 7:34:56 PM | KEN: i like it. still think you're tryin' a bit too hard with the jokes, but i bet that is you. the guy that shows up when everyone has left you alone in the hospital, right?
the pic's arn't doing you justice. they're too serious except the one with you laughing. get some new ones up there. hell, throw one up with you and the miss hardbody '80 (i'm talking 'bout the camaro -- not that something you picked up down in chinatwn last weekend).
stop by any time my friend.
best,
chris
p.s. what i like about you is you don't give up, so that tells me you'll find her! | |
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Posted: 12/6/2007 9:12:38 PM | SICILIAN ANGEL: you need to break up your thoughts with white space like
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just hit the enter key and it'll drop down some space. look at ken's above. he did a great job. i love your writing though. just for kicks, swap out your face shot from time to time with your current one. think you'll catch some fresh fish.
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chris | |
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Posted: 12/6/2007 9:18:14 PM | PERFECTCLASS: where have you've been my whole life!!!! wooozers....!!!
sorry, i didn't mean to go overboard there. love your profile! you' ve put time in this. love the pic's. the writing. everything.
stick a fork in ya, girl -- you're done!
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chris | |
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Posted: 12/7/2007 8:10:30 AM | PATRICK25: you need to get into acting asap! you've got a great look!!
now, for the profile...
pic's: dump the intro pic and put up the one with you in the black jacket -- now that's a shot! next, throw on a shirt and hasselhoff it (unbutton it 'til about mid-chest). i've heard that women arn't crazy about the bare chest pic's -- i could be wrong, but i recieve so many compliments on my unbuttoned pic it's unreal. the truth of the matter is my shirt is some kinda funky miami brand that it has no upper buttons.
last, deck out your "interest" section. remember, women are readers and every single line you write will tell more and more stories about yourself.
for 25, you've got your head on straight; hats off! just be patient on here.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 12/7/2007 8:19:25 AM | CAFFELLA: your another guy that's gotta get into film! you've got a great look.
now with the profile: first, your pic's load to the the side. you gotta rotate them so they're righside up. next, lose the texting language. this comes across sloppy and i bet you're not that type of guy.
last, give me some interests: music, hobbies, what you you're into. remember, women are readers and want to see what you're all about.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 12/7/2007 8:22:00 AM | 22766: more pic's. more interests. ...more time on this, bud. c'mon. you craft out music for hours. send a little on this especially if you're looking for long term. looks like you're trying to pick something up at the drive through...
best,
chris
p.s. redo this and shoot it back to me -- you've to four days -- GO! | |
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