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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me! Posted: 12/8/2007 11:25:18 AM | I LOVE SHEEP: loved it! stick with this for awhile and see what happens. the only suggestion i have is maybe switch out your intro pic. your kids are in the package; however, it's about you in the beginning; if she really likes you, she'll love your children. if not, move on.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me! Posted: 12/9/2007 9:05:03 PM | BETHLET: at first i didn't like all the head shots, but then the real you came right out a me -- keep 'em pinned up!
loved your writing. i bet you're a hoot! your personality is strewn throughout this entire writing passage! great job.
just be patient.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me! Posted: 12/9/2007 9:14:52 PM | 2MATCHINGSOCKS: soooooo sorry to hear about your accident!!!
now, onto your profile: what part of cleveland are you from??? my hometown!!! i was so excited reading your profile -- i love to meet people from there on here.
i believe your profile was the most honest one i've ever read; hats off. i would stick to it awhile, then you can go more into the type of guy you're desiring, etc. at a later date.
hope all goes well with healing!! i'll keep you in my thoughts.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me! Posted: 12/9/2007 9:20:19 PM | FREE MAN: one word: wicked! loved it. witty. haunting. yet crafty...
throw on for your intro pic the second or the third with with guitar. white hot. love the look.
just be patient. ...and you've gotta get into acting. you've got the look.
best, chris | |
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