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 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/11/2007 7:12:14 PM
i would love to join you, but i'll be either three places. one: cleveland (spending the summers up there with my son). two: LA; catching up on the things missed while the strike was going on. three; miami just living life.

however, if i find myself wandering i will jot this down since i've never been to that city believe it or not. i would like to check it out. however, july is usually spent in cleveland with my family.

thank you for the offer!!!

have a wonderful holiday.

best,
chris
 MovieBuffGirl

Joined: 10/19/2007
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Posted: 12/11/2007 7:13:42 PM
OK. Let's hear your feed back.
 stageright

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Posted: 12/11/2007 7:16:52 PM
I JUST WANT TO TAKE THE TIME TO THANK EVERYONE THUS FAR FOR VISITING MY FORUM AND SEEKING ADVICE FROM A COMPLETE STRANGER.

THIS WILL ALWAYS GO DOWN IN MY MEMORY BOOK WHILE BEING ON STRIKE.

ALSO...

I WANT TO TAKE THE TIME TO WISH EVERYONE HAPPY HOLIDAYS AND A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS !!!!



i threw the deer up there 'cause there's nothing better than deer jerky, the grinch is my son's favorite x-mas movie and merry xmas is just a gimme...

my very best,
chris

P.S. KEEP 'EM COMIN' GANG -- I'M STILL HERE!!!!!!!!! LET'S HIT 1000 BEFORE THE STRIKE'S OVER~~~!!!
 stageright

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Posted: 12/11/2007 7:17:10 PM
I JUST WANT TO TAKE THE TIME TO THANK EVERYONE THUS FAR FOR VISITING MY FORUM AND SEEKING ADVICE FROM A COMPLETE STRANGER.

THIS WILL ALWAYS GO DOWN IN MY MEMORY BOOK WHILE BEING ON STRIKE.

ALSO...

I WANT TO TAKE THE TIME TO WISH EVERYONE HAPPY HOLIDAYS AND A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS !!!!



i threw the deer up there 'cause there's nothing better than deer jerky, the grinch is my son's favorite x-mas movie and merry xmas is just a gimme...

my very best,
chris

P.S. KEEP 'EM COMIN' GANG -- I'M STILL HERE!!!!!!!!! LET'S HIT 1000 BEFORE THE STRIKE'S OVER~~~!!!
 Jestie

Joined: 7/28/2007
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Posted: 12/11/2007 7:20:39 PM
can you check mine?

keep the solidarity going! Merry Christmas
 stageright

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Posted: 12/11/2007 7:21:26 PM
MSVSUIVANOVA: nice job. great writing. fantastic pic's. you're set. just be patient on here. you'll reel him in!

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 12/11/2007 7:30:38 PM
JESTIE: you're first date is sooooo cute! you go girl! now, throw up (gawd... why do i write that out!!! like, duh!!!) -- pin up some new pic's the current ones are a bit cloudy. don't get me wrong, they're nice, but i know you can do better. pin up lots, too! guys are visual swamp bats. we buzz around looking for pretty stuff; most have been easily drawn into a stranger's car via candy or nascar tickets ...even a star wars video or action doll too.

have a great holiday! you'll find him; just be patient.

best,
chris
 racquetballkathy

Joined: 7/28/2007
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Posted: 12/11/2007 10:38:49 PM
I WOULD LIKE TO BE RATED. :)
 rletsgo

Joined: 6/12/2007
Msg: 684
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Posted: 12/12/2007 1:28:38 AM
I want a piece of this...lol. My turn!
 MovieBuffGirl

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Posted: 12/12/2007 5:15:45 AM
Thanks Chris. I made substancial changes thought, would u mind checking my profile again?

 xpress2

Joined: 12/8/2007
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Posted: 12/12/2007 5:48:07 AM
Can you review my profile and offer any suggestions for improvement? I appreciate your time and thought.
 itsjsmejj

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Posted: 12/12/2007 6:08:48 AM
Ok Chris, I just did a major edit of my profile and would be interested after reading some of this what you might have to say. So blast away, and let me have it!

Jim
 not_c_thru

Joined: 8/25/2007
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Posted: 12/12/2007 6:31:48 AM
yay me!! me!! me!! im next im next!! lo
SUPRISE ME!!:P
 Imrubentoo

Joined: 7/25/2006
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Posted: 12/12/2007 8:10:43 AM
Are you serious? you think I should try acting? It had never crossed my mind. Thanks for the comments and constructive criticism, I will make sure to get some more photos of me up doing different things.

Again as far as acting I wouldn't even know where to begin maybe trying to put a portfolio together...

Who knows... if you know please enlighten me...


Greg
 stageright

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Posted: 12/12/2007 8:41:11 AM
RACQUETBALLKATHY: wow, racquetball, huh? haven't played that in years ...well, ever since i needed part of my @ss for that skin graft on my ear! hense, the clump of hair growing outta nowhere...

anyhoo, like your profile. put up more pic's. add a little more to your body of writing. tell us more about you.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 12/12/2007 9:01:20 AM
RLETSGO: "want a piece of this..." a piece is costly. better go with just a slice -- half the caloies too.

profile time: loved it! what a fantastic job. love the pic's -- you might wanna swap out your current pic with the ball cap one -- it's cute. only a thought. i really like your current intro pic. maybe for a day or two swap it out and see the various guys you attract; it seems like you're pretty active with various sports.

loved your writing. i really felt like i would know you if we ever met. great job.

just be patient. you'll reel in a variety i bet.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 12/12/2007 9:07:15 AM
XPRESS2: guys like you have a lot to offer reading your interests. i like to work with profiles like yours.

now, dump the first pic and go with the last one. it offers more of a story to tell. also, i would dump one of your first two pic's. they're too competitive with each other. pin up another one -- fully body shot with you dressed up.

your narrative: lengthen it. tell us more about yourself. you have sooooo many fasinating interests. why do you have 'em? what would we find you doing on the weekend? who is that cute little girl with you? what event are you at with her? tell at least three stories in your profile for us to get a grip on you -- who you really are.

best,
chris

p.s. you'll find her. you've got a lot to offer someone.
 stageright

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Posted: 12/12/2007 9:11:01 AM
ITSJSMEJJ: fantastic! your pic's are fasinating! that cloud pic really draws you in...

the only thing that i didn't care for was all of the pic's of you were taken the same day; however, they're great pic's and they work well. keep 'em up for a while, then maybe take some new ones to slide in there.

you've put time into this -- hats off, my friend!

you'll find her. just be patient.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 12/12/2007 9:32:27 AM
NOT C THUR: i like it! try out the third pic from now and then. it gives you a whole new look.

you might wanna add to your interests. i bet you have more. music. art. movies. hobbies. etc...

each time i review a profile from someone in your age group, i see so much innocence behind those eyes... yet raging with life, hope and desire. just make this promise yourself: you'll always love yourself.

my best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 12/12/2007 9:44:51 AM
greg, no portfolio needed. you've already have head shots. jump on craiglist's list and look for "short movies" or auditions that are being held in your area. see, it takes all different types to make a movie and you've got a great look. plus, just seeing the words that you've chosen tells me a lot about you. i bet you're well read and would great just being yourself.

just a suggestion.

best,
chris
 fiftyseven

Joined: 12/9/2007
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Posted: 12/12/2007 10:24:52 AM
Holy shit, you're still responding.
Rate my profile! Thanks dude.


To return the favor, I'll rate yours if you'd like...
 stageright

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Posted: 12/12/2007 11:33:22 AM
FIFYSEVEN: like it. put up some more pic's. the one in the middle is killer! it's an album cover i tell you! your writing is grabbing too. if you don't find anyone, then she's just not on here.

thanks for offering to rate mine, but i'm just trolling for now. The forums are my main interest. Recently, i just met someone that's grabbed my heart, so i'm really not looking to reel in anyone else for now.

best,
chris
 fiftyseven

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Posted: 12/12/2007 11:40:17 AM
More pics, check.

But if you ever write any music, you come to me for rating first. ;)
 sandra-nthasun

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Posted: 12/12/2007 1:05:23 PM
Ok Chris,

I updated my profile and made some changes. Also added some new pics. Please take a look and tell me what you think.

Thanks,

Sandra
 stageright

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Posted: 12/12/2007 1:17:39 PM
SANDRA-NTHASUN: i like the changes. the pic's are great. the verbage tells a nice story about yourself too!

great job. now, just be patient.

best,
chris
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