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 liveforplur

Joined: 11/11/2007
Msg: 701
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Posted: 12/12/2007 4:33:19 PM
hey can you rate mine please? and let me know what i should do
 Rarefied Guy

Joined: 12/1/2007
Msg: 702
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Posted: 12/12/2007 4:41:13 PM
H'okay Dah-link.
Gi'e mine a quick wee peruse so I can hear from youse at to what your appraisal might be.
I also write, music, lyrics, short stories etc. so will be terrible interested to see your uptake, after you partake, of my profile.

Lettuce Know,
WMB
 Bubble Eyes

Joined: 6/17/2007
Msg: 703
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Posted: 12/12/2007 8:09:21 PM
hi.. got any more witty blurbs for me??

:p

rate me! please?
 MizzRobin

Joined: 12/9/2007
Msg: 704
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Posted: 12/12/2007 8:12:54 PM
Chris I'd love it if you'd take a look at mine.
 virgogirl11

Joined: 11/13/2007
Msg: 705
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Posted: 12/12/2007 8:20:35 PM
Hey, can you look at mine next.. I fear that it is a bit boring..... what do you think? really, be honest... THANKS :)
 Tin_Man

Joined: 1/23/2005
Msg: 706
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Posted: 12/13/2007 12:02:51 AM
Ok chris....

tear it apart....
 islandspyce

Joined: 11/11/2007
Msg: 707
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Posted: 12/13/2007 8:59:06 AM
Me, I'm next, I'm next.....give it to me baby...pour it on.....knock my socks off....tell it like it is....lol.
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/13/2007 11:21:14 AM
LIVEFORPLUR: well, you're honest and to the point, but i feel you're only going to attrack someone for the short term. if that's okay, stick to plan and i'm sure you'll succeed.

maybe pin up some more pic's and expand your interests. since you're one of the younger ones on here, put up music or other hobbies you have.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/13/2007 11:29:47 AM
RAREFIED GUY: the profile is pretty good, but your shorthand might be taken of as being sloppy; however, this coming from a guy that makes up words and slaughters the english language...

liked the pic's. paulo coelho is my favorite too!

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/13/2007 11:38:50 AM
BUBBLE EYES: ...all outta "witty blurbs," but have a $hit load of windy burps...? kidding. i know, i know -- REALLY bad joke.

loved your profile. great pic's. zesty writing. and you've told us exactly what you're looking for -- fantastic.

just be patient on here. i bet with your personality you'll attract the guy you're seeking, but i wouldn't be surprised if both of your crossed each other's paths when your least expecting it.

i'm going to try to listen to your show -- is it still going strong?

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/13/2007 11:45:51 AM
MIZZROBIN: first, drop your intro pic and replace it with one of the two last pic's you have; they bring out your eyes more.

other than that, your profile reads like you're really hesitate about this entire edating stuff -- either you're in or your not. commit and you will recieve -- what -- i don't know, but you will recieve.

i did like your writing though. just firm up with what you're seeking.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/13/2007 11:48:42 AM
KLS911: far from boring!!! love the pic's -- you've got a "mini me;" she's adorable. pin up more pic's through especially a fully body one.

i like it. just be patient.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/13/2007 12:03:16 PM
TIN MAN: "Profession: stuff... fix... assemble...create..." --okay-- this goes from being the putz at nasa that royality botched up the o-rings to the unibomber's long lost cousin. drop the "stuff... fix... assemble... create... " stick some'tin else in there.

the rest of it really flowed -- liked it!

you gotta put up some more pic's. i'm not sold on the intro pic either -- you're too... cable guy-ish. sorry, but i'm just trying to help ya out. i really do think you've potentia here.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/13/2007 12:10:58 PM
ISLANDSPYCE: two words: white hot... NO, NO WAIT... blue flamin' hot!!! ...wait...
white hot is sooooo miami with the heat and all. i'm going to stick with that.

catch ya later, aligator...
 virgogirl11

Joined: 11/13/2007
Msg: 715
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Posted: 12/13/2007 12:31:14 PM
Thanks for the advice and for the nice comments :)
 pondscum

Joined: 6/28/2007
Msg: 716
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Posted: 12/13/2007 1:36:41 PM
Spank me, screendaddy.
 Jestie

Joined: 7/28/2007
Msg: 717
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Posted: 12/13/2007 3:46:06 PM
stage.. I can see why you are a writer! roflmao. I fell off my chair at the "guys are visual swamp bats" part. Toooooooo funny!
yes I know the pics are fuzzy and I WILL get some new ones up.. as soon as I am done painting and don't look like a splattered nut! lol

Have a Merry Christmas! << snowballs from Alberta, Canada
 brownshug_02

Joined: 11/28/2007
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Posted: 12/13/2007 4:05:06 PM
I am submitting my profile for review. I seems kinda lackluster Any comments will be appreciated.

Thanks
 Tin_Man

Joined: 1/23/2005
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Posted: 12/13/2007 5:09:03 PM
Thanks Chris...

I made the chane up top, and added a blurb in the middle to explain it. Pics will take a little longer...

Feel free to perise the changes... :)

T_M
 Tin_Man

Joined: 1/23/2005
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Posted: 12/13/2007 5:11:23 PM
EDIT:

perise was supposed to be peruse...
 Bubble Eyes

Joined: 6/17/2007
Msg: 721
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Posted: 12/13/2007 9:27:50 PM
lol its funny... the other writer guy on here ripped my profile a new one. It's amazing how you two differ in your comments. lol

Yes the show is still going strong and I just recorded an episode tonight. :) its good music and me being (he told me i'm a bad girl for leaving G's off of all my ing's) a complete cornball. feel free to listen in any time.

happy holidays!
 Jade_38

Joined: 1/29/2006
Msg: 722
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Posted: 12/14/2007 7:09:38 AM
Stage right

I revised my profile and have a little contest going on its in the thread, "All time best profile, do you have it or do I?"

I have thrown down the gauntlet and challenge d anyone with a set to throw their hat in the ring to compete for "all time best profile."

So thats me saying, I challenge you. Take a look at my profile and let me know if the gloves are off.

Disclaimer:

There are no actual prizes award, not unless, you count bragging rights. lol
 2seekadventure

Joined: 12/11/2007
Msg: 723
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Posted: 12/14/2007 7:23:47 AM
Be brutal and let me have it
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/14/2007 7:55:09 AM
PONDSCUM: "spank me, screendaddy" -- too funny!! first, love, love youngstown. yes, i'm sorber and drug free when i'm typing this. i had a good friend that attended ysu and had many fond memories at some pub that ran nickle beer night ...or something crazy like that. actually, i can't remember those nights too well... and how the HELL did i get this f'n tattoo on my forehead--!? ..."bititch".... i mean, what the *uck, man. as least spell it correctly~!

anyhoo, profile time: looks like you're tons of fun, but you need to write a bit more -- great smile in all your pic's -- you know how to live life.

give me interests, hobbies, activities you love to do. i know you've got'em, so as britney spearhead sings, "gimme, gimmie, gimmie..." ...but DON'T SHAVE YOUR HEAD! gawd....right?! that's the real reason why drug dealers need to be licensed around here!!! could you imagine bouncing up to a dealer and asking for some coke and he pulls out a clip board and you're on the first page being banded from buying!!! she'd be in the top -- i bet that's really what happened when she grabbed those clippers and buzzed...

keep youngstown live, girl! ...and get this profile in shape!!

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/14/2007 7:56:38 AM
TIN MAN: the profile looks good. again, i'm glad to see more pic's are on their way.

best,
chris
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