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Posted: 11/9/2007 6:43:43 AM | TAURUSMICK: i think you're set, bud. cloves rule too! okay, here's the tips. 1. pump up the interest section. i know you have more than that. 2. have some fun shots in there with you with the guys. you must have fun singin' away so have a pic or two in there of that.
great clear writing my man!
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Posted: 11/9/2007 7:01:49 AM | TREYBE22: beautiful. beautiful. beautiful. you have such a rhythm with your writing. simple. yet a touch of class. i bet though you have more interests, right? if not that's okay because you seem like a down to earth person not flying all over the place.
the only suggestion i have is to mix up the pictures a bit. put some of you doing something, like holding a book or walking in a park.
great job.
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Posted: 11/9/2007 7:14:16 AM | TINIEDANCER: nice and short, but maybe too short. your interests are fascinating, but as a guy i wouldn't know what exactly you are looking for. example: what if i'm into country western, are you? what type of males do you mostly get along with. that kinda stuff. love the quotes though.
i would dig a little deeper into yourself and script out a few for things.
like your style!
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Posted: 11/9/2007 7:30:31 AM | EVEREADYSC: what a fantastic job!!! you've told a short story here is folks read between the lines. pom's are the best too -- love'em! okay suggestions, love the pic, but ad more. here's detail most will miss, but the ones i think that will notice are the ones that you'll love. see that SC logo on your shirt? that tells me one or two things. eigher you live there or visited there (i'm a bright guy when not sniff'n gas or whiteout, so i read you live -- some don't. these are the ones that fall victim to poison and so on); however, my point is that small detail tells a story. try to get some more pic's on the site with you doing things like cutting up singing or dancing. boy, a pic with you dancing would tell us what kind of dancing you're into, ballroom, line, break and so on.
also, don't be shy to say what kind of business you run. i'm a screenwriter -- and i only do just that. i'm proud of what i do and really don't care if someone thinks less of me -- especially other writers such a novelest, columnists and so on -- they don't pay my bills. i bet you have load of stories with your work so you might want to share one. it looks like you've got a great sense of humor!
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Posted: 11/9/2007 11:25:59 PM | Ok... I'm up for some constructive criticism, but I realize I have a lengthy profile. I just keep adding and adding.
Also I may not change it too much though... from the responses I get, only 3% of my mail I answer, only because I can tell they actually read me profile... so basically I could write I stalk my boyfriends and I'd still get the same responses.
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Posted: 11/9/2007 11:36:24 PM | Could you take a look at my profile? Is it my pic? Is it what I have written? I never get any messages these days. I know that guys look at my profile but just don't write to me. I have written so many... and hardly ever do I get a reply.
I know that I'm not a super model or anything but... I do know that there are plenty of men out there that are attracted to me. I'm just wondering if there is something on my profile that is scaring the guys away.
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