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Posted: 12/14/2007 8:06:55 AM | BUBBLE EYES: i take on reviewing is to first, encourage people not to quit. second, there is no magical formula for this. i believe you have to natually let the words come right outta yeah to describe you. many people think i'm nuts, but ask me if i care... do they pay my bills and put up with my everyday stress and and this thing called life -- no, i do. just like everyone on here.
also, comedy is my life blood. i do write dramas and have been told my dramas are killer, but comedy is the music for the soul to dance...
i will tune into your show -- is there a specific time after i click on that url...?
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Posted: 12/14/2007 8:15:11 AM | JADE 38: you're profile rocks!!! i just miss the other pic's -- you had others up, right? your art is beautiful too! you need to find someone writing fiction and introduce your lady there to a book to be published in! she goes along with so many fiction novels i believe.
okay, i'm game and ready to be destroyed on your theard. i'm proud of my profile, but i think yours takes the cake...
i strongly believe about that cambridge study too. soooooo many people have offered to rip me due to my grammer and spelling, but as a screenwriter i'm paid to be a storyteller -- i hire an editor or the studio does i should say or my agent... what ever, it's not my headache; i came up with the storyline, plot, characters, etc.
last, love the cap. it reminds me of being in greece with my cousins!
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Posted: 12/14/2007 8:41:43 AM | I agree wholeheartedly Chris,
What would we do without editors. My new book is coming out in the new year, and I am sending it to copy-edit as we speak.
Have to flog that old adage, " Those who can, do; those who can't, teach, and/or edit." lol
Thanks for the vote of confidence about my profile, but others have thrown down the gauntlet and run me through with their lancing barbs. lol
Enough with the "mid-evil " references already. Just love words like this they drive my copy editor crazy. I put them in just for sh1ts and giggles.
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Posted: 12/14/2007 4:39:55 PM | Take a look and let me know what you think.
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Posted: 12/14/2007 8:37:22 PM | You're very down to earth and real. I appreciate that. I don't know. I try to take critcism as constructive but sometimes there is nothing that will stop me from having a pansyass moment. lol I don't usually take stuff hard but I really enjoyed your review. :) thanks for that.
if you click on the link, my last recorded episode should start playing automatically. I have no idea what state you are in, or even if you are in the USA. If so, I'm Mountain Standard Time so my show is on every Thursday night at 9pm. thats 8pm Pacific, and 11pm eastern.
lol hope that helps. :)
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Posted: 12/14/2007 10:45:56 PM | CHRYSALIDE: wow... what a great profile. interesting. fasinating. ...and i better stop polluting the rivers and land i visit -- kidding.
i think you meant to write "two master degrees" ... just look into that. i'm far from an editor, but i might be onto something.
you'll find him sooner than later!
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Posted: 12/14/2007 10:48:41 PM | LIVEFORPLUR: nice changes! you might wanna have that headshot include a smile. you look like a guy that throws one on from now and then.
i like it! good job.
best,
chris
p.s. i hope your aunt's health improves; it speaks volumns about your character that you went up there to help out!!! hats off, bro... the universe will repay you. just be patient. | |
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Posted: 12/14/2007 10:52:45 PM | SWEETONE445: i like it. the guys are just blind! you're a flower. soon you'll attrack your bee.
you might wanna change up your pic's from time to time. i love the story you're tellin' with 'em!
last, throw up more interests. i bet you got 'em.
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Posted: 12/14/2007 10:57:56 PM | WORLDCULTURE: ...save the "mr." for my dad -- hey, i'm hangin' on my 36 pal like a turtle to his shell!
profile: nice writing! you're a man of the world -- love it.
the pic's: add more. not crazy about the intro one. great tones and shadowing, but kinda scarry... lighten up a bit and throw on one with a smile. also, give us some variety with the pic's too. you're fasinating. if the gals don't dig ya, i'm just pissin' in the wind withe my mouth wide open with this forum. (i always close my mouth too when i do that).
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Posted: 12/14/2007 11:00:00 PM | ANDREA4162: nice job. pin up some more pic's and you're done. just relax when the shots are taken too. you've got a great look.
best,
chris
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Posted: 12/14/2007 11:20:19 PM | DEUCEGAME: ...okay, lose the "accountant" crap -- YOUR A ROCKER -- doesn't that sound better already~! KIDDING; i love CREATIVE accountants if you know what i mean. i just wanna know when you can write off coke for "entertainment" purposes -- help me out here!!! -- KIDDING...
profile: the intro pic is a bit odd. i say get rid of the arrow and pin up another pic. also, it's tough to have pic's done, but snab a camera for a week and get giggy with it -- with clothes on of course!!! what the HELL were you thinkin'... *uck man! you're scarin' the neighbors again. how many times do you wanna move, huh??!
seriously, add more interests (cause everyone will pin you as the typical accountant with three interests). you're a fun guy with a lot to offer at 25. let's reel 'em in!!! all of 'em for you!!!
let's work on the body of your piece too. expand it. tell us a story. tell us you love your neice or nephew ...someone in your family -- this will show compassion, etc. if you don't have one, adopt a kitten or goldfish... hell you even sent sally fields a nickel or dime... throw some kinda story in here.
next, let's get really creative with a couple of examples of a first date. the more the better. see, you've gotta nail this thing right outta the hole -- folks will be expecting you to fail with creativity since you're a numbers guy. i say let' *uck 'em and throw 'em into on-coming traffic with a kickass first date!
shape this up and get it back to me! you've got loads of potient here. once we're threw with this pup, we'll be calling you "the COUNT" for short!
have a great weekend.
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