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Posted: 12/16/2007 9:14:15 PM | ZAPPA1: don't be hard on yourself 'bout the white space. i can't even *uckin' spell have the time. i know, i know -- and i curse way too much. i'm cleanin' up my act, but not today.
you'll meet here. especially 'round those parts.
happy holidays!
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Posted: 12/17/2007 7:15:01 AM | CRAZYBENNY: look, like your writing, but don't like two of your pic's. the main one -- it would be fine if you were smiling. and the last one with you kneeling on the grass. i just don't think they match your personality. you're up beat. fun. young. all that kinda stuff.
pin up the one with you in the white shirt. that's a good one. you might wanna expand a little more about the type of guy you're looking for.
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Posted: 12/17/2007 8:33:19 AM | TAG98: you've got a great rhythm to your writing. swap out your intro pic with the tank top one. in some of your pic's a feel a forced smile -- relax. don't expand beyond what you normally do.
last, you might wanna expand your interests. i see you have some up, but i bet you have more.
your sheer honesty will reel in a keeper whether it's on this site or somewhere else -- my bet is on somewhere else.
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Posted: 12/17/2007 10:55:22 AM | ROKAZ; i'd expect a little more with all your talent. you need a variety of pic's. you need to spend a little more time on this entire piece. everyone is in your same boat with lack of time; however, without interests listed and a lack of luster here, they're just going on your pic's. give 'em more.
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Posted: 12/17/2007 1:15:08 PM | XOXBMXOX: first, you gotta be consistant. you've capped every word in your "about me section," then in your "first date" section it's half and half. let's clean that up.
next, your interests need to be expanded. think about these. jot 'em down.
finally, more pic's. more pic's. more pic's.
overall, spend a little more time on this and get it back to me.
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Posted: 12/17/2007 8:27:40 PM | COUNTYONCOUNT3: first, hats off you survived key west for 5 years. i worked on a project that got extended for six months down on that sandbar; i'm lucky booze and dope don't do it for me or i'd be in some padded cell 'bout now with a return address of betty ford.
profile: like your writing. just break it up with white space. you're set.
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