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Posted: 12/18/2007 10:34:33 AM | Chris,
Thank you for the very nice review. I will take your advice and get some more pictures.
I hope the right guy does come along, I have so much too offer.
There is definitely a story behind the scene. Maybe I will write a book or direct a movie about it. LOL It would be a best seller.
Thank you again,
itsawondrfulife
P.S. I will hire you as my screenwriter. | |
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Posted: 12/18/2007 12:26:05 PM | Okay stageright,
Let me have it.........I have beeon on POF for a short 3 days and have quite a few pages of people viewing me but so far very few contacts and very few replies to my first contact. I am a definate keeper but maybe I'm not getting that accross well enough in my profile. | |
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Posted: 12/18/2007 2:15:10 PM | DDOUBLEU: well, i like the pictures, but not sold on the writing. just focus on you. don't worry so much about her; however, every single profile i've seen is different. i bet your an upbeat type of guy, which is great for this site.
now, add some shots of just you. a full body. and a nice head shot. this is top you off.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 12/18/2007 6:10:53 PM | Ok, my profile needs serious help! I can't even LOL about it anymore. Am I saying too much by being completely upfront and honest? Am I scaring guy's away? I know for me I am much more likely to meet someone who seems honest... So why can't I get a date??? Help;)
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Posted: 12/18/2007 7:30:42 PM | PETEDOGG: "yes"...KIDDING!!!! here's what i think the problem is: your emotions are worn on your sleave within the first paragraph -- loose it; like yesterday. you're a get guy! portland rocks too! your a fine product of that place.
now, give my more pic's. pin 'em up. expand your interests. you've got 'em. you mentioned so many in your writing already.
extra points for the office -- wrote for a few episodes, but never really digged t.v. writing gigs. before the strike i wrote a short that might air once the strike is lifted: big brother office. think: office + big brother + sprinkle in a little surviver. nbc/universal bought the script so who knows...
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 12/18/2007 7:34:44 PM | DJ KRAZY K: i like it. break up your writing with white space and you'll be lookin' like a pro. the pic's are nice, but throw in some more variety -- full bod shot and maybe you spinnin' a record or two.
if you into trance, check out thewomb.com ...think that's it. they're outta miami beach and cut fresh stuff all the time. someone's always spinnin' in there.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 12/18/2007 7:38:37 PM | CHELLEWAITS4U: ...it's the cat. you gotta get rid of him -- kidding!! now, get rid of your first paragraph. it's too much information that can be seen as negitive i feel. let's start off with the second one and go from there. when you talk with someone, then bring up so of your issues, but be carefully -- that's personal and i don't recommend giving everything out 'til you really know someone.
pin up more pic's -- smile, relax. you'll find him! put positive energy into this.
last, scribe out as many interests you have. the more the merrier.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 12/18/2007 9:17:05 PM | Wanna do mine? It's a work in progress. I didn't know you couldn't save it to edit it later, without it just being thrown up there! I know it's waaaaaaaaay too long, but that's also kind of like me....
Any constructive criticism would be appreciated. | |
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