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 Tiny Woman

Joined: 12/15/2005
Msg: 976
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Posted: 12/28/2007 6:26:43 PM
Hi stage, i did post one ok, the rest are private, I do not want to post all because of my work. And will mention I have more avail;able upon request. BTW no it's not a glamour shot, that is me and what I look like, did my own hair my own makeup, I do mature modeling for fun, ok? I did a major overhaul of my profile, and took alot out, so please any thing you can critique on would be helpful.
 beckyls38

Joined: 10/22/2006
Msg: 977
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Posted: 12/28/2007 6:32:15 PM
Hey can you check mine out? Writing is just not my thing. I'm sure I'll have to start from scratch. Thanks
 maxxoccupancy

Joined: 2/5/2007
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Posted: 12/28/2007 6:34:27 PM
Would you be willing to check mine out? The more criticism, the better.
 mackja

Joined: 9/28/2007
Msg: 979
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Posted: 12/28/2007 6:57:40 PM
Ok - I'm fairly new to this (about 3 months) so, give it to me straight.
 scorpio.rising

Joined: 11/7/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 1:26:51 AM
Ok - changed my pic. What else?
 Warming Up

Joined: 12/24/2007
Msg: 981
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Posted: 12/29/2007 1:45:09 AM
I'm very interested in your thoughts.
 iceman2486

Joined: 12/22/2007
Msg: 982
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Posted: 12/29/2007 2:54:56 AM
Go ahead and tear mine to shreds.
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 5:46:33 AM
CDEMPSTER: nice and simple -- like it. maybe a few more action shots. you on the quad tells a story that's what you want. expand your interests too.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
Msg: 984
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Posted: 12/29/2007 5:47:42 AM
BREATH OF FIRE: nice job! you're set.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 5:49:57 AM
TINY WOMAN: like your overhaul! not crazy about the animation do-dads. i'd lose all but maybe one. the last suggestion: more interests. list everything.

nice job!
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 5:52:56 AM
BECKYLS38: i think you're off to a wonderful start. now, when you're relaxed and had a great day go back in and add more interests and things about you. also, you need to add more pic's. the more the merrier.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 5:54:23 AM
MAXXOCCUPANCY: nice job! hats off. you're set. go reel her in.

you have one of the best picture sets i've ever seen.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 5:55:32 AM
MACKIA: nice. you need more pic's. expand your interests too. then see what happens.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 5:56:48 AM
SCORPIO.RISING: you might wanna write some more interests and a little more about yourself. add more pic's too.


best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 5:57:47 AM
FLA TRANSPLANT: more pic's. you've written enough. add more interests too.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 6:00:17 AM
ICEMAN2486: first, loosen up. take some pills. do a few lines -- something. your about me section is really your interests. if you're into photo stuff snap some and pin 'em up too.

you really need to spend more time on this -- in a relaxed state too!

best,
chris
 Sitting Pretty

Joined: 6/2/2006
Msg: 992
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Posted: 12/29/2007 6:04:08 AM
Hi StageRight

Willing to leave myself open to your critique....thanks
 Zashiki

Joined: 5/30/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 6:48:41 AM
Help! I'm getting loads of views on my profile but hardly any messages or replies.
Can you work your magic and take a look ?
 eliza-jane

Joined: 11/30/2007
Msg: 994
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Posted: 12/29/2007 6:56:34 AM
OK, read me please
 swfl_dan

Joined: 12/4/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 7:05:22 AM
Word smith - you're the only other person I've ever heard use that phrase. It was one of my favorites back before an English Comp teacher patiently explained I wasn't anywhere near as good a writer as I'd thought I was. javascript:smilie('')
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So take a look at my profile and let me know what ya think!

Please?
 mackja

Joined: 9/28/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 7:36:06 AM
Thanks for taking the time to take a look, and I will do what you said!
 Rockland Single

Joined: 6/3/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 7:47:52 AM
Stageright: Russia, huh? I may have to travel there this coming year for work so I'll let you know if anything pans out.

I was just enjoying the entertainment you were providing; didn't ask for a critique! But, thank you. Nice of you to take the time. I highly doubt I will find "him" on here. "MY MATCHES" link hasn't changed since I've joined this site. I think I need to find a bigger ocean!

How are things working out for you? I hear Leno and Letterman are back on next week. Enjoy this time off. Doesn't happen often (hopefully).

Happy New Year and Happy Fishing!

Regards,
Dorothy
 TNcowboy924

Joined: 10/5/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 7:55:22 AM
Here's a bump to get you to the 1,000 you are hoping to get by the end of the year. If you have any that you want to send down to my office, by all means please do. I could use the extra pressure on me right now LOL!!!!
 mackja

Joined: 9/28/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 9:07:08 AM
I did what you suggested, if you get time, please take another look and see if it's better now or if I should change something else.
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 12/29/2007 10:19:22 AM
SITTING PRETTY: bravo. nice job. just be patient. ...spear gun season is comin' up in this pond too -- so take note!

best,
chris
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