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| Hi check out mine Posted: 1/3/2008 9:14:04 AM | KRECKON: not crazy 'bout your writing style. you need to rethink this. i bet the gals don't know what to think of you.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me! Posted: 1/3/2008 9:22:26 AM | SEUCEGAME: i like the changes. you might wanna include in your writing who those women are, like: have a few great friends, carla and dawn keep me in line around the shop, etc. ....or.... a few of us around the shop like to cut free from time to time.
llike the second to last pic the best.
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| ok Chris Posted: 1/3/2008 9:39:46 AM | SWEETBLUEYEDARLING: like what you wrote, but add to your interests. one have one "lips" shot up there too. pin up another full body pic too.
just be patient.
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| ok Chris Posted: 1/3/2008 9:44:23 AM | HARDCLIMBER: like what you've wrote. now for your interests, throw a comma in between 'em and they'll line better like the rest of the profiles.
keep cuyahoga live and well! use to travel through there a decade and a half ago.
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| Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me! Posted: 1/3/2008 9:53:06 AM | THE ONLY THING I'M GOING TO ASK IS IF YOU VISIT MY OTHER TREAD AND PICK A MOVIE THAT YOU MIGHT WANNA SEE IF YOU HAD A "FREE" TICKET. IT'LL JUST TAKE A SEC OR THREE...
HERE'S THE TREAD UNDER CREATIVE WRITING: "Movies -- after reading these short, creative loglines, which one would you see?"
HAVE A WONDERFUL NEW YEAR!
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| ok Chris Posted: 1/4/2008 8:32:35 AM | OK went in and made some changes..lets see if its a improvement also all photos recent to this October..if that helps. I think Guys don't want to put 58 photos in there profiles
I mean me in a speedo? Me with my toys and stuff. and no photos of me and my kids please..I have them if she wants to see more photos I have them..
and guys who put in photos of there "cars", house, Motorcycles its looks like there saying here's what you can win...I mean if sh writes and want to kn the mileage on my car or the blue book on my bike..that just might be a red flag..
or is that house paid off???...
why not just sit on a big bag of money?
I think I'm gong to do that..
but give mine a look over see if I fixed it up better..
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