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 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:07:59 AM
ACLVR1: i find it very interesting; i wouldn't change a thing. just be patient.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:10:44 AM
19JRM57: you need to spend more time this. where are your interests? your about me is brief and doesn't give someone a hook to say, "hey, i'd like to be her friend."

more pic's too.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
Msg: 1078
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Hi check out mine
Posted: 1/3/2008 9:14:04 AM
KRECKON: not crazy 'bout your writing style. you need to rethink this. i bet the gals don't know what to think of you.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:15:39 AM
GOMAVS: spend more time on this. more interests, more about me, more pic's. you're off to a good start, but more means more ...if you know what i mean.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:16:36 AM
EYESFORYOU: nice job. just be patient.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:18:58 AM
QUEENBEE24: more pic's. don't list an email either -- too many whack jobs on here.

i like what you've written, but throw some white space in here.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:22:26 AM
SEUCEGAME: i like the changes. you might wanna include in your writing who those women are, like: have a few great friends, carla and dawn keep me in line around the shop, etc. ....or.... a few of us around the shop like to cut free from time to time.

llike the second to last pic the best.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:24:42 AM
NICE GUYS FINISH...: nice job! more pic's and you're set.

best,
chris
 ChantelleRose

Joined: 12/1/2007
Msg: 1084
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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:25:45 AM
Hey help me out please!
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:26:59 AM
UNKNOWNLOVE: more pic's. more interests too. not crazy about your intro pic either -- keep it though on your profile, just find a better intro one.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:29:53 AM
SKYEREAN: nice job! hats off!! go grab a snowcone and watch 'em roll in!!

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:30:05 AM
SKYEREAN: nice job! hats off!! go grab a snowcone and watch 'em roll in!!

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:33:04 AM
REDDCURRLZ: nice writing. i would suggest to mix up the pic's more. a least one full body pic.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:35:18 AM
KAZ 1 CAN: wow... a lines of lines of writing here. add more pic's and make sure you give us a variety too!

best,
chris.

p.s. sorry if i skipped you!
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:36:23 AM
NICHOLAZ: nice job. add a few more pic's. you'll find her.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:36:35 AM
NICHOLAZ: nice job. add a few more pic's. you'll find her.

best,
chris
 stageright

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ok Chris
Posted: 1/3/2008 9:39:46 AM
SWEETBLUEYEDARLING: like what you wrote, but add to your interests. one have one "lips" shot up there too. pin up another full body pic too.

just be patient.

best,
chris
 stageright

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ok Chris
Posted: 1/3/2008 9:44:23 AM
HARDCLIMBER: like what you've wrote. now for your interests, throw a comma in between 'em and they'll line better like the rest of the profiles.

keep cuyahoga live and well! use to travel through there a decade and a half ago.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:48:07 AM
CHANTELLEROSE: nice job! switch up between the first and the second pic from now and then. you'll find him.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Let an accomplished screenwriter rate your profile. C'mon. Try me!
Posted: 1/3/2008 9:53:06 AM
THE ONLY THING I'M GOING TO ASK IS IF YOU VISIT MY OTHER TREAD AND PICK A MOVIE THAT YOU MIGHT WANNA SEE IF YOU HAD A "FREE" TICKET. IT'LL JUST TAKE A SEC OR THREE...

HERE'S THE TREAD UNDER CREATIVE WRITING: "Movies -- after reading these short, creative loglines, which one would you see?"

HAVE A WONDERFUL NEW YEAR!

SINCERELY,
STAGERIGHT (CHRIS FOR SHORT)
 Tan_Y_Ddraig

Joined: 1/28/2007
Msg: 1096
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Posted: 1/3/2008 9:57:03 AM
What are your thoughts on mine chris?

cheers!
 ReddCurrlz

Joined: 10/6/2005
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Posted: 1/3/2008 1:17:27 PM
Okee Dokee - uploaded a full body shot and rearranged the pics. So you're saying there's nothing wrong with my profile? or are you less enthused now than you were when you began this thread to critique

ME
 mindmyownbusiness

Joined: 11/1/2007
Msg: 1098
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Posted: 1/3/2008 2:05:14 PM
Well, try with mine.
I could not write anything more in the profile......But I write a lot in the Forums. Why?
 Pearnbran

Joined: 10/4/2005
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/4/2008 8:32:35 AM
OK went in and made some changes..lets see if its a improvement also all photos recent to this October..if that helps. I think Guys don't want to put 58 photos in there profiles

I mean me in a speedo? Me with my toys and stuff. and no photos of me and my kids please..I have them if she wants to see more photos I have them..

and guys who put in photos of there "cars", house, Motorcycles its looks like there saying here's what you can win...I mean if sh writes and want to kn the mileage on my car or the blue book on my bike..that just might be a red flag..

or is that house paid off???...

why not just sit on a big bag of money?

I think I'm gong to do that..

but give mine a look over see if I fixed it up better..

Brian
 Familyman08

Joined: 12/31/2007
Msg: 1100
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Posted: 1/4/2008 8:47:30 AM
I'm new here and looking for reviews from who ever wants to give'em.
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