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 quietcowboy

Joined: 12/25/2007
Msg: 1101
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/4/2008 8:49:48 AM
I made some changes to my profile, with some of the pointers you gave me before(possibly page 12?). Please let me know what you think. I'm still working on getting better pics!
 Pearnbran

Joined: 10/4/2005
Msg: 1102
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/4/2008 10:52:16 AM
thaks ad I did what you said but Maybe I need more photos??

lok it over again when you have time

Thanks for the heads up..

Brian
 Tony9876

Joined: 11/18/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 11:03:39 AM
OK. Let's hear what you have to say.

Tony
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 1:41:03 PM
TAN Y DDRAIG: nice job. pin up a full body pic. love your interests.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 1:42:58 PM
REDECURRLZ: okay, when did you bold your "about me" section? unbold it. like the pic's. clean up the format and you're set.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
Msg: 1106
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Posted: 1/4/2008 1:45:21 PM
MINDMYOWNBUSINESS: you gotta spend more time describing yourself. i would feel i would have to plan everything if i were dating you -- yuck...

and get rid of your old profile stuff. it's the past. live in the future.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
Msg: 1107
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/4/2008 1:48:51 PM
PEARNBRAN: it's better. pic's tell a story. as far as pic's, i have my bike pic up because it's the world to me. if she's not into rollin', then there's no hope for a relationship. i'm not so sure girls are into pic's as much as guys unless there's a story there.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 1:50:54 PM
FAMILYMAN08: i'd pin up some or pic's -- a variety. like what you've written, but just put in some white space to break it up.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/4/2008 1:52:44 PM
QUIETCOWBOY: like your changes. now pin up some more pic's. expand your interests a bit more too.

good job!

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 1:58:31 PM
TONY9876: the minute i read "tony," i thought of n.y. then, after reading more i had a soft laugh. "business analysis" -- yeah, sure. my cousin, "tommy two-chin" was a "business analysis" for waste management... KIDDING...

love what you've written. your glowing personality comes right through. you'll find her; just be patient.

best,
chris
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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GIVE ME YOUR THOUGHTS ON WHAT MOVIE YOU'D SEE....
Posted: 1/4/2008 2:00:03 PM
THE ONLY THING I'M GOING TO ASK IS IF YOU VISIT MY OTHER TREAD AND PICK A MOVIE THAT YOU MIGHT WANNA SEE IF YOU HAD A "FREE" TICKET. IT'LL JUST TAKE A SEC OR THREE...

HERE'S THE TREAD UNDER CREATIVE WRITING: "Movies -- after reading these short, creative loglines, which one would you see?"

HAVE A WONDERFUL NEW YEAR!

SINCERELY,
STAGERIGHT (CHRIS FOR SHORT)
 ReddCurrlz

Joined: 10/6/2005
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Posted: 1/4/2008 2:41:43 PM
Chris - it was already bolded, personally I like it so I think I'll leave it :)
 mindmyownbusiness

Joined: 11/1/2007
Msg: 1113
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Posted: 1/4/2008 2:50:59 PM
I would feel i would have to plan everything if i were dating you

Really? Why is that? Just tell me how I come across, because I do not understand what you mean.
 sixofseven8

Joined: 11/17/2006
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Posted: 1/4/2008 3:16:37 PM
TY Chris, I will add some direction.
 renaissance08

Joined: 12/31/2007
Msg: 1115
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Posted: 1/4/2008 3:23:17 PM
I am open to suggestions if you'd like to take a stab at mine.

Thanks in advance!
 stageright

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Posted: 1/4/2008 3:26:01 PM
MINDMYOWNBUSINESS: ...i think you need to fully describe yourself. you have wonderful interests, but i don't feel i know your personality enough.

best,
chris
 stageright

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Posted: 1/4/2008 3:28:06 PM
RENAISSANCE08: more interests -- list 'em all. more pic's too. love your intro pic; tells a neat story.

best,
chris
 renaissance08

Joined: 12/31/2007
Msg: 1118
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Posted: 1/4/2008 3:33:43 PM
thank you very much ! I will take yout advice.
 mindmyownbusiness

Joined: 11/1/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 3:40:05 PM

i don't feel i know your personality enough

It's because you have zero intuition!
 stageright

Joined: 8/2/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 3:51:37 PM
MINDMYOWNBUSINESS: thanks... zoo called; ya gotta be back by nine.

best,
chris
 torch mahoney

Joined: 12/16/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 7:34:23 PM
dude you crack me up.what kind of animal would she be...?rate mine i'm here so might as well.
 pandersoj

Joined: 11/6/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 7:58:00 PM
Check mine out please!

Thanks,
 trisha64

Joined: 9/3/2007
Msg: 1123
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Posted: 1/4/2008 8:08:46 PM
can u rate my profile plz let me know what i'm doin wrong ,,, i'm getting no replys
thanx
 sixofseven8

Joined: 11/17/2006
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Posted: 1/4/2008 8:31:59 PM
Hay Chris,
I exposed my flank alittle see what you think, if its good enough could you put me in your fav`s. I need one cause my mother wants to pull her profile, Thanks 6of78
 kansasgirl07

Joined: 12/25/2007
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Posted: 1/4/2008 8:38:02 PM
Go to it............Please!
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