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Posted: 1/5/2008 8:01:41 AM | TRISHA64: i like what you've written, but throw in some white space. pictures: work on these. i think you can snap some better shots. i like your intro one, but they're all the same. pin up a variety. also include a full body pic.
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Posted: 1/5/2008 8:06:49 AM | KANSASGIRL07: you list some of your interests in the body -- stick'em in the interest section. pin up a few more pic's.
i really like what you've written. you should be proud to be finishing a master's!!! hats off. i actually have one; go pounder that for a year!
you'll find him. just be patient.
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Posted: 1/5/2008 8:12:34 AM | MRSNAPHAPPY: for a sec there, i thought pizzy pk was in miami, fla, usa!!! i actually through it into yahoo to see where this park is. it would be a long drive for me! i'm currently looking to join a volleyball league.
love your profile. pin up more pic's. i love the current ones; however, not crazy about your intro pic. i think you could do better especially looking at the other one you snapped.
you'll find her -- especially with all those cool interests.
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Posted: 1/5/2008 8:13:21 AM | THE ONLY THING I'M GOING TO ASK IS IF YOU VISIT MY OTHER TREAD AND PICK A MOVIE THAT YOU MIGHT WANNA SEE IF YOU HAD A "FREE" TICKET. IT'LL JUST TAKE A SEC OR THREE...
HERE'S THE TREAD UNDER CREATIVE WRITING: "Movies -- after reading these short, creative loglines, which one would you see?"
HAVE A WONDERFUL NEW YEAR!
SINCERELY,
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Posted: 1/5/2008 6:59:27 PM | Please look at mine and give me some tips. I know I need more pics. Maybe to wordy...any input would be great.
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Posted: 1/6/2008 9:18:45 AM | DIZZYFIED: waaaaaaaay too much, guy. i feel your pain in every sentence, but save that for a later date. focus on only the positive. this is self marketing. tell us what you're doing now -- not the past. you can't change that stuff, but you can change the future.
read some other profiles, then have another shot at yours.
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