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mm135
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Joined: 10/6/2007
Msg: 129 | |
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Posted: 11/11/2007 8:06:11 PM | Okay,
I just converted my profile to a friend seeking christian profile and i havent had 1 person view it that i can tell. I see a lot of christian women on this site and I really dont believe any of them are looking to dive into an intense relationship. Is it because i need to make the profile more interesting or that there just arent that many christian women on this site looking to start as friends? I'm a little bewildered, a little. Thanks for your opinion in advance . | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 2:13:56 PM | | Hi Chris.... if you have the time would appreciate your views on my profile. I'm aware that my pictures aren't that good an I am working on them. It's always nice to have a man's view on things this being one of them. Many thanks, Anne | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 2:14:06 PM | | Hi Chris.... if you have the time would appreciate your views on my profile. I'm aware that my pictures aren't that good an I am working on them. It's always nice to have a man's view on things this being one of them. Many thanks, Anne | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 2:30:22 PM | SUPER RYAN: weak bro! what's up with the " ...let me grab that camel that the wind just took," pic. c'mon man, i can see you're creative. put more into this. it's not like you're picking up your diner at seven-eleven -- put some elbow grease into it! you're looking for that steak, tasty ham or lobster tail if you know whatta i mean.
i can see you've got potiental. i know, i know, "it's online dating," right? who cares. that's where you're missing the point. we'll all gulped down tastless bud paying what our hondas, chevys, and ferraris cost at the local pub. So look at it this way, at lease it's just a few more cents on the electric bill and you don't have to wake up to gorilla breath what's her name and see what see REALLY looks like ...and explain it to your friends. remember this next time it happens: moped -- fun to ride, but you don't what your friends to catch ya it!
best,
chris | |
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USAF29
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Joined: 8/8/2007
Msg: 138 | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 2:41:06 PM | THAT SAM I AM: you're a nut if you change this. EVERYONE **blowing the air horn*** okay, gather around. Sam here has the winning profile. Witty. Smart. Catchy. It's a baked cake, Sam. Stick some candle in the %#ther ^%cker and burn the place down -- WHOA, WHOA, WHOA, big guy. Put the shit down and step away from the cake. sorry, way too much red bull today and i'm going %$cking nuts not being able to write due to the strike.
Trust me, you'll be boxin' up your stuff and moving in with someone within a year -- money down on that my friend. ...I didn't what to tell ya, but you'll be moving out within another year and back on this site again -- KIDDING!!!!
keep rockin' it out!
chris | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 2:46:08 PM | FINDINGMYSELFAGAIN: fantastic! if your pro. photog'r bud can't hook you up, maaco's runnin' a deal -- KIDDING -- feeling alive today!!! the strike is killing me.
"fixin' to" -- yup, i moved south well over a decade ago to seek warm waters, cold drinks and where the players don't know my name -- for you triva buffs: miami vice, 1991(2?) -- last dialoge line spoken by crocket -- speaking of which i just saw don johnson last week at one of my local watering hole -- still a chump.
live well and free my friend!
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 3:24:39 PM | CYANAURA: great profile. the eyes shot is a bit scarry -- looks like you're peeping through my mailslot -- i hate when that happens! with you, you can peep anytime. i'll even throw on some music and get jiggy wit it!
don't change a word here. the only advice i have is grab some more pic's and change 'em up.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 3:28:41 PM | GETYOURJEFF: i like it. you made a funny too! you're a crafty writer -- extra bonus points. suggests: more pic's. amp up the first date section. i bet you can get real creative with a date ...and leave the axe at home -- your in marketing -- market, baby, market!!!
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 3:40:16 PM | MIKEDUKE: you started out strong and finished weak. also, flannel pj's and sleepin' nude clashes. one with one and stick to just that. mix it up and throw in "sleepin' nude with a hot perogie!!!" -- hey, use that with your opening line.
mix up the pic's a bit too. throw some other stuff on there. OH, your first date has to go. use that diner you mentioned above with something else you like to do. it'll put more of a "hometown" feel on it.
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 3:45:08 PM | MM135: i think your profile is fine. it's to the point and maybe you should be more direct with "seeking a christian woman." that'll get the point right out there. we should also be a direct and to the point when looking for something specific. example: i love reading, riding my bike and the beach. if someone i meet up with doesn't like one of those things -- they're done. i know it just won't work. maybe i'm filtering too many, but tough -- don't we deserve what is most import to us?
best,
chris | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 3:52:06 PM | | EVERYONE!!!! LET ME HAVE YOUR ATTENTION. check out this guy's site. the pic's say a thousand and one words here. this guy puts it all out there and i think for a simple profile it's good. i bet if someone met up with him, he would be exactly like everything said and shown in the profile. i'm saying he's for you, but he paints a very clear picture that will attract the girl he is seeking. | |
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Posted: 11/12/2007 4:16:49 PM | CHEESECAKEBOY: I'm not crazy about the name, but maybe you could shed some light on that in your profile. i think you could explore more interests and list them as well. Last, beef up the first date section. There's gotta be something you would do that would make you stand out from the rest.
Best,
Chris | |
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