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Posted: 11/12/2007 4:42:30 PM | USAF29: you're the real deal, buddy! first, hats off for servin' our country. did you ever listen to type o negitive -- old rock back about 10, 12 years ago. you remind me of the lead guy, peter steel -- tough as %uck. wore a heavy gage chain to strap up his guitar -- mean mother $#cker -- type of guy you roll with when in the bad part of town. anyway, he was a real down to earth guy. case in point: show some softer stuff, maybe on the first date section. come up with something very creative and low budget. i think a guy like you could "wow" someone with the stories you have dealing with the stuff you've seen while servin'. that's why you need to spend some time on these dates -- start early, like noon.
that part of cali you're in is above LA, right? first date: perpare a lunch (buy something at trader joe's -- roasted chicken, side of potato salad, chips and UNIQUE cookies or something sweet) and head to a park. talk there. next if she's something interesting, hit a movie or museum or better yet a local concert at a pub -- maybe something to do with pop culture, then make a bon fire on the beach and take along some marshmellows (don't for get the sticks) and dark chocolate with gram crackers and chow down on smoores. if she tells you she just had a date like this LEAVE HER THERE! ...and rock home to your music!
seriously, if this goes through, you'll be naming your first born after me.
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Posted: 11/12/2007 4:47:08 PM | SWEET THANG: I really like yours! It's to the point and simple. The only part I think you really need to consider is what you would like to do one the first date. Think about something that will really flush out a great guy. I know certain things or places that flush out who's right or wrong -- think about those places.
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Posted: 11/12/2007 7:10:32 PM | EVERYONE!!!! LET ME HAVE YOUR ATTENTION. check out this guy's site. the pic's say a thousand and one words here. this guy puts it all out there and i think for a simple profile it's good. i bet if someone met up with him, he would be exactly like everything said and shown in the profile. i'm saying he's for you, but he paints a very clear picture that will attract the girl he is seeking.
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Posted: 11/12/2007 7:17:39 PM | BELLATRIX: you're set. throw some more pic's up and be patient. also, i don't know about the words "get active" under the first date section. someone could think, "alright, finally someone that's jumpin' right in!" or something like that.
stay patient. you'll hook mr. right. you're a goot catch.
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Posted: 11/12/2007 8:49:11 PM | MOUNTAINGIRLEE: why can't there be mountains in miami!!!! you're fantastic. your pic's are to die for. you're on a kx or kawaski -- you're a girl after my own heart. i learned to ride on a kaw!!!
your profile is done. you'll meet mr. right REAL soon. my god -- you go girl!!! you're intro pic has the most beautiful smile i've yet to see.
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Posted: 11/12/2007 9:45:56 PM | BOBSDAUGHTER: whoa, whoa, whoa. this is a bit much. looks the ingrediants for a mcdonald's burger or something. you'll confuse the poor guy. like what's in it, but break it up into smaller chunks. i like the pictures, but add more. you're almost there.
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Posted: 11/13/2007 10:17:05 AM | CHICA07: ...you had me at the name! love chicas! only date them; no gringas for me.
okay, more pic's and let "tie me up and do with ya what ya what" stuff. do you really want to read 4-6 110 pg. screenplays??? do ya? 'cause i'll do it!
get jazzy here. you can do it! love the intro pic, but again, throw some more on.
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