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Posted: 5/22/2005 10:57:52 PM | 46 Takes
Forty times over I spent on this vision
6 times it rolled , like a double incision
Its like rolling dice , or sacrifice
Its time to portal into my mind
There is nothing else left to do when I feel your power
Nothing in mind to choose , when I feel your power
Cause im out there , I feel your power
Its on for the first time , Reality screen
Did you see the first take? , Do you really know what I mean
Its like rolling dice , or sacrifice
Its time to portal into my mind
There is nothing else left to do when I feel your power
Nothing in mind to choose , when I feel your power
Cause im out there , I feel your power | |
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Posted: 5/22/2005 10:59:29 PM | | Awesome again Portal...Such a gift of words..And again you speak volumes with the unspoken..I love it...... | |
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Posted: 5/22/2005 11:09:48 PM | Thankyou for your kind words
Subtle and engage
Forced me in rage
Listen to the age
Written page by page | |
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Posted: 5/22/2005 11:20:08 PM | | I will have to agree with angel, u do speak in such ways that touch my heart. Nice write again portal. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 1:08:54 AM | Untitled
Can you see me?
I am here
Lost beyond your resentment and fears
holding your hand and wiping your tears
in the darkness
I am your light
when life is dim
I help you shine bright
when the world seems unfair
you need but to call me
and I am there
I live in your dreams
and inspire you
no matter how hard life may seem
I encourage you to cope
I am always the last to leave
For I am hope..... | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 1:38:26 AM | | good writes Portual and Juicy....nice to here from you again Juicy...look forward to seeing more of your work... | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 9:35:02 AM | | Nice poem juicy, ty for posting that here. Please feel free to post here anytime, I look forward to reading more of your work. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 9:56:56 AM | This poem goes out to my father and what he put me through this weekend.
Untitled
Work for you can be really tough,
And makes you want to say 'goodbye',
Because you have put up with enough,
But bare with it and give it a try.
Dealing with it by drinking is not the way to go,
Because you lose everyone in sight,
By choosing the wrong path to travel down so,
And you know that it's just not right.
You left those you love feeling worried and scared,
Because they thought you were going to die,
But that shows you how much they truely cared,
And they weren't ready to tell you 'goodbye'.
This all happened because you chose to lie,
Hurting the ones that love you really deeply. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 4:07:54 PM | I read this and I didn't know whether to laugh or to cry,
I put in my two cents and tossed to the side,
A tear I wipe away from the corner of my eye,
My feelings which i cannot hide.
You don't know what goes on inside my head,
So I wish you would try not to force it,
I write how I feel in a poem instead,
To get them out so they don't sit,
Building up over the things that aren't right,
Causing my head to hurt with a great deal of pain,
So out they come pure and in sight,
As the tears fall, just like the rain.
Soaking my pillow as they fall,
Why don't I feel the love that I give away?
No one returns it, my life is at a stall,
And that is where I don't want to stay. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 5:01:33 PM | New world
Forced under the skin of all our ancestors
Is a new world order to refute the past
Why is it pain and suffering exist
Life is full of changes , then ends with a twist
Bottle now full in this age of technology
Ready to explode for future minority
Maybe its bleak , darkness never bright
Think of yourself , Love in the light
What we make of today
Will only benefit for future
Yesterday is there
No doubt recorded on computer
So dont be hulled and trapped
In a web design rage
Listen to the new world
Between the lines , page by page. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 5:05:16 PM | | Nice write Portal, plz continue to post them here, i love to read them. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 5:13:31 PM | Thanks catsmeow02
Hope im not spoiling your thread! Enjoying your open heart. !! Great volume. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 5:32:43 PM | | Wonderful writing Portal...I love poetry that is spoken between the lines. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 5:38:07 PM | Torn Couch
Whats on the news today?
Are you going to teach me how to stay?
When will this television pass away?
How long has black and white been mixed into grey?
The colours to swirl , then a tragic story of a little girl
Taken from our world by a horrible creature
Oh how i wish i could reach her
To tell her she is safe and that i killed the creature
Why do these monsters roam the earth
I would love to redirect their birth , and end them up in mars
They could then work out , that toys are not cars
Driving drunk , smelling of a skunk , taking a life in the back of a trunk
Must i dwell on this news story , probably made money , for a tragic glory
Poor girl , deserved more from this world , and a real chance
For this i give my two cents , and take my stance. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 5:41:27 PM | Cats, Your thread is really coming alive. Awesome writes going on in here! Thanks for sharing everyone!!
Sam | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 5:42:22 PM | No Portal you are not spoiling my thread, I love others poetry in mine, after all I did call it poetry collection for a reason, I wanted others to post their poetry here. And keep it up Portal  | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 5:42:46 PM | Hi Sam
Saturn Day
Today is saturn day
Filled with rings
And a blue glaze
Not so far away
The week at end
Planets to comprehend
What we find in orbit
Is there because we saw it
Open up the portal
The Express lane to Saturn
Running in timelines , never ending and mortal
Its almost gone , forever hidden
Behind the sun , and lifted ambition
Its the rings of blue that give saturns admission
To the solar system. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 6:22:20 PM | Cat..You showed a depth of feelings in that poem..Great writing..Keep up the good work. A creative gift should never be wasted.
How was your day Cat? | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 6:22:55 PM | | Wanted to say Hi Sam..Sam has done some awesome writing. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 6:29:59 PM | My day was ok, I wrote that poem today, that's how badly I was affected
I am also on yahoo if you want to talk again tonight angel | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 6:34:38 PM | | I will be on yahoo in about an hour ok? | |
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