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Posted: 5/23/2005 7:42:40 PM | | I havent been all the way through this thread... but you have some very good writes in here!!! Keep them coming!! | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 8:10:51 PM | | tyvm cross, u just haven't gotten to the best ones yet, lol | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 8:21:34 PM | Ladies,
I just wanted to say thank you. I really truly enjoy reading your poems...you ALL are so good!!! i really enjoy reading these poems....
mari-sam - you will always have a special place in my heart because of that poem you wrote about my daughter...i find myself re-reading it at times...god that one so touched my heart. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 8:34:53 PM | | Kseej and angel, if u are here, im on yahoo willin to talk for a little bit. come find me, lol, i'll be waiting | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 8:50:44 PM | All the pain that I feel as of late,
Has nothing to do with you,
I am just in a hurtful state,
And there is nothing you can do.
I am not in the mood to laugh, smile or cry,
And I don't want to talk about what's wrong,
I have to pull through, I just have to try,
And keep my spirit strong.
But there is an empty void in my heart,
Even though I find it really tough,
To try to hide it, but out slips just a small part,
Making my life incredibly rough.
I am oftly young to be dealing with such pain,
And it is causing me to begin to weep,
Slowly tears fall like a light rain,
Into my pillow where they slowly seep. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 9:24:14 PM | Spiritual Healing
You know when you get that urge to help
And then you feel good about yourself
Its spiritual healing
You know when you get that tingle down the spine
When you read a certain line
Its spiritual healing
You know when everything is lost
And you find the thing you almost forgot
Its spiritual healing
Helping someone else heals oneself
Its spiritual healing
And im feeling like i need to laugh or cry
Feelings i have kept inside
Are coming out
Its spiritual healing
YEah Yeah | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 9:29:24 PM | very moving portal, keep em comin, i love to see more
cat >^..^< | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 10:00:40 PM | One two three
Words metaphorically
Analysed and critisized
Thats part of the tree
Branch off in the distance
My imaginary
A visual to a place , my home , I share
Its filled with green pastures and litters of animals
And an atmosphere far from the industry
Its 1000 acres of fresh ever-growing land , just for you and me
When we come home , its far from the city
Close to our friends and family
My reality. | |
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Posted: 5/23/2005 10:39:53 PM | Cats, Your work expresses much emotion, keep that touch in your writes!
Angel, That goes for you too! great writes going on in here!
Portal, Hi, love the one about the planets.
Kseej, Glad you like it, your story hit home to many. The poem just felt right.
Cross, Almost done with your thread, your a very interesting writer. Great to read!
Hope I didn't forget anyone. Can't wait to read again soon!!!!!!!!!
Sam | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 2:32:14 PM | Friends
Friends are great to have at anytime because they care,
And you know that you can tell them anything,
Because they will always be there,
Which can make any heart sing.
As you grow up, friends come and go,
But some friends stay for quite a while,
And those friends should know,
How to make a heart truely smile.
No matter if you're happy or sad,
Friends are there to turn the darkness into light,
Which makes your heart extremely glad,
Because they made everything right.
Friends are there when you've had enough,
Because they can take away the pain,
Which really isn't all that tough,
Even when tears fall like rain.
A friendly hug helps to dry those tears,
Making you smile and feel really great,
Taking away all those empty fears,
Even when it seems too late.
That friendship we have is growing strong,
And let's hope it doesn't end at all,
Because my heart is alive with song.
Kseej and Angel, this one goes out to you both,   | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 2:39:08 PM | | @Catsmeow...Absolutely beautiful. I will cherish it always.. | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 2:40:43 PM | | tyvvvm angel, im tryin to think positively instead of negatively from now on, and that was just the first attempt at a positive poem. More will follow. | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 2:47:06 PM | | @Catsmeow...Great thinking Cat..Positive thinking will give you positive things..Can't wait to read more of your writings...How was your day today? | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 2:49:23 PM | | My day went alright, work was oftly slow today, but I made it through. lol. im just not a morning person. I just wonder what Kseej will think of this poem. | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 3:04:02 PM | | @Catsmeow...He will love it..It will be a fabulous end to his very long day.. | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 3:11:11 PM | | Well, that's good to hear, i wonder if he'll get the chance to read it tonight | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 4:05:58 PM | | @sam, tyvvm for those kind words about my thread. It has helped me become a better writer. and hopefully you can continue to post here your thoughts. | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 4:23:00 PM | | @Cat..I'm sure he will be able to read it tonight. He'll be on ina while..Like I said he's going to love it......... | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 5:05:48 PM | | Hey I've been reading here...so many poems cats!! wow!! lol I enjoy Friends :) like the many others you've written ...keep it up!!! and not to worry I'm reading them ;-) | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 5:31:17 PM | | "Friends" was truely written from your heart Cat..Thank you..........Keep up the good work!! | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 5:41:01 PM | | tyvm angel, I wanted to prove to Kseej that i do have a happy side, I just need to express it more often | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 5:42:59 PM | hi angel and cat
Kookaburra
One day there was light , And water began to glisten
All the while , a kookaburra laughed as i had to listen
Was he laughing at me? or a funny bird that couldnt fly in his tree
His name was emu , the biggest bird ive seen
Then a****too flew right over me
All the while , a kangaroo hopped right passed as my head was in the sky
Cheeky bugger , he made the emu cry
Then out of the blue came this****too
Again he flew right over me head
If i had a weapon of choice he would be dead
Survival of the fittest the white man said
But my best mate told me we could all live in harmony
That we would less build , if we learned peace with ourselves
Lucky land of Oz for it has plenty left , soon to be swallowed by the sea
For the kookaburra laughs because he believes. | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 6:02:01 PM | | Hi Portal..Great one!! I will say it again, I love writing that leaves the between the line unspoken..Wonderful... | |
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Posted: 5/24/2005 6:02:10 PM | hello again portal, how are ya hun??
nicely written. and its true that the kookaburra does laugh. I remember a song back in elementary school about kookaburra
kookaburra sits in the old gum tree,
merry merry king of the bush is he,
laugh kookaburra laugh
kookaburra gay your life must be.
kookaburra sits int he old gum tree,
eating all the gumdrops he can see,
laugh kookaburra laugh,
kookaburra gay your life must be. | |
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