| The Rain Shrouds Posted: 7/31/2009 6:04:03 AM | | this is really good suff! very vivid, cant wait for the next bit i think youve got me hooked! lol x | |
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| The Rain Shrouds Posted: 9/18/2009 11:44:56 PM | Heh, guess I should finish this. By this rate 2010 will see the end.  | |
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| The Rain Shrouds Posted: 10/9/2009 8:26:31 PM | | Basically a good story line, yet seemed a little jilted, the nipple began to arouse me, then you cut me off, brought a sense of frustration throughout the whole story, was that your purpose?? | |
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| The Rain Shrouds Posted: 10/17/2009 10:47:37 PM | | You know something Sav, I liked this, and even read it all the way through....:D | |
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