| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/8/2008 8:09:36 PM | Just one rambling moment.....maybe not even a ramble....but
Have you ever read anything that captivated you so much you literally forgot to breathe?
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/8/2008 10:13:43 PM | | So.....Kairi....I'm a bit of a Blue October fan (hence my headline...AND my Screen name) and I've left you a little song in the lyrics thread..... tis a good song..... a good angry one, lol....check it out if you don't know it already. :) | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 12:07:19 AM | | I love that song!!! awesome, thanks for recommending it. I posted "Hate Me" in the lyrics forum, it's what I call my "emo" song =0) | |
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Posted: 1/9/2008 2:14:40 AM | She stands back,
motionless.
Waiting for him
she waits.
she wants to leave,
but he has her heart
and without it,
she cannot breathe
they laugh together
and love together
but is he truly loving?
no.
they are just friends.
she smiles at him
with her eyes
with her soul
and he has her, he knows
what he can have
he does not want
so she sits, and waits
yet they are just friends
no woman can love him
like she does
she tries to rationalize
her nails dig deep
puncture her skin,
until she bleeds
her sanity slips
her mind trailing pain
streaming down her arms
yet he doesn't know
and she will not tell
how truly strong she feels
but how silly!
they are just friends
she tries not to cry
not ready to leave him
yet she knows she must
to save herself
she gasps awake,
grasping the air
as darkness spreads
on this day she dreads
the day of reckoning
a day of goodbyes
a day when she will look
straight in his eyes
and before she leaves him
forever behind,
she needs the strength to say
i love you | |
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| Sounds of Blue
Posted: 1/9/2008 4:10:16 AM | God, she just stood there
In an interlaced mind meld
Where comprehension was moot
What just happened was surreal afterall
You know, that unexplain phenomena
The kind of moment that you're *sure*
You've only "just dreamed" .
And so, shaking her head......
She kept walking....
like she did every single morning
Because while that dream was amazing and all
Life goes on.....
There is more to the story...
It just has to be written still.
Because, she realized it was more
Than a pretend moment in her head
She smiles a little bigger
Hopes with more faith
And dreams a little bit bigger now.
Who knew you would make that big a difference.... | |
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| Sounds of Blue
Posted: 1/9/2008 4:30:39 AM | I stood by the ocean
the angry ocean
as it pounded
the beach in an endless rage
I stood there
motionless
breathless
devoid of emotion
bracing against the wind
waiting for a moment
for a pause from the rage
for a moment of reason
to allow me a breath
or a syllable
but she would not abate
She is so formidable
when the horizon is dark
don't underestimate her power
She will devour your mortal soul... | |
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| Sounds of Blue
Posted: 1/9/2008 4:45:17 AM | So, I'm sippin' my morning coffee and I see that I have a new visitor.....welcome Laughs.....and thank you....thank you very much for visiting this lil corner of the pond....love the write and I do hope to see more!!
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| Sounds of Blue
Posted: 1/9/2008 5:26:20 AM | ^^Aww cheers Blue, the thread name just sucked that blurb right outa me...
The ocean is like a woman
learn her tempo and her mood
roll and sway with her rhythm
and she'll be good to you
I saw the sea a week ago
and it wasn't what I'd call blue
It's bad enough it's pouring rain
without it being bedtime too.
G'nite. | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 6:09:50 AM | devilish hues of red and gold,
broke his heart took his soul,
laid him bare on this barren land,
his grasp on life torn from his hand,
visions swam inside his head,
blurred his vision with the unseen dead,
lost and alone beside an altar of stone,
he cowered beneath it and felt so alone,
unable to walk, to run, or crawl,
he felt himself starting, starting to fall,
try as he might he tried in vain,
to shut out the feelings of unbearable pain,
the devils hands pinned him to the ground,
and laughed in his face at what he had found,
tore out his heart and crushed his soul,discarded his body in a pitch black hole,
the devil gazed up at the fire filled sky,
screamed out aloud and emitted a cry,
damn you all, damn you all forever,
dont you realize l will live forever,
look into your hearts and into your minds,
l own the fear that you will find,
so when you dance with the devil just he and you,
you will never see the colours of green and blue,
the devilish hues of red and gold,
are he last that you see before he claims your soul
just thought l would put a different twist on this..love to sit and read your work
it puts my mind at ease, you paint beautiful pictures with your words thankyou | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 7:32:17 AM | Luv.....you know....you just never know who's reading.....heh...sort of a voyeuristic place huh? I love your write. I am humbled....truely....
Thank you....and welcome.....please, rest here or rant here or whatever here anytime!
~Blue | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 10:02:41 AM | Good thread Blue Sunshine,, wish you luck girl..
Lost For Words
My mind is far from what I do
With paper and pen I write to you
So many times just in my mind
I've searched for words I cannot find
Words to bring you back to me
A second chance to set you free
We had something sweet and strong
A love that didn't last too long
Alone we've both been for a while
I made you laugh you made me smile
You showed me love right from the start
Somehow I couldn't share my heart
I returned your love so warm and free
But things just were not right for me
There were just somethings we could not say
Lost for words like I am today
There was no closure there for me
I need these things to set me free
Papers far more patient than man
To express my self the best I can | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 11:32:24 AM | Hi Blue, so glad to see you have found a place of your own, and there are some truly amazing writes found on the pages thus far. Yes, Wabbit has been sitting back gathering courage to place something here, hope you don't mind.
From Black To Blue
Swirling swiftly down
into a hole of black
grasping with feeble hands
trying to stop this spiral yet a body goes slack
With hooded tired eyes
skyward they do look
yet strength is minimal
this fall of what was left it took
Shimmering through darkness
dawns a slight hue
a faint smile plays across lips
for to a needing spirit shines an incandescent sky of blue
A fluttering within occurs
strength builds to leave this blackness behind
curiousity forges a will
to blue skies travels a mind
Peacefulness floods in entirety
a climb back up now takes hold
thoughts of leaving this black for blue
leaves her no longer feeling cold.
Much luck with your thread...Peace  | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 11:36:54 AM | Lilangel.... Hey! Thanks for stopping by my little part o the pond... I do hope you come back from time to time and post....love the writes.....fits perfectly here!
Wabbit!!!! Seriously, finding courage? to post here? Don't be silly...you're amazing as always.....I'm so glad you stopped in. Love your write.....of course, that's a given, isn't it :) Please, please, come and post whenever you like..... Muah! | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 11:51:28 AM | (Aside: Blue, I absolutely LOVE Blue October! They're lyrics and music are incredible!)
The following poem was written by me, not Blue October 
The Essence of Me
I look at you and feel myself melting
I'm just sugar in the rain for you
taking on another form, flowing,
moist with passion and desire
running through my brain like a river.
A word or look from you can heal or wound
senses overflowing, lost in thought;
thoughts of you overtaking me,
questions that are not asked go unanswered,
fear of tranquility, fear of releasing
emotions; they must be held in check.
You take me to a place I am afraid to go,
a place in the dark where there is pain,
a place I closed up a long time ago,
a look from you can send me there -
alone in the darkness, a familiar place.
But when you smile, my spirits rise
lifting up on a cloud, airy and free,
with no fear of falling; releasing the
essence of me, unafraid to go ahead. | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 11:59:55 AM | Well, lookit you lil miss Skydancer! Love the write...absolutely!!!!
And I have to agree with you..Blue October.......amazing lyrics......
Are you a song writer too? Really, you're quite good!
Ahhhhh, I love my place..... you guys frikkin' rawk!! | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 12:12:11 PM | Thanks for the compliment!!
I used to write lyrics for a little group I was with, and I also played guitar and wrote some of my own music, but that was many moons ago. Now, I just tickle the keys on my piano when the mood grabs me, bang out a tune or two, and that's it. I write a lot more than I play. If I didn't release my emotions on paper, I'd explode 
I love your place too! It's a wonderful place to be | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 2:13:43 PM | | You're very welcome! :) I just like writing....it's paint. And there's nothin' wrong with paint. Also though, you're right....I don't know what I did before I started to write regularly....but....it's food for the soul and it heals and well......so much more eh! :) | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 2:48:04 PM | a vagabond traveling the tracks
looking for that train to take her back
to when it was
that great expectation of love
the love that springs from a young girls heart
with visions of ever after and never part
been so long but I remember
its a long way still till december
to see you play with words
reminds me of the days
when i used to do the dance
another place another time
but all in all I did the same line after line
the nights of esctasy
when lovers join and set their boundaries free
those days still live in me
funny how fate deals
cut of the cards and your back in the real
think I've found the place
you my dear put a smile upon my face | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 2:52:19 PM | It was the way he looked at me
Like I was so transparent
I never knew I was until right then
Never had I wanted to be either
So, I bared my soul
Over-shared to an extent
I didn't even wonder if it would be OK
I knew that it would be
It was the way that he listened
Content to hear my words
I couldn't talk enough
Or tell too many stories
There was no such thing as
Dominating the conversation
So, I talked....and tried to let him
But he insisted I not stop
And so I didn't.
It was the way he crafted words
I admired him for that
Pleading
Painting
Bringing life because of his words
I knew that there was no going back
What is just desktop ink to some
I see as a perfect work of art
God I couldn't get enough of his gallery
It was the way he made me pause
He said “I knew” [insert verb, noun, etc]
And in a way, maybe I did
But...it was the way he allowed me to reflect
He said I affect people
In so many words
What he didn't know
Was the way he affects me
Then again, he probably does know
Don't you..... | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 2:57:12 PM | P.S.
ok got to make it longer...
There once was a man named sam
made love like cutting a ham
end of story
left him there contemplating glory
ever see a speeding bullet fly ... grin | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/9/2008 2:58:19 PM | Thanks Blue,
I enjoy all your writes and the many others, I'll try and spend a bit more time back here again, .
I like to read and I like to write.
There's not much more to do at night.
Sit behind a screen and read profiles.
That gets tiresome after a while...
Some are good and some are bad,
some make you happy
some make you sad.
but the friends out there are one of a kind
While most of the men have one thing in mind.
Just thinking out loud again.
Have a good day.. | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/10/2008 1:10:56 AM | | haha Angel! I love ur poem... i know how you feel =0) | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/10/2008 4:35:19 AM | Beautiful mind blues...
My life was quite blue
till the day I met you
took a while till I knew
what I wish wasn't true
You brightened the day
with your soft smiling way
Yes, you moved here to stay
but they took you away
Such a beautiful soul
messed up two and three-fold
delusions best left untold
left me feeling so cold.
I wish you well my dear... | |
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| Sounds of Blue...
Posted: 1/10/2008 8:54:20 AM | I got up this morning
With a smile on my face
put on my red teddy
of satin and lace.
I first had my shower, shampoo and shave
this day was to be special for this man I had saved.
I put on my stockings my garters of red
I knew that he liked them
By somethings he had said.
I combed my hair
every hair was in place
I put on some make up
wore a smile on my face
I put on my little skirt
of leather and frills.
I knew in my heart ,
it would give him some thrills.
I thought that today.maybe special for me
and for him, exciting I'd make it be
this man and I, we had dated before
what happened between us, can't happen no more
I guess I will wait, and see if he phones
if not I guess, i'll be waiting a lone.
My heart it was pounding
The way he used to make it do
The butterflies they all came back
so that's nothing new.
I'll end this poem, before I start to cry
I've been stood up again, and I'll never know why.
How many have went through the same on a dating site?
This was kinda personal.. so true, | |
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